Okay so you're probably never coming back here.
From what I've seen, I agree with one thing and disagree with the rest. HP Grass over HP Ice is a good idea, and I'll change it.. now pretty much.
Now for the things I disagree with. Normally I'd be totally happy with your suggestion with Scizor over Mienshao, but then while playing I realized, "Holy shit Mienshao's amazing."
This team isn't named "Timing is Everything" just cause it sounds nice, Mienshao's failing at Fake out can be easily turned into a good thing by switching based on what they did to make it fail. Them protecting as you say is common is, again, a good thing. If they don't, they're either stupid or running a choice set, and this to me is good information to get. I completely agree with your priority point, but Hi Jump Kick, even though it has nasty consequences if it misses (like the protect that my fake out was "wasted" on) dents so many things that it simply cannot be disregarded. Also! Jumping down a bit, you say that every team needs hazards. Well.. why? When you have something with magic bounce and 2 U-turners (both which are quite fast,) the game will, 90% of the time, be stealth on both, stealth on them, or no stealth at all, as it's rare somebody kills Espeon before getting their ever-so-precious rocks out anyway.
Gonna pop into Espeon/Porygon2 next. You ask me where my special wall is, and then you say get rid of Light Screen.
..uh what.
You also shouldn't ask Porygon2 where my special wall is right into his face, it makes him sad. Just because he has full investment in Def and HP instead of the standard 76 in Sp def (which I may change,) 374 HP and 340 Special defense makes me wonder exactly why you think he needs resistance to ice/water or why you think he isn't a good special wall, even though physical is his main suit. Also! Though the type synergy isn't the best it could be, Gliscor and Porygon2 can still be friends, and are quite good friends. (They've having tea next sunday as a matter of fact.) Porygon2 hates trick, right? I doubt anybody wants to have a Toxic orb tricked to them. And on the toxic note, guess who really really hates being hit by Toxic? And guess who loves it? I'll admit it may not be the best, but I'd sooner change gliscor than porygon2. (Also Specs Tornadus has a 0% chance to OHKO Pory2 with Focus Blast.)
..Hm, I thought I had more. Regardless, I do like your suggestion on HP type, and it's true that I get really really fucked in rain unless I play extremely smart (and I may do a bit better in an environment where DrizzleSwim isn't legal,) and thanks for taking the time to give a more in depth rate. I do use Scizor/Rotom in some teams, and hell I love Ferrothorn (though I only use him in stally teams,) so I hope you don't think I'm being all "pfft, noob doesn't know what he's doing, suggesting scizor, ugh," cause I'm not.
...Now I wonder why I did all this when I realize you probably won't even read it.