Kingd353

omg gues i just realized something look at me rose and color's types ^^ rose = squirtle color = charmander dwayne = bulbasaur.... fuck i'm the starter no one likes >.>

it's not an argument rose argument implies tempers being flaired if anything it's a discussion

your not being rude at all i understand what your saying but keep in mind this is supposed to be an entertaining story don 't u think it will stick out to people that the move sets are alil to much like a meta game move sets? idk about u guys but personally that would make the story harder to enjoy for me and i'm not implying that the move sets have to be brute force either an umbreon focused on avoiding damage while slowly watching it's opponent die of poisoning only to kill it off with a payback sounds awesome but still the rest of them sound to much like poke's id' run into playing showdown online >.> it's like he had more power in mind then entertainment

dude.... this is a story... not the meta game >.>

i can't answer for the others but i'd be down right livid if my character died i'm looking forward to being a main character if i'm killed of i'm gonna cry >.>

actually move combinations have been used in battling before ash uses combination moves in battle on occasion but your right they are mostly found in contests witch is hwy i gave my character them to begin with my character is a past sinoh champion there are pokemon contest in sinoh that plus the fact that i have a unique personality and i'm supposed to bea bigshot past champion are why my character thinks up these move combinations oh and who's person? lol

yeah sure just add more unnessesary combinations further lessening the uniqueness of our characters >.>

oh also jester i'm sorry if u considure this question rude but why is your name jester... isnt' jester normally a guy's name?

ok 2 notes here 1. rose was right every character in this story is her best friend.... lol 2. what she said abouit me worries more specificly the end about turning me int o a blabbering idiot it reminds me of a fear i had but didnt' want to adress because i didnt' wanna be a nuesence... well i hope i'm not a nuecense for giving josh more crap to read but josh.. please don't turn me into a brock (babbling idiot) yes i said i wanted my character to be a flirt but there is a differeance between a flirt and a brock.... do u get what i'm saying? i'm a flirt with common sense...... so yeah..... again sorry ifi 'm being to much of a bother but just trying to make sure reading this doesn't become a nightmare to me x.x sorry and thanks for taking your time to read my complaints

i love how everyone is just jumping on the the move combination list... i'm sorry if this soudns like bitching but u guys are making my character and that one guy with the pawnyard character's less unique now this was our thing and now your characters are just magicaly boosted because u stole our idea >.> if everyone is gonna get move combinations like this atleast dont' have them use it until after me and what's his face's characters do move combinations first make it a character development thing so the 2 people who originally thought of this idea get the credit and early superiority they deserve... again sorry if i sound like i'm bitching.... i just feel... well robbed in a way.... x.x forgive my pussy ass ranting

team combinations with rose- electric tornado- when her pidgeot uses gust or wirlwind jolt will use thunder or pinmissle usually thunder into the tornado formed to add that much more dammage on our unlucky opponent electric hydro cannon- water conducts electricity so if her blastois knows hydro cannon or hydro pump jolt will add a thunder to give it that extra zap! Flash fire- if abilities are a thing in this comic every time flame and arcanine are in a battle together flaem starts the battle by using her most powerful fire attack on arcanine smoke screan- flame's flamethrower clashign with blastoise's hydro pump/cannon the resulting explosion of steam can be used if we need to escape things this last one may sound stupid but it was more of a idea then a flushed out combination move it's said that when one is in grave danger their body enters a state of adrenilane that increases their strength and nspeed so if flame and persion are ever in battle together and persion is near defeat i'd have flame use lfamethrower at ti's tail simulating a near death situation for it (death by fire) and giving it a short boost this boost would usually be followed by a slash from persion since thats the move that takes advantage of hte increased speed and power that an adrenaline boost would give u

i was llooking back through old posts and i noticed i made an error with my reaction to surge i said this guy looks cool and i must becoem better then him but since in this story i'm a past elite 4 champion that reaction makes no sense so for lt. surge make my reaction to him no reaction also i'm curious do u plan on using that elite 4 back story thing? like are the peopel in kanto gonna know i use to be champion? are u gonna have my character hide it for some reason? are the kanto elite 4 gonna know me? i'm leaving these thigns up to u since it's your story -edit- didnt' knwl where in that paragraph to put thsi lol i looked back to see if i made any other errors and i just remembered i also said i'd hesistate if i ran into a trainer with more experiance them me i also included the elite 4 and champion here well new elite 4 members (yes there are some elite 4 members who are new t o the job i don't remembetr witch ones they are though) will not make me hesitate since i was a past champion only the most well known elite 4 will phase me (lace agetha) and even then it won't phase me enough to be noticable since well... yeah i'm a past champ lol i kept making errors that made this seem like it was my characters first journey >.> sorry hopefully i'm not causing u so much trouble with these late corrections of mine

i'm not the best at describing things but i'll try my best to describe my poke's combinations also rose i have ideas for combinations with your poke's but i want u to give me permsion to make those before i actually post them i'm to lazy to type shit that won't matter in the end ok nwo for the solo poke combination list jolt's thunder spike barrage- jolt literally uses pin missile and htunder bolt at the same tiem the attack will look like yellow pin missles and is ment to peirce through protect and pokemon known to have thick skin/hides while still being able to electricute them sorry if that makes no sense think of it as takign a siringe to peirce through your rubber clothes and the siringe is filled with electricity.... does that make sense? i hope it does.... miss puff's heatseaking roll out- miss puff uses roll out and using her psychic powers she acts like a heat seaking missle constantly following the opponent this move is used to keep up with pokemon who are faster then her and hitting flying type pokemon that are air bound miss puff's sacrafical heat seaking roll out- same thing as the regular manuvor but she uses fire blast first the roll out then runs into the fire blast causing her to become a flaming ball this will hurt her immensly but will make the move that much more devistating it is a last resort i only use this manuvor when miss puff wants to do this she will signal that she wants to do it by puffing up angerly rocky's silver powder- rocky uses silver wind and mix's in it's sleep powder this is as plain as it sounds.. it's just 2 moves at once showing rocky's mastery of powder moves even if he only has 2 at the end lol King D's air D- surf megahorn combonation king d uses his surf's titlewave to launch himself into the air doing a kamakazi like megahorn to airborn poke's this is a last resort for if nidoking has to fight an airborn opponent

shit looks like i'm gonna have a bad relationship with the majority of the characters in the story x.x

i just noticed something.... um guys adding your characters to the story josh said in an earlier post that he needs to know how your characters would react to the main trio (me josh and rose) you should all really go to the first page read up our character's personalities and post your reactions to us and make his story making alil easier >.>

josh if u need help thinking of clever roles for the other characters feel free to ask me for help i might not be good at writing detailed stories but i'm decent at makign character roles

or we could save time and give the answers to questions that we can answer i'm sure josh has better things to do the nanswer ever small thing we don't notice

"stares at rose's pokemon team" um.... rose...... wtf happened to your team?

actually someone did complain.... ok i'm convinced u didn't read all the messages in this forum x.x the authro told him to replace 1 of his future gen poke's with a kanto poke the only acceptions allowed are pokemon who are evolutions of gen 1/2 pokemon as for making a dark team with just kanto pokemon you're right youcan't the best you can do is a ghost/dark team using gen 1 and 2 pokes a gengar a mistravous an umbreon a sneezle your pawniard and some generec extra pokemon

^ looks like someone wasn't paying attention to past posts this story is supposed to take place in kanto and because of this your only allowed 1 pokemon from a higher region your entire team is invalid >.>

....... "sneaks out of the forums" i think i'm gonna hide in a corner somewhere....

o.o i like the new girl her personality is cute and i want to cuddle her........

lunar's appearance actually just gave me a good idea for where his character enters i apologize in advance if your the kind of writer who doesn't like others telling u how to do your work this is just a suggestion based off the description of his character he is a bad guy and a mercinary and we already agreed that part of my character's backstory is that he was sinnoh league champion perhaps his character can appear as an antagonist and the one who killed my lucario? it kinda makes sense maybe some trainer who was weaker then me wanted my lucario gone and hired him to take it out?

sure you can describe me as black that's what i am after all lol oh and i actually never named my original lucario so i guess we'll base it's name off of my current lucario and call her auriol (aura + ariel)

no need toapologize ddue art takes a while some times ^^ stories are art right?..... anyway point is it's all good idc how long u take just enjoy yourself while making it and make my character fucking awesome ^^ lol