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  1. Brass-Wall Team "Alright, here's the plan." said Brass, in his gravelly voice. He now slammed his ground into the Earth, causing a load of stone pillars to shoot up from the ground. "Attach targets to those, I will focus on moving them . Dru, you can also do some in a similar matter. Let's get down to training!" Scout Team. "Oh finally some of you knuckleheads arrived." shouted the Death Knights as a handful of Skeletons wandered out of the woods. Steele stopped his charge. "Shit! Nero, change of plans. Hold your ground!" The Skeletal Warriors made their shambled their way over, wielding a menagerie of cruel weaponry, and they wore little armour. The dry clanking of their bones was unsettling. The Death Knight Himself made no advance he sat and watched, seemingly willing the undead to fight.
  2. Steele- Scout team "I agree, I will go at him straight on, you try and sneak around. He knows how I fight, so I don't have much of a chance of landing a blow on him." Steele said, a sure look on his face. "I am going now." he said as he dashed forward, aiming a blow at the Knight's head. ((Flux just so you know, Death Knights have no skin, as they are Skeletons in heavy armour for the most part, if I haven't been clear on that, just know it for the future.))
  3. Not saying he has yet, but he might, just musing about what I can do with him lol.
  4. An abandoned Warehouse. This would be the place. Nadia didn't know much of summoning or the Grail, but now was not the time to question things. She had arrived in Seattle not too long ago, not even a week before she got started. She had been staying at an Aunt's house. Luckily for her that Aunt knew Nadia was a troubled child (now adult), and didn't really want anything to do with her. She spent a few days searching for a place to perform the ritual, and settled on an abandoned warehouse on the edge of town. She spent another day inscribing the summoning circle on the floor, in the middle of the warehouse. It was now the day. She brought with her an old family heirloom, apparently part of a bowstring, from the long forgotten past. Who it belonged to Nadia couldn't say, but apparently it was a great hero's once. She placed it on a makeshift contraption she made to pull it taut. Putting one end of it in each of the clips on either side. She placed her hands on the circle, it felt like the natural thing to do, and let her mana flow into the summoning circle. It began to glow in reaction, and grew brighter and brighter, until all of a sudden, person started to rise from the floor. THe light was so intense Nadia couldn't see the person until the summoning finished. Before her stood an Old Man, clad in ancient Chinese Armour. He wielded a magnificent bow. He looked easily in his 60's or early 70's. "Are you the pup who summoned me, the servant Archer?" He said.
  5. Well, you would think a government group would outfit us pretty well. Especially since while my power is extremely powerful, it does have some very real costs. (not to mention Viktor doesn't like using it if he doesn't have to. He knows what he is does to people is immensely painful to the people he attacks with it. I am just wondering if he will delve to far into the darkness and basically become like Hades, where he loses all sense of what his morals use to be. It is up to me to decide which path he goes down, and most of them look really ugly. His Devotion to the people he loves, could end up being the thing that fully corrupts him and makes him the actual monster he already thinks he is.)
  6. Only thing I don't care for is the paralzation thing with his claws. It is weird for a bird-creature to have posion in it's talons. (Unless Harpies do, but I don't believe it is the case) but up to Flux, I think it is a bit too powerful for it to be Full Paralzation when there is no real cost to you other then having to get into close range, as even a small nick would cause the poison to hold. You have a lot of tools to get to people quickly, so I think it is a bit too powerful imo. Otherwise, really enjoy the character, glad to have ya aboard.
  7. I would highly doubt either me or Ark's character would be good choices, especially after our, awkward as hell, basically staring contest. That and we are in a Government run group. I think Typh's character might be (it is hard to say, we got a lot of intersting types in here, but not so many of them are talkative outgoing variety, though, they could better answer as they are their characters and all.)
  8. Alright alright, sorry Teacher mode doesn't really shut off for me around here, mostly since a lot are newer as of late. Glad to hear you are up to it then, go right ahead. (I have a thing for playing weird very off the wall characters, so not like I have any room to stop you lol.), Really looking forward to how she fits into the world.
  9. oh sorry lol. Now I got ya lol. (speaking of which I should probably move the Character Profiles onto the main post in Graterras, they are sort buried in there at this point).
  10. Only things I will point out, is I really don't understand what ability does. Could I get a quick synopsis of it lol? (Like it doesn't mention you being able to kill others with it, but then it does something completely different in your background, so I am just a tad confused.....) Otherwise, I think the problem of the personality is more that it doesn't give her much room to grow as a character, instead of not being a strong one. It might actually be too strong for the wrong reasons. She would have no desire to interact with any of the characters (the way I see it.), thus I believe it would be good to tone it down a little. SHe needs to be able to interact with the other characters rather than retreat away from them. I think you will have a lot more fun with her if she was just a bit looser in her rigidity towards other people. (not saying she has to be outgoing, because my character Viktor certainly isn't, but try to have a level where you are a bit of a loner, where you can actually interact.) And welcome to the Reborn Roleplaying Forum, I am sure you will enjoy your time here. (and pretty sure FLux will let you in, but this is his RP, so up to him.), don't worry about being a perfect roleplayer too much. I am here to help out as well as many others.
  11. That too lol (so yea, that isn't helping......), I might eventually get it....but it will take some time lol.
  12. "Perhaps I should show you, it isn't a power that can easily be explained. However certain aspects of it are dangerous, others are not." he said as he pulled a small knife, he cut his wrist enough that it would bleed. He pulled out a cross made of iron. He focused, part of it disappearing, while the wound quickly started to clot. "I can control other's and my own blood. I could for instance reach out and clot every major blood vessel to your Brain, causing you too die. However, it would most likely heavily wound me." VIktor had a morose look on his face. "It has changed me, knowing I can reach out and kill anyone I want to, or save anyone I want to. But it has changed me more to know, that I can never see my family again because I am a monster. I will work with you and your people, but only so long as they are safe, especially from myself."
  13. "Everyone, get to Annie now! I will cover you." shouted Byron. He needed to hold the path for them, that way they could get to the tree and at least have a chance to survive. He would hold his ground for now, firing off shotgun shell after shotgun shell.
  14. The Death Knight - Scout Team The Knight didn't flinch, only waiting for Nero to approach, he didn't know what Nero was planning. It was only his crazy fighting style that was the reason he stood still. He made no atempt to dodge, He only flicked his whip towards Nero's Leg Quickly. The Black Umbral Tentacle surged towards him, the spikes threatening to plunge into his flesh. He now aimed his nasty sword at him as well taking a downward slash. Steele Steele bit his lip, the force of the punch had knocked the wind out of his body. He struggled to regain his breathe the smell of death filling the air, made him queasy. He stood, regaining his footing, and his posture. He waited to entirely catch up before making another move.
  15. Well, Graterras is getting more interesting, perhaps you guys will get to know more about Orpheaus then I orignally wanted to share lol.

  16. Byron fired off a few shots from God's Hand. 1. Head, 2,3. Heart. New Target. 4, Head. 5,6 Heart. He placed it away, instinct telling him to jump in for the others. He jumped down from the tree into the swarm of monsters now wielding the Preacher. "Ethnic, everyone get to me!" he shouted, as he began unloading shots into the beasts. A green aura was growing around him, power would be at his fingertips.
  17. Orpheaus-Frontliners "Xavier, I fight because I am forced to. I am not sure I can explain it all in a short amount of time, but if I don't fight......my people will die." Orpheaus said, looking forlorn. "Remember, not all of us fight because we want to." Brass-Wall Team "I am afraid we don't Helze, however, I think I can help, I think Dru can as well." Brass said, his voice crackling like the Earth. "I am glad to hear the training is going well, I knew I made a good choice picking you Helze, I also knew you would do well Jupiter. Any Let's all get moving, I have a plan for this advanced training." "Alright Brass, I suggest we get going so we can get whatever this knucklehead's plan is together." said Jupiter, a playful smile on her face.
  18. Ah, it is fine now that I understand. Sorry lol. I can be jumpy at times, thanks for clearing it up for me lol. Should probably read the edit now that you did, since I saw the orignal draft of it.
  19. I am not trying to be a pessimist or a jerk here, but I really don't like what you just did Strat. No offense, but you are pretty much circumventing the rules about us not getting more powerful down in the depths of hell. (at least to my understanding.) It isn't really cool in my book that you have a random demon you is just willing to give you a bunch of stuff. Why on Earth would anything of the sort happen? Your last post to me is just very fishy, and I really don't like it. (I love how this arcana apprently got rid of you, yet they still seem very willing to help you out, it is very Sue-ish, backwards, and at least to me, feels like you are just trying to make Ethnic more powerful out of nowhere.) If you can explain to me why it isn't I will have no issue with it, but as of now it doesn't sit pretty with me. ((I might be a little miffed because having him give your character a whole arsenal of bullet-proof clothing feels like a personal dig at me, like I did something to make you mad at me or something as my characters are the only ones who even use guns.))
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