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  1. Alright calling it on Aquawind, I am getting bored lol. so Aqua going to have to intro your character later on if we ever find a good time. But for now I am moving the story along, mwahahaha, MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!! BWAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!. *coughs* oh sorry guys, don't know what came over me there......other than evil.....
  2. I will refrain. So far I try to suggest Mons I feel really suit people. I don't know you the best so I don't feel I can pick something good for ya. Good luck though, hopefully people see this and shoot some stuff your way so you have a bit more mons to mull over and think of playing lol.
  3. Don't be, especially if you are new to RPing. I have a feeling you are. and either way we all do it by accident sometimes. I had one in this very RP that was, because I didn't execute what I was trying to do properly. Either way, I rewrote him a bit by removing the parts that were Sue-ish, and he was then accepted. I suggest reading that Link I posted, it may help ya out. And just remember I am not picking on you, I am just trying to make sure everybody has a good time. (Sues are actually not only annoying for other players, they are actually boring to play, and quickly grow old, so this is as much for you as it is everybody else. good luck with your character if you continue to try and join us for the RP, otherwise feel free to read along.)
  4. Just a few things, there aren't levels in this rp for pokemon. 2. your character is a huge Sue. One shouldn't be from an alternate dimension or a Prophisized(not sure how on earth to spell this lol.) hero. THis gives your character strange qualities that scream Sue. One should never be clearly above and beyond their allies, or ever said to do something of note, this automatically makes them better and more important than everyone else's characters, and ruins the point of the RP. The fact that you made him shiny also isn't a good sign. Since being shiny doesn't really do anything but change colour, it is an underhanded way to say, look at my character, he is better than all of yours. Shinies being a rare thing in the Pokemon universe, even if it was not your intent, that is what it comes off like, so I also recommend changing that. http://www.pokemonreborn.com/forum/index.php?showtopic=5403 here this link has some info on character writing, it also has a section on Mary Sues, and what they are so you know what I am getting at. I am really not trying to be a jerk, but your character will be very toxic to the rp in this state, and definitely won't be accepted until it sees some revision. Also just a question, did you use any of the Character Creation Methods that are in the Original Post, or did you just pick a Mon for your character? (This isn't condemning you, there where just specified ways to for your species to get picked in the Original post.)
  5. Oh and after today, I will be moving along the story if Aqua doesn't post. Pretty sure I said this already, but just want to make sure you guys know, get ready for some insanity.
  6. Well logically that would put out the Flames if you weren't careful, and maybe blow them around, but it won't do more damage. SO you could combo them, but it would just spread them around more, not cause them to be more effective.
  7. oh Fire is Hyper Offense, hard to do much else with Fire. Water is also Offensive, however it has a lot of zoning power, and Crowd Control Presence. Water actually has the most versatile (Especially once they reach the Super Status where they get Ice added to their arsenal. This is because Water Templars act the most like Mages, as their Order emphasizes it, which is wh theirs is much more versatile, though not as powerful as the others.)
  8. Not really. The only things are Wind isn't very good at attacking since it is a gaseous element, but it is probably the best support, being able to speed up a user's movements(Attacks and overall movements), blow particles in the air to obscure enemy vision, stop projectiles in mid-air by slowing them down. It can push enemies, which is the only truly offensive force, along with whipping up tornadoes, but those take significantly more time. In Short, Wind isn't like per-say super good on one element, and neither are any of the others. Each has it own strengths and weaknesses (like Wind is super good at support type magic, while bad at Offensive types, though it is still possible to use some offensive forms of it. Earth on the other hand is very good at protective spells and creating objects, It also has a bit of a weakness on the Offensive side as you have to physically use the objects you create to attack. While this means Earth kinda has an advantage over Wind, their other skills more than make up for it, so the fighters will still be on even footing.)
  9. Guys feel free to have your character's converse or whatever in the bar awhile, got to give Aquawind a bit of time to reply. Until then feel free to talk to anybody else.
  10. I think he means a pokemon player controlling another pokemon as if they were a trainer, which I am sure is not the case/
  11. "Aye, right here at The Drunken Clam, me good man. We have warm beds, and a good Breakfast in the morning to set ya off on a full belly" Said Odin with a hearty laugh "We are an Inn too, tends to be a good business when your town starts booming. Great meeting ya Sigurd, I am sure you will fit in around Brinestar just fine. Now if ya don't mind I need to attend to the guests who have yet to get their drinks." With that he stood up, gave a bow to Sigurd and walked off to attend anybody left.
  12. Go ahead. just know your convo could get cut short (let's just say something crazy is about to happen after the Intros.)
  13. Aquawind you still alive out there? We are almost done with the character intros and you are the last one. I don't feel like waiting too long cause I want to gt to the meat of the story. I will give you to the end of Tomorrow (or April 15th.) to reply otherwise I will be dropping your character, which is pretty easy currently as they haven't been intro'd yet. Not trying to be a jerk, I just need to keep the ball rolling and don't have the time to wait around too long.
  14. "Ah, tis a lovely name." Odin said a smile on his face. "Now don't you hesitate to come get me if ya be needing anything, I will go attend to the other guests, do enjoy your stay Miss Helzebeth." he said as he walked off with a smile and a wave. "That is some interesting Silverware, didn't know the steaks were that tough around here" said Odin as he sat across from another Young Man. The man's Swords sat close by to him, Twin Beauties, well balanced, 2 swords Odin could really admire. "The name's Odin Thunderbrew, Welcome to The Drunken Clam friend" Odin said sliding a hearty mug of Thunderbrew Ale his way.
  15. "No need to worry about paying Lass, nobody is paying today if I can help it. I am treating everybody here like family if I can." he said as we went to fetch some bread for the women. He returned with half loaf "Aye isn't the freshest stuff on Graterras, but it is still good." he said as he placed it on the table in front of her, he then took back the Ale and drank in one huge gulp. "Ah, haven't had any of that all day, and if you need anything to wet your whistle there should be plenty of non-alcoholic stuff back there as well." "If you need anything just come and get me I am pretty hard to miss even though I am so short" he said with a chuckle. "Oh, and what is ya name Lass? If you don't mind me prying that is." He said with another hearty chuckle. ((OOC: not really a place in town would accept a Wolf, they actually would in Aurora since they are used as hunting animals up there, but not here. Hunter would probably be outside the town. I will assume Hunter is smart enough to take care of himself though so no harm will come to him. He also as a Ranger pet has a small mental link with you, so he will always be able to find you and now basically how you are feeling. [like he will kinda know you are in danger, but won't know what it is etc.]))
  16. "Tis fine friend, but do remember, the despair will stay unless you are willing to do something about it." with that Odin got up and went to attend to the other guests. He felt sorry for that man, obviously he was down on his luck, so Odin had no hard feelings. Odin saw someone turn to leave, He caught a quick glimpse under her hood enough to know she was a women, but not much else. He tried to approach her as unthreateningly as possible, he didn't want to spook the girl. He had a mug in his hand filled to the brim with Thunderbrew Ale. "Hey Miss, name's Odin Thunderbrew, I would hope you stay here in my families Inn, There is going to be bad storm coming, and I don't want you running around out in the city with no shelter, especially in this cold." He smiled as he moved the mug closer towards her. "Why don't you at least have a drink to warm you up? It would make me feel at least a little better than also allowing you to go out there on an empty stomach." Odin found himself in a place once again where his charity was getting the better of him. But he wanted everybody in this Inn today to feel like part of his family, he wanted them all to feel as if they had a place to loved. He felt it was the proper thing to do on the day he got to see his own son in 6 years. After tending to all the guests he hoped to chat with his son, and hear all about his time in Arbouretium. But for now making sure this women, whoever she was, was safe was his priority.
  17. Odin scoffed "Work must be hard to come by for someone of our talents, eh?" he said with a bit of blush in his face. He pulled a pouch out of a small pocket from the inside of his shirt. "This are where me actual coins be Miss, that other pouch is just a defense against other thieves. Full of a lot of noisy bits, to be just convincing enough , you know?" He laughed. Reading people was Odin's game, and he was stupidly good at it. It was what his job in the bar was in the first place. While his Brother was good at keeping the ledgers and upkeep side of things, Odin was a master at the people side of business. He knew how to make a good deal, get people to think they also got one. Spending a few nights as a bartender never hurt, gave him all the practice he needed. "Well Miss Jeneve, was nice meeting ya, but you haven't got one on Ol'Odin yet, maybe someday though. Though I would prefer if you needed money ya just asked." With this he began to walk away, tossing the small pouch of coins the lovely Elf's way. Odin next began towards another rather interesting fellow. He had silvery hair, which wasn't all that common for people around these parts. Odin figured he was another adventurer, there had been quite a boom of them around here these days. Odin sat down across from the man, and passed him a big mug of Thunderbrew Ale "Greetings friend, I am Odin Thunderbrew, what brings ya to The Drunken Clam tonight?" he said extending his hand outward for a friendly shake.
  18. Odin saw a lovely Elf Maiden at the next table he was bringing a drink too. He sat down across from her as he slid her a drink. "And what brings you to the Shadowed Isles Lass? Someone as pretty as you best be careful round these parts. Though judging by your get up, I am sure you can handle yourself." He paused for a bit as he blushed with a bit of embarrassment, he hoped he didn't offend the lady with that comment. "The name is Odin Thunderbrew, nice to meet you." he said as he reached a hand across the table. His ember eyes burned with the passion of the night.
  19. "Well good meeting you lad, do try and keep good care of yourself." said Odin as he got up to go attend to more patrons around the room.
  20. Odin laughed a hearty laugh "No problem my boy, you say you are a Cinder Knight, eh? You by chance know that gentleman over there?" he said pointing at the Elf he was just talking too. "Not everyday we get 2 Cinder Knights passing through."
  21. The dwarf had a puzzled look on his face. "Paladin eh? You would want my son. He just received his Knighthood and came to visit. I have lived in this village most my life since I had left the Shattered Hills long ago as a wee lad." He laughed his hearty laugh once more "However, mayhaps you should head to Nevermore? It is the capital of the Shadowed Isle, and they have loads of trouble with thieves, corrupt guards, and more unsavoury sorts of people. They are one of the only Cites that truly thrive this time of year here. And if by thrive I mean Politicians ripping off people to make a quick buck and further their corrupt work." He sighed "Welp nice meeting ya lad, I best be off to make sure me guests all have a belly full of a fine drink." with that he stood up, and began to head towards another table. He walked to a young Man. He looked pale, a bit starved and malnourished. "Aye, you look like a Rat's ass after he has dragged it through a pile of refuse. Name's Odin Thunderbrew, and here a little something extra to go with your ale." He placed the Mug down in front of the man, along with half of loaf of bread. It was nothing special, but it would help the man he felt. He sat down at the table across from him, Odin wanted to make sure this man got something in his belly, else he would feel guilty about it. Besides, with the recent influx of wealth coming through Brinestar, there wasn't much harm in being a bit generous to the downtrodden.
  22. He laughed a hardy laugh, it sounded as if it came from the depths of the earth. "It has been with us for at least 100 years now, we Dwarves live a longtime you know. It is a hard life around these parts, but we Thunderbrews make due." he chuckled at this. "Well nice meeting you Drug'Thok, may your stay here be enjoyable, and your travels forunate. I must attend to the other guests." As Odin stood up he gave a bow to the Half-Orc, as he began to walk away. He next saw an Elf. This here was a strange fellow. He seemed to be garbed in the attire of the Cinder Knights. Odin wondered to himself what one of their order was doing out here in the Shadowed Isles, there usually wasn't much that interested them out here. He brought the Elf a glass as he sat down across from him. "The name is Odin Thunderbrew, nice to meet you Cinder Knight, if you don't mind me asking, what brings one of your order our here to lonely little Brinestar?" ((just to be clear, this is to Murdoc's character))
  23. Me or them? Cause if me you can just shoot me a pm, I would like to know what it is, but you are definitely allowed to keep it under-wraps from the other players.
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