Raindrop Valkyrie

Personally for me this is just an example of one of those choices that are trying way to hard in games... the "OOOOOOOOH, LOOK YOU BETTER DECIDE!!! BUT AHHHH!!! BOTH SIDES ARE SHITTY PEOPLE!!!" and it's... really quite the boring choice. Personally I think Skyrim if it didn't invent some of these tropes in gaming, it certainly cemented them, which I'm not overly fond of. I really really dislike the, "You gotta choice between two sides but we're going to make both of your options seem lousy as shit to apparently try and make you feel things when you really just don't care" approach. Like, I don't really have stake in either side... I'm just some random dude who got locked up. That opening intro is hardly enough cause to make me really give a shit about either side. ((though it really does try to make the Imperials seem super shitty in a very forced way by making that one commander lady just try and execute you for no reason at all. Hell, she doesn't even execute THE LEADER OF THE FUCKING ENEMY FACTION THAT THEY CAPTUUUUUURED BEFORE YOU RANDOM UNKNOWN ASS. Like, yes... let's start with the random fucking horse thief and the random dude we accidentally picked up and not Ulfric. Like that takes me out of that entire moment cause it makes... no... fucking... sense.)) it just feels like so artificial that I don't want to choose either option at all, cause it's like... "I'll just let you pieces of garbage fight each other into oblivion you're not my problem."

Somebody needs to get our mages glasses...

"What on earth was that Saffron? Did... your spear do that?" and where can I get one of those? Must've been the ability of the spear it was rumored to be of great power. Meredith was a bit bummed. She wanted to knock that woman off her quite literal high horse... since you know... it was flyin' up in the air and stuff. But, she'd take it. Further she had to take control of the battlefield. She needed to defend her unit. She saw the Troubadour hiding in the woods, it was the perfect opportunity to hit the damn healer now that her Pegasus knight guard was worm food. "I hope my throwin' arm is still in good shape." she said running forward and putting all of her might behind her javelin. "DIE!!!" the fiery redhead shouted as she left go of the javelin. Move to R5, and one Iron Javelin Delivery straight to the troub's face. ((with an extra side of Iron.))

We've determeined that she would yea. Okay so new plan. Serene moves somehwere within three spaces of R5, another party member ((doesn't matter who)) also does, Meredith attacks the Troub. Then Luka Dances for Meredith and Serene. Serene attacks the fighter, and Meredith attacks the Troub again. EDIT: Only Rosa is in range to mve into place to have my damage not get wrecked and she needs to move to P4. So, Serene has to move anywhere within 3 space of R5 that isn't P4, and Rosa to P4. Someone makes sure Kain knows this before making a mooooooooove. Cause we really need to make those exact moves or this might not go very well.

Actually... did Acquie did you double the Fighter last time you attacked one?

Acquie you should probs move forward before I attack so that we can get someone else within three spaces of either R5 of Q3. It depends if we want Meredith's attack to go to the Troub or the Fighter, which seeing as low as Anna's HP is currently getting that fighter down seems... pretty important. And if you move close to there it makes Luka able to give you and me another turn. with which you can use to kill the ihgter as I then go attack the Troub. There should be enough allies in range then to the Troub so my damage doesn't get wrecked and my spear wall goes off making me able to do at least a sizeable chuck of damage. Basically only Serene needs to move so I can lob a Jav at the fighter at full damage. ((really either of us can finish off the fighter, but I'm pretty sure I do more damage the Troubadour due to my anti-mountedness and the fact she probs has higher res than def.))

No problem. It's my job after all.~ ((I'm only the mod for Creative works sub XD))

It's an easy fix. Just click the "Edit" button. Then highlight all the text, and in the upper corner of the text editor is a little button that looks like an eraser, click this. The reason it's there is cause the text has formatting from another page etc... this tends to happen when text is copied and pasted onto Reborn from another place. The Eraser button removes all formatting so that'll fix it. And, while i'm here, You need a title tag as well. It can easily be edited into your title by clicking on the "edit" button and then clicking the 'use Full Editor" button on the original post in the thread ((a.k.a the only other post at the moment I'm posting this lol.)) This is pretty important as it really helps keep the subforum tidy and easy to browse.~ Here's a thread with more information as well as one more specifically about feedback: Title Tag thread: http://www.pokemonreborn.com/forum/index.php?showtopic=20788 Feedback Thread: http://www.pokemonreborn.com/forum/index.php?showtopic=20812 I'd personally recommend the title tag [CW/Feedback] as this is a creative writing project and you seem to be looking for feedback. anywho, Hukuna Sensei, out~

It's fine dude. Your health is more important. Take it easy and don't worry~ ((hope you feel better soon my dude)) as an aside jsut for fun ((and an observation I've already mentioned to Zeta on Discord.)), I've noticed that the longer this go the more Meredith jsut falls into my own speech patterns LOL. Like, she does it much more than any of my other characters I'm pretty sure. It's... pretty silly thinkin' about it.

I'm just gettin' screwed on it... I've gotten more Luck levels than Strength ones... It's honestly... kinda frustrating at this point. ((and I kinda wish I put a bit more in my growth at this point.))

Hopefully my strength starts cooperating.

YES, GLORIOUS SPEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAR TRAINING!!! I SHALL TEACH YOU TO THRUST WITH GREAT PASSION! THE SPEAR, THE GREATEST WEAPON!!! THE ARM OF JUSTIIIIIIIIIIIIIICE!

I love how you ask me these questions in the thread and on Discord at the same time... so I jsut answer it on Discord cause I see it first and then don't feellike repating myself so people never see my answer.

Yea Warhorses are VERY different from riding horses. Mostly since riding horses aren't really trained to go into the madness that is war. Like your typical riding horse would flee at the first sign of danger ((ESPECIALLY FROM SOMETHING LIKE A WYVERN.)) And eh, it can be overlooked moreso and probably should. D&D would make the note to RP the section of doing it, but we don't really have the timefor it? It just doesn't fit nicely into this struature of campaign so it has to happen off camera really. Cause like really it'll just be an asspull anyway, so might as well not address randomly finidng soemthing in the woods and jsut acept it happened at some point and not draw attention to it honestly lol.

Truth. Truuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuth... XD

I mean it depends, they are considered dragonkin, but they aren't true dragons. ((It's like the difference between canines and vulpines. They are similar and closeish in relation but are completely different creatures.))

~~I should note Wyverns != dragons... so the manakete thing wouldn't be possible anyway~ Sorry to burst your bubble.~

lol, well harem was invovled so... ((also this is getting weirder and weiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiirder.))

Sorry but uh... Serene is taken. She has a fiery redhead that's more important so that ending isn't possible.

Thing is, the Maiden's Powers as far as we know... only work for women, so I'm not so sure about the fact that they are meant to inherit the powers. Like, the reason Cinder was meant to steal the Fall Maiden's power as they said was cause they were trying to force her to die while Cinder was close to her so the powers would transfer to her. So, it in the canon as far as we know can't be that reason. ((since the Maidens, have to be... lel, Maidens.)) If we go on the theory that they are each from a continent, I suppose the very Military and proper looking fella at the back is clearly the one in Atlas ((I say clearly though I'm just guessing by his very stiff demeanor and his clothes looking vaguely military-esque, though those from Altas as far as we know tend towards lighter colours, especially white whereas this is much darker in color palette.)), the other two be a lot harder to place since we don't really know enough about Vacuo or Minstral. we know enough about Atlas to determine any somewhat military style is probably from there. Though I will note I think RWBY is fighting Mister McSmiley ((the third dude with the wicked sinister grin.)) in that short segment after... ~~((and remarkably he has what appears to fire silver tinted shots from his boots.That's... weirdly similar to Mercury. It's defs not him though... XD))~~ the line up, which I'm sure due to the prominent features matching ((scarring on the chest, though it's hard to see in the close up.)) same hairstyle and dress, and he still has the earrings as well. So that probably places him there... or going against Ruby and her team at some point methinks. Also 4 is definitely this series magic number. 4 members on a team ((we even see this continue honestly, with Team Newiper, and Blake has 3 friendos as well. 2 are unknown as of now though ;~; )), 4 maidens, 4 main Dust types, 4 human kingdoms, and within them them 4 Academies for Hunters/Huntresses ((well 3 now I suppose now that Beacon fell lel.)) so, safe to say 4... is indeed this series fav number. EDIT: proofs that the the last evil guy in the line-up is from Atlas, he's got the stupid ass double row of buttons vests like all of them LOL. ((seriously... why do the vests that Ironwood etc wear HAVE SO MANY BUTTONS??!?!?! YOU DON"T NEED THAT MANY BUTTONS!!!!!))

Oh shit... which was that in? I must've missed it. ((but she did mention that she was raised outside the Kingdoms, so yes, it'd make sense.)) and then after typing this... I read in Vale's. I'm stupid. Did go back and watch it, but dang yea no wonder I didn't remember cause it was such a footnote that yeeeeeeeeeea. It gets a line and not much else. It's like... well could it be anymore of a footnote? I suppose it makes sense in way that it was that short a mention since I imagine humans probably don't know all that much about Menagerie ((tfw when that word means literally "a collection of wild animals kept in captivity for exhibition.")) Like, I imagine the Faunis aren't super fond of humans pokin' around in their lands but I'm definitely very interested to see what their homeland is like especially since we know so much less about it then anywhere else.

I personally think the song is better than Season 3's just cause I fucking haaaaaaaaaaaaaaate that song cause of overly long note at the end that just makes me hate it. It's my third fav but I have a feeling this one will grow on me. On the intro part yea it's suuuuper cool. That opening sequence right at the beginning is suuuper nice. Speaking of which a little analysis for funsies. Thing's I've noticed, I have a feeling that we'll definitely be seeing a lot more places in the world of Remnant. Simply cause the World of Remnants tend to hint at things that will be coming in the future for one... and well we know for certain that Weiss is back in Atlas as her father brought her back home at the end of the 3rd season. Yang will probably remain in Vale, where Beacon Academy was once located. That more or less leaves us to wonder where Ruby and Blake ended up. Notably, the coloured orbs in the intro when they split all go to the different continents, ((Yang's and Weiss's going towards the landmasses I'd specified.)) Ruby's, or the red one goes towards the continent with Minstral on it, so we can probably see her heading there in the future. Blake's ((black orb)) kinda goes to that small island continent beneath it, which is actually sorta unknown territory actually. It wasn't mentioned in any of the World of Remnant stuff and is just kinda there actually. Though it could just be headed towards Vacuo but just go that direction for visuals sake. Who knows lol. Jaune has a red sash around his waist... looks similar to Pyhrra's in her typical get-up... I wonder if this is an intentional nod. I have a feeling yes, but could be just a coincidence. ((both in-universe and out of it actually lol.)) In what I can only assume is our villain line-up notably amoungst our new faces... two old ones do not appear. Emerald and Mercury are both not seen. I find this omission... very curious. ESPECIALLY, since I assume that's Cinder there, the... well I was going to say only lady but I remembered Salem is there, so, the first to appear lel. She looks markedly like Cinder. Though her overall design is INSANELY different my loooooooooooooooooooooooooordy. ((I'm curious as to why that is.)) Adam is still a thing!!! Weirdly... we see him twice? I wonder if he's still working with Salem at this point... ((or Cinder... technically? I'm not really sure how that thing all worked really... lol.)) either way we see him in Yang's part as the transition to the Evil lineup, but then we also see him fighting Blake. So... methinks he's still going to be very important. Otherwise over analyzation over. I'm thinking along similar lines to you though Dobbs. Think we're going to get a somewhat slower season here that will build out a lot more of the world we've yet to come to know especially due to that fact our 4 main heros are split up at the beginning of this season thus far. It seems that Blake has found a team of her own ((with more Sun... hooooooooooooo boy... XD.)) I wonder if they will remain split up or if they will gradually drift back towards each other by the end of this season.

I more under the impression that Ecquis jsut goes insane at some point and thinks his wyverns are his children and thinks he can talk to them at some point personally.

~~tfw I thought these were the Wyverns human forms, why they your kids all of a sudden da hell?~~