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Gabriel sighed. Of course it was a demon they were meeting with. It could have been worse, he supposed, though his slight frown only deepened when Bargus stood and introduced himself. From the wall he was leaned against, he straightened and uncrossed his arms. "I am Gabriel. I am proficient in healing spells and have worked as an assassin for the Alliance for some time." His pale red gaze met Vermillio's as he spoke, his child's voice contrasting his simple, matter-of-fact speech. "I am in possession of other talents that I would rather not discuss at this point in time."

Hoo boy, Gabriel meeting her should be interesting. . .

This is basically an alternate universe Fate/Zero. Tokiomi will probably exist somewhere unless someone decides to make the Tohsaka heir their character (which is perfectly valid) or some other reason for him to not exist comes up. You can't just play the original characters from the show, though, with a possible exception for minor characters suddenly being relevant and Master-quality (which would basically make them different characters anyway.)

I'll be compiling and giving commentary on the sheets submitted so far tomorrow. EDIT: Accepted Servants added to the OP. If your servant was not found, ask me or look below to see my issues with them: Jack the Giant Killer: Needs to be generally toned down a bit. Reserve one NP for one form of the Servant, and maybe take his parameters down a notch or two. Change Unknown Guidance to a rank of Revelations. Hua Mulan: You can't have Ionioi Hetairoi; replace the Emperor's Army. Also seems generally a bit too strong; consider changing China's Great Walls to an alternate form or replacing it with Territory Creation. (Use Lord Camelot and Bathory Erzebet as models if you keep it as a NP.) Don Quixote: Still crazy OP for a fictional character, tbh. Pick a Phantasm or two and just use those. Peter Pan: Same issues as the above. Wendigo: . . . As amusing as Super Yandere is, it's a bit too much of a joke for me. Save her for CF: Reborn Edition. Masters: Akio: Looks fine, but why is he here instead of Tokiomi? Does Tokiomi still exist in this 'verse? Anders: "Rune" isn't really an affinity. Rune magic is still a subclass of the others, to my knowledge, so unless his magic is somehow a unique form, he should have a standard affinity.

"If you were a true holy man, you'd know not to interrupt our righteous mission!" Hoshiko calls after the fleeing priest as she approaches their remaining foe. Move to G11

So, when do you think you'll be throwing the IC up?

"You'll see who the true master of archery is here! HIYAH!" Hoshiko looses another arrow, adding to the assault on the already-beleaguered bowman. "Watch and learn~" Move to G-16, attack Archer 2!

And done.

Mind if I make a bit of an edit to Gabriel, then? I wanted to give him a bit of healing magic; his non-rage combat is pretty much inspired by Jakob from Fire Emblem Fates.

I might drop the "no two Masters" rule, with consideration for the experience of the RPer, of course. At this rate we won't get enough Masters otherwise.

the former. I planned on a minimum of 7 players and a max of 14. Playing a Servant doesn't mean you can't play a Master and vis versa.

I'll probably wait to move until most of the melee folks have resolved their combat, unless someone needs to be softened. Remember that you can hit the enemy archers with no issues.

we do need masters, too, unless I tgrow out the original starting point and make this GO-esque or something

I don't think Notus has been around to comment. It's also worth noting that Gabriel isn't very open about his past, so a character having prior knowledge of who and what he is isn't likely.

Just. . . bring him down to the level that he should be at. He's well-known but he doesn't have this massive legend that other heroes have surrounding them. He shouldn't have tons of powerful NPs, he should have one or two. I would take the second option, there.

I like the idea of the servant, really, so I would be somewhat disappointed to see him scrapped, but I wasn't a huge fan of the execution of the version you posted.

8/10 looks nice

Alright, I've edited in my sheet.

it doesn't actually matter regardless.

I do have a bit more to go over with you, though. One: Don't think about this in terms of a MOBA. Servants aren't designed with "kits," everything you put on them should have some connection to who they are and what they did. For example, did Hayha actually use remotely detonated charges? Seeing as I'm not certain that any sort of radio-detonated explosive was even invented at that time, I'd be inclined to say "no." So he shouldn't have that as a Noble Phantasm. Additionally, as I already noted, Camouflage is a personal skill. That together with Presence Concealment easily covers his ability to remain undetected. Going along with the idea of not having a kit, if his last bullet does more damage, it should be for an actual reason, and not because you're basing it on a skill from a video game. As a minor note, his rifle held five rounds, not four. Before you ask, Rusty, Class Skills are listed in with the rest of them, even if they're on the "incorrect" class. Astolfo's profile lists his Independent Action right below his Riding skill.