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6/10 I recommended it with having it cropped in mind, it's just far too small on this forum right now.

Hellfire Knight vs. Ricochet The girl had discarded the cloak, shoes, and voice changer, which laid in a small corner, once she was in the waiting area and alone, revealing the clothing she wore underneath: a black skirt with bright violet accents in the pleats, a simple white blouse with buttoned sleeves, and black leggings. She took a deep breath to steady herself and called her mech around herself before the gates lowered, which raised her a few inches off the ground as the bulky contraption appeared. The interior of her helmet lit up with small readouts of various statistics, displaying blank filler values for a moment as the machine ran its initial diagnostics. Initialization complete, the internal computer printed to the HUD. Main powerplant normal, auxiliary power cell charged/standby, primary jets primed/standby, secondary jets primed/standby, plasma vents closed/waiting. "Activate primary jets, activate secondary jets, prime all guns," she said quietly, lifting off the ground further as the jets mounted on her feet and back flared to life, mantling her in fire. "Normal inputs, opening subroutine." She leaned forward and the mech began to accelerate. She waited to open fire, but her mech was slowly gaining momentum as it traveled out of the gate and toward the opposite side of the arena.

IntSys, could I ask you to flesh out your posts a bit more? Try following the examples set by the more experienced RPers here; instead of just saying "X did Y," describe it. For example, how does your character feel about the arena? Is he nervous, excited, calm? Does his mech have a UI of some sort, what does that look like? Also, you might want to wait until your opponent has actually entered the arena to start attacking, lol.

A faint intake of breath could be heard as the one known as . . . LOLI_HUNTER? . . . started shouting in Hiroki's direction. It was audible for a fraction of a second before the device on her chin treated everyone in the room to an ear-grinding blast of static, the internal processing systems confused for a moment as to what, exactly, they should do in response to the sound the wearer had produced. The girl had, at this point, completely frozen. As in, she had actually ceased breathing momentarily. I thought everyone else would be disguised but she knows how does she know nobody is going to take me seriously why did this have to happen already now everyone is staring at me- I have to calm down. Even if they discover my identity, it won't affect my fighting skill, and I am perfectly capable of defending myself. The two halves of her mind fought one another as she remained motionless. After a short time, her body would realize that it still required oxygen regardless of any internal panic occuring, and treat the group to another crash of static as she exhaled.

Edison's design at least shows some thought into it, and I've been told his animations are actually pretty great. (I never used him, personally.) Nightingale... is Nightingale. Her animations are like, clawing people, and a super awkward-looking quick draw pistol attack, and she just looks super uncoordinated. Her voice is nice but that's about it. Not to mention I was rolling for the other two 5* berserkers available currently.

"I do believe that the two behaviors are not mutually exclusive," Arturia stated dryly. She glanced over to her side, eyes catching Lana before returning to Natalie. "I'm not stopping anybody from talking to anybody. I would think that a fellow Nayrist would at least have the common decency to be polite when walking into a place of learning. Or common decency at all, for that matter, since evidently you can't be bothered to show a little magnanimity to the common folk unless they bow and scrape." This line was accompanied with a significant look up toward the other's hairline. Finally, however, Arturia sat back down, though she continued to hold Natalie's gaze. "Honestly, though, I don't know why I even said anything. You're obviously not worth the effort."

This actually sounds like a good idea, as discussed in PM. We could actually offload this and turn this into a PvP sort of thing, where one person plays the "antagonist" that starts an incident (and maybe others that are working with you) and others play the ones trying to solve it.

my curse of rolling the worst servants in every category continues, and this time it wasn't even a character i liked. a nurse being Berserker is dumb. Her art is bad. Her animations look awkward as fuck. Her niche is terrible. I am actually legitimately angry over rolling a 5*.

(Do nothing, say nothing) Hiroki took two hesitant steps forward, out of equal parts nervousness and the fact that her outfit wasn't exactly created with ease of movement in mind. She wobbled almost imperceptibly on the tall platform shoes, still unused to them. She would have worn taller but at that point it would actually be more practical to wear stilts. They still didn't add quite enough to her height, in her mind - the shoes didn't even quite get her to five feet, though she hoped the other contestants would assume the person underneath the cloak was hunched over, hiding a more impressive stature. She bowed, making sure to bend her knees slightly so the motion more accurately matched her false height, controlling the urge to scratch at the device that adhered to the left side of her jaw. She spoke in the barest whisper, almost inaudible to her own ears, especially past the sound that emerged after an instant of delay. "I am the Hellfire Knight. I am honored to meet you, Lord Sleeping Bear." The voice that everyone heard was not the faltering one of a nervous girl, but a harsh, deep, and clearly artificial voice that emanated from the speaker on her chin. After speaking, she carefully stepped backward to her original position, and peered back and forth at the other contestants as best as she could while keeping actual head motions to a minimum.

Probably, yes, since you need to talk to the god. EDIT: Actually no, I don't think so.

She needs aliases from them. inb4 Acqui is "The Rampaging Lolicon"

So uh, no one else is interested?

Haruki pouted for a moment at the abrupt cutoff of the conversation. He perked up immediately, however, at the thought of leaving the drab room. He pocketed the phone, grabbed the tablet and flipped it up so it rested in his hand and the crook of his elbow, and stood up all in one quick motion, his feet leaving the ground as he hopped up to them. He made a beeline for the nearest door and threw it open, wanting to leave the place he was before he did anything else.

Sora blinked several times before the request processed. "M-m-me? You want me to play basketball with y-you?" His quavering voice and stature displayed obvious apprehension at the project, but after a moment he nodded, jerking his head down and up again hard enough that it looked like he should have snapped it. "I'll do it. I'm not very good though. . ." The effeminate boy's physique wasn't exactly suited to the sport - or any sport at all, really - that much was true. Soft limbs and a height of 164 centimeters put him at a rather glaring disadvantage here.

If one looked closely, they could have seen the muscles under Arturia's skin tense briefly, fingers pressing into the hardcover laying in front of her. Do not hit the girl with the book. Even if she deserves it. Her grip relaxed. She's not worth this one, anyway. The girl stood up, continuing to match Natalie's stare regardless of how uncomfortable it made her - her anger overcame that quite handily. "Dear Nayru, are you trying to sound like you just walked out of some shitty movie about high school or something? Quite frankly I don't give a fuck if I'm putting my nose into your business, especially since you seemed to have barged in here with the sole intent of being as obnoxious as possible."

didn't even rate/10 but yeah i love this guy's art style, i guess other people are less infatuated with it

already rated/10 man i thought this avatar would get better ratings

7/10

Hm, 6.5/10

6.8/10

That's why I said it was reasonable, it's just that acting for someone else at all is generally considered bad practice. I'm sure Acqui is fine with it, this is more of an "in the future" sort of thing.

Eeh, Shadow, small nitpick: you bunnied Rein a bit in that post. Unless you asked Acqui how Rein would have reacted, I'd advise against assuming she did anything. . . not that your assumption was unreasonable.

Fantastic. Alpha Bitch on the first day of school. "What do you want?" Artoria asked in a tone edged with irritation. "And could you at least attempt to keep it down?" All she wanted to do was read her book. She fixed the girl with a glare that came close to looking literally icy as she dogeared the page she was on, folding the book calmly before placing it on the table in front of herself. Please don't make me get up.