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[03:39:49] %King Murdoc: can we all be nice pls

this perspective does actually help from my perspective since i'm in a rather, shall we say unusual spot when it comes to these sort of things. I don't really know what it's like to be straight OR gay so thank you. (Apologies for doing this to you at least once, btw. I can be offensive without realizing it.)

9/10

Fair enough. To be totally honest, it's probably just because you're new, so I don't have a read on what kind of RPer you are.

You still are giving off a big "I need to be special" vibe. You're basically giving yourself skills and natural abilities then explicitly saying it's impossible for someone else to have them. Big improvement over your last one, but try not to do what might be called "making yourself the main character."

Hiroki's eyes widened. "Do you think they're recording something new? That'd be so cool if we were here for that." Hiroki hadn't really ever been close to anyone that could be considered famous, unless one considered twenty meters away in a crowd close, so she was excited to meet the group. "I wonder what they have to say about the life of an idol. If we can talk to them, that is. I'm sure they're busy."

"That's fine with me, I really want to see the studios. Do you think we have to use the practice studios all the time? I'd like to be able to work on stuff in my room." Hiroki moved toward the door, getting ready to go down the elevator and to the studios. These rooms are huge. If they're this luxurious, imagine what the rest of the building looks like?

yeah, think on the level of F/Z and F/SN Masters as a guideline. (I don't expect Shirou levels of incompetence, though. You can be from a powerful mage family if you want, just don't overdo it.)

i'm... gonna have to put the kibosh on that. The way you've described the character seems to put him on par with a Servant, which is totally unacceptable. Additionally, the whole thing seems sueish to be totally honest. The character needs to be brought way, way down to earth before further consideration.

bleagh now i have to farm for nyctgems to get a halfways-decent GL (or brach hammers but HR brachydios kicks the fuck outta me and he's basically immune to my go-to gunlance elements)

That felt way more wordy than it needed to be...

Hiroki took her clothes out of the bag remaining in the bedroom and placed them in a big pile on the bed, while she refolded them to fit in a dresser rather than a bag. She performed the task somewhat sloppily despite the care she took doing so, but the clothes still fit within the drawers reasonably and without too much cramming. The only exceptions were a couple somewhat formal-looking dresses, which were placed on hangers in the wardrobe without too much ado, and one particular garment one wouldn't quite expect: a red hooded sweatshirt that was positively battered, and entirely too large for Hiroki. She handled it almost gingerly as she hung it up. She grinned eagerly looking at the Mami cosplay already hung up before turning back to finish unpacking. Hiroki exited the bedroom and took a few more tubes of posters out of the already-opened bag, taping them up in a way that ensured they wouldn't tear if and when she needed to move them. That bag only contained a favorite blanket and pillow outside of the posters. She decided to leave the last bag for later; it didn't contain anything that needed to be dealt with immediately or that she was worried about damaging by accident. She took the blanket and pillow back into the bedroom and set them on the bed in a space not currently occupied by her roommates. She bounced up and down on her heels once, then said, "Shall we?"

Rooftop Noriko nodded firmly. "Good. Nagi, as we discussed earlier, come to the Protector base sometime tonight or tomorrow. You two will need this information as well; here." She scribbled out the map she had given Nagi earlier on two more pieces of paper withdrawn from her pockets, and handed one to each of the other two Loners there. "Gavriil, Kouta, we need to get back to base." She gave one last look to the three mages gathered in front of her. "I'll instruct the rest of the Protectors to leave you alone should you need to travel through our territory. We're not in the business of harassing random magi, but. . ." Noriko fell uncharacteristically quiet. She didn't want to reveal the full extent of her thoughts at this time. "I look forward to meeting with you soon. If any of you find information, let me know as quickly as possible; we can't let that monster claim any more lives." With that, she turned and walked back downstairs into the building, Kouta in tow. ((Feel free to make one post about what you do after this, but don't get into anything you're not alright with ending immediately.)) Takeshi's group The hellhound snarled in rage as the bullet grazed its side, the shaky shot failing to fully connect. It "bled" more of that strange substance from the wound, but didn't seem to slow down; allowing it to slide right into Krys's blade. The weapon sliced another neat wound in its side as the beast stopped just before impaling itself. It started to attack once more, before being caught by a sideways swipe of Takeshi's blade, the flat catching it firmly and sending the unnatural creature into Ozymandias's flames. The assault seemed to stun it for a moment, leaving it wide open as it thrashed at the fire. Faust The elevator opened up into a small lobby, that had a few hallways connected to it. They had small signs indicating which hall led where; there were two on the left, one which led to training areas and another which led to bedrooms. A central hall directly led to the dining and storage areas, and the paths on the right led to offices and maintenance areas. There was an office that was visible immediately upon looking down the hall, though no one was in it presently. A note on the desk next to a stack of blank paper and a computer facing the hall indicated that reports were to be written here.

"We could just ask for a bookshelf." Hiroki was surprised that this solution had not come up in the discussion yet, and it showed in her tone. "I'm sure a big company like YUSAPRO can afford one." She looked back and forth between the people in the room. "Anyway, my stuff is all over the place. I really need to at least get my clothes in something other than a duffel bag, or they'll get all wrinkly." With that, she began to withdraw from the cluster of girls in the living room and head back to the bedroom.

Alright, so I've been doing a bad job of keeping up with updates properly. Who is waiting, and who are we waiting for atm?

Really, though. If you don't know what's going on, read the OP then ask for clarification.

It's fine. As a newbie to the forum, you won't be able to play a Servant, but rolling a Master is perfectly fine. This will also run multiple times, so if you join other RPs you could play a Servant in a future one.

mmkay so here's a few issues: 1. you didn't read the OP at all 2. you really didn't read the OP at all. 3. everything here screams "sue." So basically this mostly like a normal Grail War, except instead of Servants being drawn from real historical figures, we're taking them from other RPs on the forum. The only restriction is that they have to be from here or the CW section on this site. If you don't have any characters here that would work, you can always just play as a Master.

Btw @ Dobby and Explosms: were you planning on running a Master?

"Holy shit, what the hell was that!?" Arturia yelled, unfortunately for Emberly's ears. Along with a bolt of lightning being rather surprising in and of itself, her attention had been focused on her conversation and the book she was reading. As the lights came back up, Arturia worked momentarily on calming herself before realizing that someone - Lilith? She wasn't sure; Arturia was bad with names - was unconscious and already being helped by her partner. "Is anyone else hurt?" she called out in a somewhat quieter, but still clearly audible tone.

Anyone else planning on Master sheets? We only need five more Masters to get started (since Alexus and I will be running Masters). I know a few people have mentioned their interest but it'd be nice to get an accurate head count. By the way, for anyone unsure at this point: you don't need to be familiar with Fate to participate. While the systems can and will get complicated, for the purposes of the RP the end result is simple. We're making significant deviations from the canon of the series anyway, so a lot of prior knowledge that some might have will be unusable. Questions are always welcome too.

"I didn't think that was vulgar. There's nothing wrong with getting excited." She was really mixed up with some strange people, wasn't she? A girl who had never even heard of an ahoge, the girl carrying around her "cuddle fish," and now Kagari thinking it was rude to be excited? I wonder what they think of me. "You're probably right, though. After we get unpacked and stuff," she said with another glance toward Kagari, "I want to go and find that. I need to practice." She was a decent singer, but she really loved playing all instruments; it was so much easier to focus on just your playing, and you can actually hear yourself properly when doing so.