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Dobby, man, ya don't have to keep hiding it under a spoiler though XD Not like someone's gonna be harmed just by having to read a bit of words... And I figured out the reason why Erce is so attached to the boy. I'm pretty satisfied with it, to be honest; that and it explains some future actions that might be taken... like leaving someone behind. Nemo's ruthlessness will becaused by repressed feelings, and Erce's... hers is caused by something else entirely. and She's... plausibly old enough for it to work for the reason, I guess (To be honest, I have no freaking idea how old she is biologically... XD... might be past Galen though) Now... when and how to shine light upon it... when.... Maybe Java can come in handy here... EDIT: I'll probably have to go back and edit something mentioned about a past trainer- her regards shouldn't be very nice of that person...

Again, I'm not trying to shame anyone or make ya feel bad or anything XD Just saying that personality makes it a lot easier to tell a mon apart if there happen to be dupes Take Erce for example. Even if someone were to get a scyther right now, I would have no issue about it because at the end of the day- Erce is still Erce regardless of if another PC has a member of her kind also in their company. I was going to try to demonstrate this by having Kota send out his mantis, but things kinda went a different path so that never actually came about. She's got a ward to defend and to her- that's her purpose and her reason in her mind, and she takes it very seriously and does not slack on it. This seriousness also cascades down into other matters though- evident in her being somewhat of a no-nonsense lady reminiscent of Mareek's mother Alexandra. She has her facets and her habits, and this ultimately helps to not only enchance character development for her Ward, Mareek, himself, but also for all other Party members over time. And it gives me a handful of key traits that I can use to immediately have those who know her well enough, like MAreek or his team, be able to id her almost instantly even among lookalikes.

Oh yeah, there indeed is, young padawan. Why, there I was, editing in some information into my OP of my OOC thread, and I go to hit the save changes button... and what do I get but an Error line saying that I have exceeded the word count limit? And I just sat there, and went "Well...fuck a duck..." but yes, there is a limit... surprising that I found it, but it's there.

Remember- the text box limit is 12,000 words. not shitting you here. I found that out during the time of PSS...

*Dons Gladiator Attire once more* Do you hear that, Azery? Soon...

*Sics an Electivire on Azery for daring to utter such hollowed words of a warrior* Well... I think Nemo's going to have a bit of competition with Brienne now... yes, yes... quite a bit. I'm going to have a bit of fun seeing where there little relationship ultimately goes- perhaps it will be rivalry, perhaps grudging respect? or perhaps Nemo shall come to ultimately feel something and actually pine for her; while the wolf rejects his advances- hence leading to his habit of wandering off on his lonesome... to be alone. I like the third one... oh yeah, there's gonna be something going on in that Heart of Bone... perhaps it will go unspoken, yes... unspoken is best. for Nemo is no fool. He knows nothing can ever come out of castles made in the sand or towers built on glass. And so resigning himself to the fate of forever alone, he leaves often to think of his place in this world and recite his oath, thousands and thousands of times, from dusk til dawn... to distract himself. To make himself focused... or at least try.

This. Shuckles time in my mind has passed. and he is not of the silver- *Shuns like a peasant* And both of those lucarios are male and... don't really have too much of a personality from what I've seen thus far- no offense to the twos of yous whose got em, but I'm just calling it out like I see it. So yeah, she will more or less be acting like Erce in a way. Hell, I could probably take the same exact backstory that I had drafted out for Brienne and retain the basic structure. In fact I know I could. And Azery- I'm get mah steel types, damnit, I don't care if there's gonna repeats with someone else- cause I trust my ability as a writer to make em unique and easy to tell apart. My mons are not just slapped together for the sake of strategy, I take into account the fact they should each still be able to function as individuals even within the team and not just be yes men or grunts who are soulless and only live to follow orders. Oh what's this... oh...OH... It's over... the bugs are dead. We have our winner!!!!

Would've died if it weren't for a freaking boom burst stopping the assailant before he could finish it... Now... to figure out what else to do with this Skarmory... I've already got myself an ultrasonic deterrent in one of Joltara's daughters, can undergo the same training as she did eventually... but surely another one couldn't hurt- I imagine it wouldn't be too hard to pitch train metal sound to be used in the same manner outside of battle... One of the Twins will carry out the healing role, one of them will be the sound weapon if nessacary- unlike their mother there's two of them so they can split the jobs up... I can have Zolivar nerf fire much in the same way Erce would- using Air Cutter in place of Vacuum wave though... I could have a way to take care of electric attacks via HP electric And damn... lols, rip norman... EDIT: Ahhhh.... Brienne Brienne Brienne... What am I going to do with you? You're an absolute sitting duck to ground and fighting types... But I don't know what to possibly substitute turn you into... I could go for a female Excadrill... or a fortress- that mother trucker gets Power Trick. Or I could go for a durant... Or perhaps your rival Lord Steelix will be making a visit? Yes, we must decide this rather quickly... I think a fight to the death is in order. Winner gets the slot. Loser... well, we'll mourn the losers later. EDIT2: And so it comes down to this... Durant, Fortress, and Lord Steelix... who will come out on top? EDIT3: And so Lord Steelix lays dead on the field, taken out by an unexpected bout of team work from the bugs... Only one question remains. Whom will take whom's life next? Durant... or Fortress? The viper- or the mountain? EDIT4: OH my, WHAT:S THIS!? A female Lucario has suddenly entered the Frey of battle! what an upset!

Oh... so hax wheel is working again? I thought it had broken a few months back, lols XD

I went ahead and assumed Claude probably walked away after that last sentence then. And Mind-Fuckery officially complete. And yes, what Galen had his fox conjure up was a very... religious vision for the Bloods. This family fued is as good... as completely over. Sisto wins by a landslide Because they have a former sith turned Jedi... And I partially did it all to show the contrasting strength and weakness deep at the cores of either family. Sisto's fought back in retaliation and got ferocious, the Bloods came off as strong at first, but the moment they poked sleeping urasings... their true weakness underneath it all was revealed, and they were sent running (literally in one case) But there shall be more about Lucille later... much much more...

Mareek Mareek only nodded as Claude headed off about his business. There was something bothering the other student- he could tell... but it was best not to pry into it. He still had matters of his own to attend to with a match coming up very soon if the current events on the battle field were any indication. That and the blonde haired young man had had no issue requesting advice before, back during the trip and while ago- if he had wanted to talk about whatever it was, he likely would've just said as such or asked. "Guess it's just you and me then..." He looked at Joltara, again scratching the back of her ear. The Jolteon gave a snort, then she was walking away down the corridor- taking what to Mareek seemed to be the exact same route as the Platinum haired boy. "Or not then...just don't...kill him. Guess I should get back To Erce and the others." Big Brother is Watching. "Release them." Galen ordered as he watched through the glass doors, the light of the fading afternoon sun shining in upon him and his accomplice. They were not cloaked now- had possessed no reason to stay cloaked after driving the two out of the stands. Their targets had still yet to shit themselves... but in all honesty Galen had never been serious about that part; so long as they both got a little fear of God put into them... which he knew full well from his mechanations, they indeed had. "Drop the arceus illusion. And drop it now." He again ordered when he saw the subjects were still panicking. The Zoroark grumbled something indignant for a moment, griping at him ruining the fun she was having before making a few gestures and finally dispelling her power over their their minds, right before she cloaked the two of them again to avoid detection. Galen turned and began to walk away, feeling no sympathy as the woman known as Lucille Blood wept on her knees upon the barren earth, son in not much better condition from the ordeal. "I don't think those two will ever be an issue for her again- not after this..." He smirked darkly, glancing over his shoulder. The Zoroark hadn't budged... looking over the result of her handiwork and shaking her head, ever so slightly. Seeing the actual aftermath, the trauma of it all... the sight of it stole into her heart like a thief in the night and made off with every ounce of the amusement from just moments earlier. "They had this coming with how they wanted to treat people, now come on- His match is up next..." One last Glance...one of pity, and then she too turned from the glass, and walked away. And the Bloods were left to grovel in the freshly assaulted landscapes of their minds. And if they're was anything they'd take away from there experience... it was one this: God himself was on the side of Alexandra Sisto. From what they'd seen, what they'd endured... that much had been branded into their memories. And they would do well to never forget it. For the fear of their vision was fear of the lord himself.

so yeah- we go separate ways now, right?

Hmmm... to keep going, or end it. Nope, End it. pushing the envelope a bit much enough as it is.

{Mareek and Claude} Mareek gave him a nod, then turned to Joltara. The gaze in her pitch black eyes didn't seem to be as utterly questioning this time- before her Trainer's son could even make the request she turned on her heels and concentrated on Colere, eye's beginning to shine with a curious light. A Flash came, bright and brilliant like a vintage camera... and then there was nothing. Hell, if Mareek himself didn't know any better- he would've assumed all she had done was use the move of the same namesake. "Keep her out a bit longer..." He advised, all the noting the movement in his periphery. There was honestly little surprise when he turned around to find the other blonde boy gonzo, the backs of his heels still visible just as he stumbled and dashed around the nearest corner like he had stolen something. "It just takes a few moments most of the time..."

*Puts away gladiator attire and sighs* Alright...

If you want to do it now, then... sure... Don't screw up though.

They will call the Ghost Busters then and Shade will be Busted

Puns... moving on *Climbs out of hole and cast down shovel* IT. IS. DONE! I am 99% certain I did not miss any of the BS with this latest edit.

I will be studying electricity after this though... very hard...(Chances are I'm not gonna do much more than look at wikipedia and the super power wiki and a few scientific sites though... cause studying is also not my strong suit! XD) now, to finish editing this...

Again... sorry. now- I've come up with something with the help of my dear dead friend einstein! ... ... ... He says for me to give up and just him glance at her... screw it, I'll do it, Einstein!

Well, the closest I can think to substitute the eye thing- Cause I have looked and that trully was a load of BS on my part, Sorry- Is the sensing of electrical fields like I discussed earlier... which doesn't really logically mean he'd be able to tell if peeps were looking at him or not from the whole eye sight thing... Hmmm... dayum, I've dug myself a hole and I've got no muligan card to fix mah mistakes... well, back to the drawing board...eventually, I WILL come up with a way to fix all that BS...

Well...yeah, like I said... damn...I'm honestly kinda stuck on what to do now...to tell the truth... I'll try to think of something to fix it all... XD

Like I said- Physics (And probably Biology too to a degree)=/= my strong suit. Guess I'll need to find some new viable explanation then... or change the post to something else... but that also means the Hawk/ magnified Vision thing that's been used is BS too. And this IS magic afterall... the purest manifestation of BS in the eyes of physics...

Eh, well... I've never been good at physics outside of Sci-Fi and just making up stuff that sounds believable... And don't even get me started on the possibilities of magnetism. Faust reminds me a lot of Anver Dunn- with the amount of sheer versatility they both have in their abilities- just need to figure it all out one step at a time... Though Electro-kinesis trumps Thermo-Kinesis, I'm afraid...

Yes, yes, all that... basically Periphery Scan is just him shooting some extra bio electricity what-have-you into dem eyeballs to increase the functioning output and preformance... resulting in an expanded field of vision. and the same explanation is what I have drafted for the increased, lightning like speed and reflexes he has yet to actually have reason to show... cause mitochondrias and all that Jazz. Electrokinesis is so versatile though, ya'll don't even know... And him shooting some extra juice into his eyes to enhance their functioning is also the reason they glow during transformation... And I am tempted to have him ask if there are any batteries just lying around he could see... but that would blow his cover XD