Felicity

@The superpower question, Flight. It may not be as efficient as teleportation but fuck is it cooler. Unles you get to choose how you teleport. If I get a little puff of smoke then I'll take teleportation. What trait/characteristic do you find do be greatly undervalued by society? - [5/29/2015] Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, I have nowhere near enough of a balanced, knowledgeable view of society to adequately answer this question but I suppose I'd have to say the capability for tolerance.

I might suggest holding off for a while and seeing how some PC opinions affect Mareeks judgement. In the end you just have to consider what he would and I imagine, smart lad that he is, that he might value some other opinions. You kinda have a habit of running your own little sub-plot independent of the story on the whole. Not really an issue though, seeing as the story is revolving around Evan and the tournament and you haven't even really approached any boundaries in regards to what Chim has set out.

Once the series ends I'm planning on marathoning both series after soaking in everything that happens. Just a nice, happy episode. Like, really, key word there to summarise the episode is Nice. Ore monogatari is starting to hit that point where the novelty of how expressive Takeo is and the cuteness of the relationship is just starting to fade.

Bobby immediately transformed, once he figured out how to trigger that same wash of power he had experienced prior. The flaming hair and fiery coat flared out behind him as Ozymandias took no time in declaring his intention, summoning the contraption he had learned to summon earlier. The Flamethrower. "Sir Takeshi, if this Dog pounces, do I have permission to smite it?" A wide grin slid over his face as he lit the flame within the machine, ready to launch a fireball into the face of the foe.

Where he wrestled with an incoming Meteor ((Don't you dare link it back to Reborn I swear to God, Buddha, Satan and every other Deity that has ever existed...))

Suddenly there was an Elf

MasterEnglish? Are you perhaps like Johnny English, simply a surname or are you claiming mastery of the English or English language. if so. EN GARDE!

Still Exam period for him, I've only seen him around in the nightclub recently.

Yeah, if you really want to. It has no advantages as far as I can tell but hey, there's nothing to be read specifically stopping you as far as I can tell.

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yeah, we really have no impetus to start an interaction with anyone except Lilith and people have already jumped on that. We already had the chance to get to know each other earlier so I have no clue what to do :x

I don't know the character but even so their design just doesn't strike me as anything interesting. 6/10

Edited the profile to show that he'll commonly use a simple longsword. Should he need to he can wield it one handed or two, depending on if he has Gemstone Aegis with him.

Too much Darkrai and not enough quality to justify it. 6/10

Cyaloom Pixl ((VOMIT! YAAAAAAYYYYYYYY!!!!)) Suddenly a cry came from outside the classroom. A particularly queasy student had just burst into the room and started throwing up into the bin in the front of the room, right in front of Klive and Red! Immediately Anna went to care for the child who had thankfully grabbed the bin next to the door in the panic. Unfortunately some unsightly remnants remained after they had left for the Nurses station. Anna quickly called up Will, the janitor. "Excuse me, I'm terribly sorry but a child has decided that being sick around a bin was the best immediate course of action. Could you come clear it up?" Klive Like most of the class, Klive was confused about the sudden arrival of the sick student. Kudos to their quick thinking, didn't look like they'd make it to the bathroom. I guess a bin is better. "Well that's rather gruesome. C'mon Red, how about we go dstract ourselves from that by talking to someone else, I'd rather not stay this near to the door..." And so Klive quickly hopped seats to sit next to Ariel. "Heya. So, you find anything last night?" Klive was as questioning as he'd ever been.

Yeah, I didn't really know where to go with the last Takeshi post. I was expecting a timeskip and really it doesn't interest me to probe a character about their backstory like that. It's all well and good when the questions seem natural but this was feeling very forced :x

yeah, I was a bit confused about if I should allocate a common weapon for him to use. The Juggernaut class just says they're good with heavy armour. Like, does that count as a weapon? Like, do juggernauts just bullrush people? (That question kinda gave me the idea for avalanche) xD But I suppose I can try and allocate a certain weapon. I really was meaning to turn him into a tank which is why offense is of course on the down low. Avalanche was my attempt at trying to literally live up to a Signature move in line with where Varick did most of his fighting in his backstory. In an RP it may not be too useful with the variety of environments but imagine seeing that on a standard battlefield, ya know? A rolling field transformed as the earth itself follows the vanguard of an army. It'd be something to remember, even in a world where magical feats are certainly possible. If you really think I should change it due to the supreme lack of opportunity with the earth then I will just limit it to a charge minus the massive amounts of earth but I think it fits his character, especially with the slight berserker feeling I imagine from it. Like, it's the one time Varick will ever truly go on the offense and something as rare as that is as momentous as an earthquake. And it would not stop The Mountains strength, that's something that would last the battle. It's a state of mind that encapsulates him and prepares him for battle. If a charge shook that then it wouldn't be very effective in preparing him for combat. It does stop Gemstone Aegis though as he would cast the shield aside to focus on wielding his weapon.

"Well, I'm liable to piss most of 'em off anyway" Bobby murmured to himself. He was feeling even better now than he had when he woke up and felt ready to start roof jumping now. Then again, he always had a habit of getting ahead of himself. Who really knew if he was ready to go? Bobby pushed those thoughts away. Roof jumping was fun without the nagging voice saying he was gonna go splat on the floor below...

Could we just smack this thread and be done with it?

Name: Varick Harudim Archetype: Paladin Race: Half-Orc Age: 34 Appearance: Beneath the shell of steel plate armour adorned with the symbol of Solaruim is a face scarcely shown to anyone.. Varick bears the harsh, ugly features of his Orcish father, leaning heavily towards his Orcish heritage with the fangs jutting out of the bottom of his mouth and brutish facial features. The only features he got from his human mother was a genuine nose rather than a snout and her bright blue eyes. The eyes are the only part of his face any can see when Varick wears his helmet. Due to almost always wearing his helmet whatever the weather, he cut off all of his hair simply to make it more bearable, especially in the summer. He is very large and has been for as long as he can remember, towering over the childrenr in the city and eventually most of the adults. He stopped growing near to being 7 foot tall and his large, muscular frame made him an intimidating sight, a blessing and a curse. Personality: Anyone who meets Varick can describe him as a gruff or stoic person. Never will he start a fight, never will he cheer in victory. He is simply there, watching and waiting until he is forced to intervene. Very rarely will he take a stance on anything but when anyone touches on two issues he is as stalwart and defensive in his beliefs as any man can be. The first of these is that one must not judge someone on anything other than their character. Appearance and history come after that. This came from the unfair treatment he faced growing up. The second is that forcing ones beliefs on another is a crime tantamount to rape and must be treated as such. This came from some issues he faced with his own family. Aside from those two beliefs Varicks character all comes down to defending his home, however unjustly they treated him in the past. He moved past all the hatred and devoted himself to defending from the Orcish invaders. He was not hoping to redeem himself in the citizens eyes, he was not that naive. He chose to defend his home simply because his adoptive Father taught him that the city was his family and he could not allow the Orcs to perform their barbaric deeds to his family. Varick took those teachings to heart and they are at the very core of his being. -Order: Eternal Watchers Signature Moves/Spells/Skills: -Signature Fighting Style: Juggernaut-Warrior [[Passive]] commonly found using a steel longsword due to it's possible use as either a one handed weapon or two so Varick can adapt accordingly to the situation in combat. -The Mountains Strength [[Toggled]] Varick is adept at using his heavy armour already to defend himself and those around him. By focusing his resolve and aligning his thoughts with the teachings of Tectaniteus his defense becomes far stronger as he is prepared to block any attack without flinching or fear for himself. He becomes as stalwart and unbreakable as a mountain. However this is not a state of mind he can readily embody with the flick of a mental switch and he must spend time before a battle preparing himself, the chaos of battle being unsuitable for quiet meditation. -Avalanche [[Active]] Varick drops his defensive action to charge forward, bringing the strength of the earth with him, literally. The earth will surge right along with him like an avalanche and crush his enemies. Varicks own blows become stronger with this charge as well as he pits all of his strength into this offensive feat and whilst he may not be able to control the target of the avalanche he brought with him he can focus his own blows for devastating effect. This is not suited to combat within a military unit however as Varick, as mentioned before, cannot control who is hit by the avalanche. This was rarely an issue in life though as he was often at the front of the vanguard and most soldiers knew enough to stay behind Varicks first charge. -Gemstone Aegis [[Toggled]] Varick learned early into his career that armour is not particularly effective against magical means of attack. When praying to Tectaniteus an image of a kite shield made of steel with each of the gems of his Oath embedded in a cross formation, The Garnet, Ruby, Topaz and Bloodstone, appeared in his mind. From that point on by praying to his God he could ask to summon the shield, brought from the depths of the earth. The Gemstone Aegis provides superior magical defense, even being able to deflect minor missile spells. However it does not offer complete protection like Varicks armour and so Varick can be flanked. [[i think this might be kinda OP in the right setting, Superior defense and a way to take out a horde of enemies AND deal a few blows to the commander? The crux to this is that Varick can't support anyone at all and is also very limited when there isn't any earth. So sea warfare is no bueno.]] Background:

Commander is right, you need to spend time really expanding on an idea. It isn't good for dishing out a consistent story but for my main projects right now I simply allow the ideas to gather until I get the desire to write, waiting for inspiration. If you want, take a step back and take your time developing the plot and the characters and then come back with the RP, it will always, always work out for the better that way