Felicity

Still the same sentiment. Bro. I know you don't mean anything by it, buuut...

Be careful there. Some people might not like the idea of being labelled a side character. Myself included. Everyone will get a chance to shine, even if it's in their death scene.

What do you think of Chapter 2? Did you enjoy it? It had it's moments, overall though, I think that the separation of Pcs detracted from the experience. That said, I don't have a better solution, so I dunno. Naturally it was all fun though, RPing generally is. Also, please don't do the repetition of areas again. I think that extended things far too much. What about my writing? Where can I improve? Much better, just keep doing what you do, you'll get the fine points down. (Hopefully I do too) Which characters under my control feel real / which characters need improvement? Lana seems the best right now in general. Maybe Redwood needs more spotlight time. I think I said this last time too. Who is your favorite NPC and why? Lana. Same reason as last time. Who is your least favorite NPC and why? Alvin, same as last time too ^^ What do you think about the darker parts I included in this chapter? (Hydreigon and Celebi) I think that it sets a stage for an interesting plot, but pitting a load of teenagers into a dark story rarely works out if not done very well. See almost every Young adult novel out there, or just wattpad. Just take your time with it and you'll be aight. Which Legendary do you think will befriend your character? And why? Fairy Arceus. The Pink God shall reign. In all serious, I don't really know, maybe Diancie would be a fit? Fairy = good for Claude. Rock = not so much. Putting the two together could be interesting. That said, there's only one main fairy for Claude, and Colere is going to be very protective, if the character arcs I have for them go down well. What do you expect to happen in Chapter 3: Winter Cup? A lot of specific character interaction, battling and a whole load of bullshit that will need sorting out. We have yet to really nai down the battling system imo. If your character was approached instead of Slade; how would he / she react? There would be a lot of confusion in Claudes mind, but he'd throw away the opportunity by being very sceptical. Why would they want Claude? C'mon now. Is there anything else I can improve upon? Just keep plugging along imo, we're getting to the ideal point now in terms of quality.

Using information that your character would not know . For example, if you knew where someone was because you were reading their characters interactions, but your character was not involved, you couldn't have your character know where the other character is just because you yourself knew.

White Robed man is an independent white robed man who actually does need a man. Dude can't be everywhere.. It also occurs to me that Meta-ing could be a very big problem, so If I catch anyone doing so, there will be a bigger penalty in this than in other Rps, capiche?

We did kind of work together in the beginning, a little. But they were both laid up with their individual opponents and couldn't really aid the other. Still love the fact that Colere was goomba stomping the shit out of everyone.

Tacos There was a strange little sound of approval, and with it a flash of light, just before the door completely closed and sealed them in darkness. Jackson found himself standing in an open field of all places, face to face with the man who executed the Golem the day before. "And so you have committed, or tried to. It's the action that counts in this case."

Just note, this is where I'll be testing how you use your Gifts, but no situation will ever be unsolvable.

Murdoc The mans face never changed. "Do you mind if I ask what you're doing? This is an interview you know, I was thinking you might ant to introduce yourself. Ah, but nevermind that, my name is Dorian, and so that there's a bit of give and take, let me tell you my Gift, yeah? I have an Extremely high pain tolerance." Dorian offered, hoping to relax Solace. Tacos A voice rang out in the darkness."You must let go. To enter is to commit here, Let go, and you will have some answers..." Jacson could just as easily run away, but there didn't seem to be any danger in this situation, provided he kept a level head...

Murdoc & Snap The two followed the man through the city towards a place in the School district which was decorated in the Shields logo, a simple blue shield of course, that they knew as the Shields place of operations. They both arrived at roughly the same time alongside six other people who looked rather confused. Upon arrival, the two version of the man immediately dissipated and merged with the other version of himself, like two smoke clouds coming together. Once this was done, he addressed the crowd. His monotone voice spread easily through the entry way they were all standing in. "Each of you were brought here because you all showed an interest in joining our party and our representative" He spat the last word, the first inflection of emotion in his voice any of them had heard " Has deemed you acceptable for joining us. Each of you will follow a version of myself to your actual interviewer, who you must reveal your Gift to in one way or another, and you will naturally be interviewed. Best of luck" And with the end of that dismal speech, everyone present was brought to a small room with a table and an interviewer sitting at it. When Kyrie arrived, she found Nigel sitting there, naturally anticipating her arrival. "Good morning my dear, nice to see you again so soon." He said, very happy with who he had been given to interview. When Solace arrived, he found a very large, very smiley man waiting for him. The man had a wide grin on his face, as though he had just been reunited with a long lost friend. He had Sky blue eyes that gleamed behind a head of ragged hair and a mask of even worse facial hair. Gotwala & Commander Eventually Richard was dismissed, Montgomery and the rest of the staff returning to their duties as they tried to wage war on crime through paperwork. ((I'm going to give you a chance to interact first, should you want to)) Stratos & Annie ((I dunno where Annie is, I'll pm her, to see if she can get going, but for now unfortunately, I can't go through with this little segment completely until I know what's going down.)) When the two entered, they found a group of men, armed with chipped Steelwood swords and ragged leather armour gather around poker playing a card game of their own invention. They all turned to glare at the pair. "hoo the fack are you? Whadd'ya want?" One of them spoke, a weedy little man who seemed to be the voice of the group. Steelsword Pub The crowd roared in disapproval at Reyn, the unknown voice trying to argue against the desire for violence. "Oh really? Let me tell you!" Abigail roared, egging the crowd on even as she struggled to be heard herself. "We aren't treated like shit! Shit is dealt with, it's at least an issue great enough for people to try and sort out with a sewr system! To the government, we aren't even relevant enough to pay attention too! The Shields claim to want to help everyone, but what have they done? They've fucked us over! That's what they've done! Do you now how many people have left for Praxia and Secaras? Finally done with this city? Too many! We must fight to be heard, not live in fear of those heartless bastards!" All the while, a light red mist, barely visible to the eye, was being released from her palms... Tacos Jacksons knock caused the panel to open, but there were noe eyes there to greet or evaluate him. There was only a strange darkness. After a moment, the locks on the door clunked open, and the door drifted open, leaving it free for Jackson to enter.

That's why I left it open in mine

RosexRose.

After securing some suitable clothing, Adam made his way around the city, navigating to the tallest building he could find. After climbing his way to the roof, he released Lockhart from his pokeball, the brd soared around the building grateful for the freedom the open sky gave him. After a while of aerial acrobatics for training, Lockhart roosted on the ledge of the building rooftop to claim his reward for the training. The Honchkrow began to chirp and tweet, exercising his voice before launching into a light, complex little melody. The birdsong spread throughout the city, ringing out to the citizens as well as to Adam, who had a front row seat. Even he had to appreciate the birdsong. As it continued, the young man thought about how allowing the bird to perform this little rite was what allowed him to work with the Murkrow back then, a small trade that eventually grew into a habit, the one unchanging thing the two had. The two remained for a while, Lockhart content to sing and Adam to listen.

So, do we get some more Exp for this? :3

"Keep going Colere! Rip that Snakes scales off!" Claude ordered. He knew Colere could continue on, her durable body would protect her from the worst of it. Colere cotinued to clamp down with it's Jaw onto the snake, trying to ignore the pressure it was putting on the small dragon.

You, sir, are Kinky Hopefully this all helps

Hi, what In SAO, i'd be the guy who dies nigh instantly

Now make sure the job don't suck and you're gold.

Nah, it'd be a single post thing that people could get in on if they REALLY wanted to

Wait, are we doing things after getting clothes? Cuz if so, i've got a nice little idea.

Huk, you should have claimed yourself. It quite literally worked for me.

Brah, you don't even KNOW.

Y'all been busy.

"Colere, keep that Arbok distracted, Stomp again, but be ready to follow up with Bite attacks!" Claude ordered, the small dragon pounced once more, jaw lolling open, ready to clamp onto the pokemons neck.