Felicity

If Sparky has been disrespectful, you could take it to mods. He was as polite as he could be without disclosing details to the public. Otherwise, it's his RP, he gets the say.

I'm pretty sure a lot of people watched the sub of tri. As far as seasons go I liked 1,3 and 5 so Tri was nice. Even if it kinda just injected standard high school anime tropes into Digimon.

I grew up in what feels like the whitest town in the UK, I can count the amount of kids in school who were of a different race on my fingers. That said, it was never really racism, people didn't focus on the different races or faiths. Instead they targeted homosexuals. I figure there's always going to be someone targeted and someone doing the targeting. I don't want any part of that and I don't particularly care if I'm a part of that white moderate. It is my choice to make. I don't want to be involved,

the poison changes peoples appearance because it circulates through the bloodstream, which is why it starts from the left side. If you haven't got much blood pumping through your system then logically there would be no change in appearance.

Jorgen nodded to the officer. Now he just had to make sure he had a story in his head prepared as they made their way towards the station. Ahhhh, that may be harder than it first seemed. Just keep it straight and simple, otherwise you'll get caught up by your own lies. The large cyborg then set off with the officer, co-operating as needed.

I have to ask for the HP cards by default but I live in the UK so nah

Jorgens mouth hung open a little. "Uhhhhhh" Jorgen paused for a second. Right, handcuffs. They didn't really matter but it meant he was definitely going to be detained. He didn't feel he could get out of that. "He might have some special magic to escape?" Jorgen offered lamely as she offered his wrists to be shackled. It was a good attempt, he thought glumly.

Truth be told Jorgen didn't recall most of the angels features but he'd already lied, no reason to stop. "He was about six foot tall, large white feathered wings flecked with brown, brown eyes I think... Sorry, give me a moment to think, please." Jorgen spoke confidently, a little too confidently in hindsight. Best to act like his memory really was fallible. That C in Drama was coming in handy now... in a way "Uh, I think he had black hair and-" Oh now this was an idea! "He wore a uniform, like you'd wear to school."

uh Notus, how am I meant to describe the angel? You didn't really give much of a description. Shall I just give a lacklustre description of a standard angel, which would prolly label Jorgen as a racist (can't tell y'all apart) or naw?

From the sounds of it you need a tutor, not a co-host. Someone to teach you the ropes of world building and shepherding PCs through your world, and settling the details of the world. I cannot stress enough that hosting, while rewarding, is difficult and time consuming, especially if you're sloppy in the foundations of your work. If you're unsure about this RP now I again recommend taking it back to the proverbial workshop and putting more time into it. In the meantime, check out some of the RPs around here to see how things work, several were listed above by Acqui with links as well, and mabe join one to get a feel of RPing from a players perspective.

Sorry bub, this is your endeavour. If you want this to happen you have to refine it yourself, people are open to giving advice and if you can get a co-host they might help but this is still your responsibility if you put it forth. If you have things interfering with you IRL then this simply isn't the time to be starting an RP.

8/10 kinda adorable but I personally dislike avis with multiple peeps in them.

Everyone here has given fantastic advice and examples on how to improve this RP but my suggestion would be, if you're really dedicated to it, is to take it back and spend the time solidifying and focusing on what you want to happen in the story. You cannot have an RP centred around the exploration of a whole world or the conquest of many bosses to unravel a convoluted mystery. The current state of the RP section cannot sustain it without a lot of dedication and thought behind it, see Jorys RP for the best example. Either you have a contained area for people to explore and interact with or you have an outlined plot to guide them across this world you need to make. This forum has issues with freedom. Oh, and telling us outright there is a mastermind ruins the suspense for players. It doesn't really matter who this mastermind is to us, knowing they exist means they are just someone we will one day fight and kill regardless of motive. Letting us investigate and come to the conclusion they exist on our own on the other will help us achieve a sense of accomplishment. Think about what you reveal people and when if you want particularly dramatic effect that engages and entertains your players.

well Jorgen isn't going to be rendezvousing with Gabriel, or anyone for a while. Also Notus you wrote Bargus instead of Jorgen in the little segment for him.

Jorgen tried for a rueful smile, hoping it didn't come out as grim or menacing. "My name is Jorgen Von Bashfist, a cyborg. I'm afraid that was an automatic response, literally. I have a variety of, uh, sub-routines in my system that when triggered take control over my behaviour. I had been jumped in an alleyway by an angel with a mysterious glove claiming he wanted to try his new stolen magic on me and, well, I was triggered." Technically it was true, the fight or flight response was a genuine thing, he'd seen it many, many times. Felt it too. "I look kinda menacing I'll admit but I'm not up to fighting an Angel wielding magic, that's just terrifying to most humans." Jorgen cursed himself for the tangent, was that piling it on too thick? He examined the Angel's face as he carried on with his explanation, coming dangerously close to ranting. "That said, I had to go through a variety of mental exercises controlling those sub-routines before I could stop and explain myself now."

if french vanilla is as sexy as the french accent then they're doing something right.

that's saix and xemnas i can't unsee that now but its alright angry people deserve ships too