@Tacps
Issues with your character. She seems very suish in the angsty sense of the term. She starts happy and fulfilled, popular and happy. Then her dad becomes a dick and forces her to do something she really doesn't like, which to most people would be a position of honour (also impossible seeing as the kimono girls are sisters iirc). Then she becomes moody and distant, pushing her friends away even though she really just wants friends, becoming meek and timid after being pretty out-going, judging by the popularity. You see what I'm saying? It makes no real sense and is just a little ridiculous.