Aurorix

707 almost as bad as 70

705 almost as bad as 70 prepare for a whole 100 of 70's

Tangela

"Whoa!" Slade said as the Donphan rushed into the place. "Flare return!" He said getting his ball an putting him back it. 'I think it's time for this one to show what it's got.' He thought to himself as he grabbed a ball from his belt. "Ok Sasuke, time to shine!" He said as he threw the ball and out popped the frog. "HEY! IF YOU DON'T WANT TO FALL ASLEEP, COVER YOUR EARS! NOW!" "You heard the man cover!" He said towards Sasuke and they both covered their ears until the song stopped and it seemed alto of the pokemon went to sleep but there were a few that weren't, probably the one's who were paralyzed by that stun spore earlier. "Ok Sasuke, Use water pulse on that Donphan still running around in front of us!" Slade said pointing to one that seemed to be suffering from the stun spore. Sasuke quickly rushed toward the pokemon and fire a water pulse, at a very close range, aiming for his side.

701 almost as bad as 70 I'm still trying to write something for that '-_-

Rhyhorn

699

697 almost as bad as 70

Koffing

695

693

What do you think of Chapter 2? Did you enjoy it? Yes, I enjoyed it quite well. What about my writing? Where can I improve? No, I think you've been doing a good job. If anything elaborate more sometimes but that's it. Which characters under my control feel real / which characters need improvement? Lana feels real, Redwood needs more time to shine! Who is your favorite NPC and why? I honestly don't have one Who is your least favorite NPC and why? Don't have one What do you think about the darker parts I included in this chapter? (Hydreigon and Celebi) I really enjoyed them, giving a more darker feel of an overall light hearted world Which Legendary do you think will befriend your character? And why? I think Victini because Slade is light-hearted and upbeat most of the time. Also they are both playful with other people and like helping others as well. What do you expect to happen in Chapter 3: Winter Cup? Fighting, RoG, and CHRISTMAS! If your character was approached instead of Slade; how would he / she react? :T Is there anything else I can improve upon? Not that I can see

690 Wow, such luck but much gone so sad ;~;

687 Almost as bad as 70 I did, but I'm in class at the moment. (Insert ninja face here) Shhhhh.....

685

683

681

Voltorb

678 almost as bad as 70

Gengar

670 Almost as bad as 70

Gasly

Shellder

668

I'm only against the rebellion part. Useless killing is just that, a waste of life. Honestly I agree they are being treated badly though they're going at it the wrong way. Death is the last resort and I haven't seen any of them try a civil approach yet.