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As the name suggests, this topic is for feed back of my Creative writing post. I mainly started that to keep those who are excited for the game buisy while we work a bit more on the demo. So Tell me what you think? Like it? Love it? Hate it? Needs more Deadpool? feel free to share your thoughts.

Note: The events of this Story take place before my Fan made game, there WILL be spoilers. You have been warned. the name of the hero depends on the gender you wish for them to be. Chapter 1: Welcome To Poke'Tech. It was a warm summer's night, The Scientists were hard at work as usual. Their mission, create a poke'mon with the power to surpass all poke'mon. the process has taken many months, and to this day they still have not succeeded. But one Scientist named Xander/Melody (the hero of the game), would not give up so easily. As the night went on and on, the persistent scientist decided to call it a night and head to their room for some needed rest. The other scientist of the experiment waited for him/her to leave, and they began to speak. The first was a genetics expert named Clain, he was a bald headed jolly fellow who seemed to smile even on the darkest of days. the second was a Poke'ologist named Maree. She had short green hair and always seemed to have a bit of an attitude. The third was a psychologist named Edward, he had red spike hair and was rather quiet at times. and the last member was Susan, she was second in command of the operation, She had long blond Hair and was an over all nice person. When Xander/Melody left the Experimental room. Clain said to the others "Drat... Another failure, looks like giving the poke'mon the armor of a Golem wasn't a good idea after all". Maree snapped at him "Well what did you think was going to happen cue ball? Have you ever heard of a Rock/Psychic type before?". " Solrock and Lunatone are Rock/Psychic types" Susan said calmly, trying to keep the peace. Maree got even more annoyed "Well LUCKY them, at this rate we will never make a new Poke'mon!". "Never say never Maree. We almost had it, next time I'm sure we will do it right." said Edward. Although she was still frustrated, Maree gave in to the others and calmly said "I'm going to check on Porygon" and left the room without saying a word. "Call me curious, but how did we get DNA from Mew?" Said Clain. Susan responded "It just came to us, and let us do a check up on it. that is how we managed to get a blood sample and get its DNA. and since then the doc wanted to base the poke'mon of mew." "Well lets hope the next day we have a bit more luck. I am eager to meet this new poke'mon once it is born" Said Clain with a smile on his face. The three scientist then left the room and decided to call it a night. The next morning the Team was once again hard at work, Xander/Melody was giving out commands as usual, as the other scientists were doing their best to complete them. Electricity crackled, machines roared, and steam erupted as the experiment went on and on. minutes turned into hours and the rage of the machines grew even stronger. And then all of the sudden, the power went dead and the room fell silent. "GRAAAA! failed again!" Mare roared in anger, but before she could throw another fit. she was silenced by Susan "Wait... look at Xander/Melody". The four of them glanced over to him/her and saw that they were smiling, staring deeply at a stasis tank that the were using for their experiment. It was't long before Clain decided to see what it was Xander/Melody was looking at. and there it was... a small embryo of an poke'mon. "We did it...." He said completely surprised. Maree looked at him completely puzzled and said" Wait? what did you say?". "WE DID IT!!!" Clain said roaring in excitement. the others rushed over to see the organic mass. The poke'mon embryo was purple, and looked almost like mew. "What are you going to name it?" said Susan. Xander/Melody continued to look at the newly born poke'mon and calmly said "Mewtwo..."

And lest not forget, Mewtwo is even smarter than Alakazam, and it can only learn 4 moves too. and the rock smash thing? thats a pretty good point too! Like the move rock wrecker. why cant I use THAT move to obliterate rocks, IT'S IN THE F**KING NAME! And the Water bottle? why doesn't that HURT rock, ground, and fire types? you know, because they are WEAK against water!

What about this? there are poke'mon that can and I quote "STEAL YOUR SOUL" and yet its never seen in the games or the anime when the same surcimstances are met. poke'mon can use selfdestruct and yet don't die. you can fly on birds 1/16 your size, surf on poke'mon that shouldn't be able to swim in the first place. you can capture GOD its self, and above all...poke'mon will only obey you if you have X number of a martial item. the poke'mon world is a strange place

I find the poke'dex entry of Kabutops Illogical. How dose a poke'mon based off an extinct bottom feeder suck out the fluids of live poke'mon? the entry DOSE explain how it can learn absorb, mega drain, and giga drain. but not how the animal its self is a predator if the crature it's based off of (Trilobites) are not.

Well If I can find some one who can help out my Programmer with a few events we may be able to launch a demo soon.

Might actually use some of these teams as trainers in Victory road for infinity.... that's right some of them are just THAT good looking.

Well for one, its best to stick with poke'mon that best represent their typing. Steel types are known for high defenses and durability, and Dragon types are known for wrecking other poke'mon with shear power. You have the right idea having A salamance and Metagross on your team, but the rest are better off in the box. Tyrantrum and Dragonite are good dragon types to replace Goodra and Haxorus. Tyrantrum is part Rock type meaning it can take more of a hit against any fire types you come across (and we all know who that's going to be good for), also being a dragon type means you can use it on your team without feeling like its cheating. Dragonite is an old R/B/Y Vet. who has been a good poke'mon ever since the games hit america so using one of them is a no brainer. since it can learn thundershock. thunderbolt, and thunder punch, fighting water types will be a breeze. as for steel types Metagross is a good pick for it is part phycic type and will be a threat to any poison types the E4 throw at you, but the other 2 must go. Try out Aggron and Lucario instead. aggron is part Rock type meaning that its defence will be all but unbreakable. and mega evolving it will make it even more of a wall, while Lucario being part fighting type will be best for tearing down wall poke'mon. next you should give ALL your poke'om items that will benefit them in combat, remember you can only have one mega poke'mon at a time so choose wisely witch one you give a stone. Your dragon types will be better off with items to boost their defenses since most of them hardly have any, or boost their attack powers to give them more of an edge against walls. as for the steel types, mainly give them Items to boost their defense, but DO give a mega stone to either Aggron or Lucario. Finally and obviously be sure to level up your poke'mon at least 10 levels above the champions, its best to have them all be at lvl 100 but that's easier said than done. I say 10 levels because that's seem's the a tad bit more reasonable.

They look pretty good. I am actually looking for a Sprite designer for my Game "Poke'mon Infinity". if you are interested PM me.

I WOULD give you my ideas.. but then I'd be Giving away spoilers for my fan game "Poke'mon Infinity".... well I guess I could just give one that isn't going to be in the game Tyrunt/Tyrantrum Steel/Dragon Fairy Hunter (New): Grants Immunity to any and all fairy type moves I was always confused to how it came about that fairies trumped dragons... Correct me If i'm wrong but don't dragons EAT fairies? well I decided to not only make this poke'mon part steel, but also strait up give it immunity to fairies. This poke'mon was inspired by the Autobot "Grimlock" from transformers. He was so strong that his power even rivals Optimus, their leader. I also game it the teal typing so that its main weakness would be fighting, the typing that is often represented as "The Hero". I would make something cooler, but again, I don't want ti give anything away for Infinity

Sounds complicated, but cool

So many good ones, I'm guessing that "Citadel" is from a fan made game. I might kieep a look out for any ideas for Infinity

My pet peeve.... Is getting Ignored. there are times when I talking with a group of people and they don't even listen to what I say... as if I wasn't even there. I mean come on... is it really too much to ask for some one to just listen?

Mind the double post. But I'd like to inform the forum that with he progress we have been making, we could expect a Beta to be ready rather soon. but as of this moment My Lead Programmer is having some problems with family. and is at the moment out of contact with me, but I am still accepting any and all forms of help, if you are interested feel free to lend a hand.

He is still a champion though, because the events of Johto take place after those in Kanto

Lol, yeah If I had to pick an EXISTING champ, I'd probably pick Lance too

The Title says it all, if you were The champion of ANY Reigon (wheather it be real or fan made). What would it be? What would your title be? What would your team be like? How easy/hard was it to GET this to be the champion? all these questions and more are things I'd like to be answered. For an example, I'll use MY character in my up coming fan made game "Poke'mon Infinity" that I'm working on with another member. Name: Tyrannt (Because of Reasons) Reigon: Genda Home Town: Sigma City Age: 22 Title: Hero of Genda Starter Poke'mon: Charmander *Shiny* Team: (sorry, not until the game is 100% finished. can have you prepairing now can we XD) and that's how its done. show me what YOUR ideal Champion is, the sky is the limit here.

okay if the goal is to ask questions... I got one for ya.... Dose a set of sets contain its self?

I'd say the Gen 1 starters. they look more like they are growing up than evolving

Venasaur And Blastoise Uuuuum never mind that's already been done... Mewtwo and Mew... for no reason at all

I will admit that I am one of those people

Umm whats the point of this thread?

Every time I play mystery dungeon 1 + 2 I always play as a charmander and have my partener be a squirtle... don't ask why.. I just like that duo

I'd have a mixed team. no reason to stick with just one type