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  1. A soothing melody stirs a beautiful woman from her slumber. Batting her lashes, the burred world drains away as everything comes into focus. The gentle tune tickles her ears, begging her to search the room. With only a flickering lightbulb hanging from the ceiling, much of it is lost to shadows. Yet she discovers a toy carousel spotlighted on a wooden table nearby. Ivory stallions race to the music, while a brass key slowly turns its gears. With each revolution, the song slows along with the galloping steeds. Seconds pass, and everything comes to a stop. As the silence continues to linger, panic starts to set in. Looking around, she spies an assortment of marionettes hanging from the walls, strangled by the same strings that give them life. Some of the wooden figures have their soulless eyes locked on her, never to avert their gaze. “Where, where am I?” Panic starts to set in, as the woman struggles to remember. Trying to recall the events that lead her here only yields hazy memories and a sharp pain in the back of her head. Slowly, she rises to her feet, finding the strength in her legs have been severely sapped. After a few wobbling steps, she walks forward only to have something cold tug on her leg. Gazing at her ankle, she finds an iron cuff hugging her ankle, binding her to the floor by heavy chains. “What’s going on?” she speaks louder. “The lovely lady is awake,” a cheerful voice calls to her from the shadows. She turns in the direction of the voice. Whoever it is that she sees it sends her reeling. Her feet get tangled in the chains, causing her to tumble on her backside. Nightmarish horror fills her sight. “You know me,” he jeers, gleefully clapping his hands. “The lovely lady knows me!” She hugs herself, “What do you want with me?” “Maria, Maria, my dear sweet Maria, you really do not know?” the childish voice sings. “You go out every night, to feel some excite, but leave your daughter at home. She fends for herself, no food on the shelf, and goes to bed alone.” “My daughter,” her words spit like a venomous snake. “Did she put you put to this?” “That would be great, but she’s only eight,” the merry tone dies. “I do this on my own. You’ve been a bad, bad mother Maria. Neglectful, selfish, abusive. No love for your sweet child. “Ashley,” she shouts, her words having a venomous bite, “Did my daughter put you up to this?” “That would be great, but she’s only eight, I do this on my own,” the merry tone starts to fade. “You’ve been a bad mother. Neglectful, self-centered, selfish. No love for your child. Your daughter deserves someone to stay by her side, and that’s what I’ll make.” Casually, he strolls over to a workshop table where the marionettes hang above his head. Rummaging through the tools, he throws anything he does not need over his shoulder. Maria watches as saws fall near her feet. Water fills her eyes. She whimpers like a frightened animal. All of a sudden, she hears an “aha” as he raises his arms up in the air. Whipping around, the light shines of the jagged teeth of a buzz saw. “No, no, leave me alone,” she shrieks, trying to crawl away. “Now-now, my dear, do not fear, everything will soon be at an end,” he sings, stepping on the chain. “With these tools I’ll start to take you apart, and then you’ll finally have a heart!” A flick of the switch spins the saw to life. The wailing of the motors drowns out Maria’s blood curdling scream as he kneels down to begin his work.
  2. Probably my favorite time of year. And so far my October has been good. Got to go to a pumpkin patch with my wife, enjoy cider and caramel apples while looking at the different jack-o-lanterns they made.
  3. [b]Name:[/b] Raviel the Phantom [b]Age:[/b] 26 [b]Birthday:[/b] June 20 1990 [b]Location:[/b] Pennsylvania [b]Height: [/b] 5' 11" [b]Hair Color:[/b] Brown [b]Eye Color:[/b] Blue [b]Live With:[/b] My Wife [b]Pets?:[/b] Not aloud to have any (I want a dog!) [b]Relationships?:[/b] Married [b]Crushes lately?:[/b] [b]Dream Job:[/b] What Tony Stark Does [b]Currently Playing:[/b] [b]Favourite Food:[/b] Pizza [b]Favourite Drink: [/b] Yuengling [b]Favourite Color: [/b] Red [b]Favourite kind of Music: [/b] Rock/Alternative [b]Favourite Band:[/b] Three Days Grace [b]Favourite Album: [/b] Don't Have One [b]Favourite Game: [/b] Paper Mario: Thousand Year Door [b]Favourite Genre of Game:[/b] Action/Adventure [b]Favourite Hobbies:[/b] Drawing, Writing, Golf, Archery, Hunting [b]Favourite Movies:[/b] Tremors, Rush Hour, Iron Man [b]Favourite Shows:[/b] Lucifer, Sleepy Hollow, Game of Thrones
  4. What's your favorite scary movie?

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    2. Alchemia Chan
    3. AeroWraith

      AeroWraith

      Friday the 13th, because it's the only scary movie I won't be terrified of watching :3

    4. Shamitako

      Shamitako

      Well, I don't watch horror, but there's some good suspense stuff about. I'd be hard pressed to bother thinking of a favorite

  5. Well that is for after battle. Status curing items will still be needed in battle.
  6. I never thought in my entire life that I would be walking into a Chuck E Cheese in a business suit

  7. Sun or Moon. I haven't been this conflicted since choosing my major.

    1. BIGJRA

      BIGJRA

      Since my brother's officially out of the Pokemon phase I'm finally getting both

    2. AeroWraith

      AeroWraith

      Yeah, they both seem good. I think I'm gonna go with Moon though.

  8. Scary Pumpkin Mask + Sleeping Wife = Laughter

  9. Making my Special Caramel Apple Jello

  10. Sent in a querry letter to five agents. Spell checked everything, thought it was perfect. Hit sent. Realized I forgot to change the names addressed to.

  11. Story Idea #2: A Killer/Ghost takes on the guise of a local toy store mascot and murders the parents of abused children.

    1. Shamitako

      Shamitako

      .

      Okay, so, that sounds like FNaF but with a plot I would care about

    2. Bluewolf

      Bluewolf

      Oh cool. Sounds like it could be the start to something really interesting.

  12. Story Idea: Serial killer who kidnaps his victims and makes them play him in games of chance with gruesome losses. Is it too much like saw?

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    2. Raindrop Valkyrie

      Raindrop Valkyrie

      *broken morality system.

    3. Ironbound

      Ironbound

      Joker: I guess it's time to face the music, eh, Dent?

      Dent: Get out of my face, clown!

      Joker: Which one?

    4. Combat

      Combat

      ^ That was the second worst burn of Two Face's life.

  13. Its my favorite time of the year.

  14. Well it depends on the generation, but I always use Pokemon I just like. So my team might reflect my Pokemon Red Team: -Charizard -Vaporeon -Magneton -Alakazam -Tauros -Dragonite (My Ace)
  15. I actually think they should just cut Ash's story and focus more on whatever they are doing with this.
  16. Oh the horror. I can't find my 3DS

  17. I think this is the closest we've been to a Pokemon release with so little information. I kinda like it, but I would like to see what the starters turn into. I still have no idea which one I'm going to choose.
  18. One feature Reborn has done which I completely forgot to mention is the ability to change your Pokemon's Nature. Imagine how useful that would be? You finally catch a Shiny Pokemon, but its nature is garbage.
  19. Anyone else notice that with the Johto Gyms, that that one leader had a type advantage over the next one?

    1. FairFamily

      FairFamily

      except for bugsy.

    2. AuthorReborn

      AuthorReborn

      Also depends on your definitions of type advantage for Gyms 3-5, since that's just immunities and no SE damage.

  20. I remember playing the games as a kid with Red and Blue, and once you figured out the weakness system (this was before the internet) it was not really challenging. Heck, most gyms were surrounded by Pokemon that they were weak against. And by more challenging I don't mean Reborn-Level difficulty, but something more of Whitney being the standard for gyms.
  21. So a lot of us have played many a fan game. I personally have played Zeta, Reborn, Rejuvenation, Insurgence, and Uranium, and have enjoyed each game. The creators of these fantastic games each had something that the originals, while loved, seem to lack that make them a bit better in my opinion. And instead of banning them like they did to Uranium, Nintendo should really draw inspiration from some of these games. What parts in these games do you think would be awesome to appear in a Game Freak Official Pokemon Game. For me it has to be the following: -Reborn: More in-depth storyline and harder gym battles -Zeta: HM items -Rejuvenation: Reverse Candies/Disobeying Pokemon Level Caps -Insurgence: Delta Pokemon (I guess they did with Aloan Pokemon) -Uranium: Standard Pokemon evolving into a legendary
  22. It's a beautiful day outside...

    1. Alchemia Chan

      Alchemia Chan

      It sure is, if I wanted to get burnt to a crisp then get drenched in acid rain by nightfall.

    2. Raviel the Phantom
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