-Whenever someone addresses you by name they call you /PN. In order for it to show as the player's name, the backslash needs to be the other way. It should be \PN.
-There's a box with a Poke Ball that gives an error when clicked on
-The Move Relearner can offer to teach you a move before you get your first Pokemon
-When you jump down the sewers after the guy wants the Eevee back, there's an empty dialogue box
Other than that, it seems interesting so far and the title screen is really well done