Not bad! I'm assuming you used mixcraft for this? I recognize the instruments because I used it myself before as well, hee. But! If so, you really might want start looking into using effects because the default instrument sounds for mixcraft aren't exactly the best quality if you don't slap some effects on it.
or you pirate fl studio from somewhere. immediately much better despite being a tough cookie to figure out at first BUTTTT once you do know how it works you'll never want to switch back to mixcraft