Dragon116

Why did you have Silk use Double-Edge on Froslass? It' sa ghost type, so Double Edge wouldn't impact it.

I agree on every point here, especially the English bit. It's not broken English, it's just slightly erroneous (for instance, you say beated instead of beat). It's totally understandable and has never hindered the meaning of what you're saying.

Now this final update is the one that interests me. I felt this part never got the proper attention, so I'm eager to see what you did and how you faired.

Hardcore meteors to be defeated by the logic of a 12 year old, timid, psychologically distraught girl too.

I disagree Kamina. If everything is based on it's ability to use items, then that would make something mediocre, like Unfeazant and make it more powerful than an unboosted Blaziken, thus skewing all the results. If everything is based on the same amount of X-Items or whatnot, then essentially it's the same as if they were in a vacuum. Pokemon are better judged in their natural state, which is one of the reasons LordWallace and his partner are not judging based on breedable moves (unless obtainable through event). In regards to Feraligatr, you can't get DDance on it until the end of the game, making that move only usable for 1 gym. Therefore Feraligatr needs to be ranked a lot lower than something naturally viable early on like Samurott.

Wow, I think you're the first person of 1.8 to beat Aster and Eclipse without relying on Aya to do it for you. That Rotom will likely be a huge asset in the coming gyms, especially if you brought a data chip to swap your Rotom form around.

Why is Flounder II eating your hand, and you're not screaming? This seems highly painful. "It's almost like this school has extremely low standards or something" - You're probably referring to someone here. My guess is Taka. What the hell is this? "Or gotten distracted and run off somewhere." - Probably to meet Cal. "Oh no Sickle has become...an ICE-SICKLE!" - *Loud applause" You remembered to put the bow on too =D

It looks like someone dressed Stewie Griffin up as Charlotte for Halloween. Why do you wish to confuse me wytch?

That T3RR4 leaves me confused and awed by the adorable coloring. Much success.

LMAO Stun Gun. I claim police brutality, or at least 10 year old Kanto Champion brutality

I actually need a bit more work done with this file, since the levels and movesets (as well as EV/IV spread, and potentially nature, but those aren't a huge concern, just preferable) don't match up to the leaders they're from. If anyone has the ability to edit the file, as well as has the moves and levels, (and preferably EV/IV, and nature) that they have under their original owners, I would really appreciate it I updated the OP (which is quoted here with that edit) with the file Hiroki gave me. In regards to the non-leaders: Espeon, Glaceon, Umbreon (all lv 26 atm) should be ZEL at Blackstream Factory (I don't think we meet ZEL after that, but if we do, it should be then instead) Typlosion should be Cal from Pyrous Mountain Emboar should be Victoria at Apophyll Seviper should be Sirius from Yuyeru Electivire should be Sigmund from Belrose Mansion Nidoking should be Cain at Vanhalen Castle Volcarona should be Bennett from Luna's gym Lunatone and Solrock should be from the Eclipse/Aster fight before Calceon (where Eclipse dies) Chatot should be Taka at WTC Roserade should be Fern at the Chateau Walrien should be Blake from the Chateau Garchomp should be Solaris from the Chateau

Commander the Lanturn still pulling off incredible feats with parafusion hax. I'm impressed you took Spiritomb down so quick. It gave me headaches on my run.

Pwomise us you'll be okay =D In all seriousness though, hopefully you aren't anywhere near those attacks.

I like Blake's expression. The outfit seems less crisp than SIrius', probably the colored pencil. Good work on shading it all though!

Sorry to hear Solaris thrashed you =(

I voted Mega Houndoom because I like Charlotte's whole team being awesome, rather than just 1 pokemon. Fern seems to have a mixed bag of support. Personally, I rather only see Megas on Julia because you only get her if you beat Solaris, which would be a great reward. Keep Togekiss for Ciel too. It's bulky and has enough offensive presence to prevent setups (other than Clefable, that shit is beyond broken). Ciel's current team is way too vanilla, so definitely scrap the other 4. Skarmory would be awesome, but Titania claimed it >.>. Drifblim would be badass, since it can D-Bond, Stockpile, and just be a nuisance. Emolga would be awesome as well. Honchkrow might be good here, but its defenses suck ass. There really aren't any good options for dealing with Ice, which is why Talonflame is important on her team, but then it falls to their other weakness, Rock. Hawlucha could handle both Ice and Rock, but you seem hesitant to use it since Samson already has it.

Shadow Mewtwo is part of Rejuvenation. I have never seen one in Reborn, so my guess is no. Ame already gave herself a ton of tasks with E16, let alone all the potential post game content.

Solaris's Garchomp, T3RR4's Garchomp, Lin's Garchomp, against your Sunkurn in a battle of cuteness So maybe that meteor/swiss cheese was a background image. And here we were all conspiracy theorists.

Yes...definitely meant that. Ignore my previous comment :[keepitclean]:

Yes but you took out half of Charizard's HP in one go. I think a better prepared team could take Charizard Y down without suffering many casulties. Ultimately it's up to you and what you want this game's difficulty to be.

I CAN HAZ LEVITATES! That makes me amooon to gwound. Tynammo POWA! My namesake will prove itself to you one way or the other =D

Damn, Radomus really gave you a run for your money. Hopefully you can use Luna's field against her. Also, I'm glad my second appearance helped during that fight =D Also, Farceus - The F doesn't stand for Fake, although it is also 4 letters long.

I am planning a new run to run tandem with Hiroki's. For this run, I would like Bouffalant as my starter, and I also request the following Aces to be added to my file. Cain: Nidoking Victoria: Emboar Fern: Roserade (it's his true ace) Julia: Electrode Florinia: Cradily Corey: Crobat Taka: Chatot Zel: Espeon, Glaceon, Umbreon Shelly: Volbeat Aster & Eclipse: Lunatone & Solrock (since their true aces are taken) Shade: Chandelure Cal: Typlosion (since he still has Magmortar during Ametrine and I don't battle him then). Kiki: Lucario (Medicham is her true Ace...but it dies in the plot) Solaris: Garchomp Aya: Dragalge Sigmund: Electivire Sirius: Seviper Bennett: Volcarona (technically Butterfree/Vivillon though) Serra: Froslass Noel: Cinchinno (Clefable is too close to Noel to leave him, hence why he gets to break the leader rules). El: Ditto Radomus: Gardevoir Luna: Umbreon Samson: Conkeldurr Charlotte: Ninetales Blake: Walrein Terra: Excadrill (Garchomp is true ace...reborn wise, but Solaris already claims it) Ciel: Altaria Game.rxdata

Are you telling me Sir Robin and Curse couldn't take a hit? I find that crazy. Pumba obviously could, but damage would be terrible. In regards to Mega Y, you either keep Houndoom, or you're forced to use Mega Y since Cal already claimed Mega X. Samon just got upgraded to Mega Blazekin, so that's out too. Maybe give Mega Y an Iron Ball?

I like it. The face is very clean, the outfit design is well done. His legs are too short imo, but overall very well done!