Just finished the game. I was honestly really impressed. Tons of content for a "prologue" and the it all fit well together. The photos of real people for the characters were kinda weird at first, but I got used to them. I enjoy that the main character has dialogue, and the writing never felt forced to me. So good job! I have some notes/questions.
When I was picking the unofficial starter, I was kinda confused by the "Easy, Medium, Hard" that was attached to each one. Does your pick of the starter change the difficulty of the game? Like the actual levels and mons on peoples teams? What was your intention with those?
- Pretty sure "obstacles" was misspelled in the intro
- You can walk on the walls in the opening room with Teala
- "Spectacle" is misspelled at the registration thing
One last thing, when the mc is getting directions to Mt. kora, he gets told to go East from the cemetery, but if you're setting the top of the screen as North, you actually have to go west to get to mt. kora.
Okay, I'm done.
Thanks so much for the game, I really did think it was pretty awesome! Sorry for the barrage of screenshots, just trying to be helpful!