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Strider

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  1. I'm not a writing critic. The main thing I noticed is that tenses are mismatched. It also seems a little short, even by short story standards. Are you planning on doing more work on it, or are you satisfied?
  2. Most Valuable Player. I think you contributed the most post-wise.
  3. 100!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! We win! Cool Girl= MVP?
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