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  1. Prologue 1 Of Bonnie: Reborn's True Savior! is up and out! You'll notice that the actual very start of the thread shows a Table Of Contents. You'll be able to search through there to view any story content you might have missed. No more scrolling for a long time to find the last chapter you read. It'll be right there on the 1st page for you. But please, read and enjoy! 😄

     

     

  2. 4 years have passed since Bonnie had her adventure with Ash, Serena and her brother Clemont. She learned a lot throughout her journey but after that, she hadn’t really done anything else except for a couple of things. That would be collecting a full team of Pokemon. But in order to tell this story, we have to go back to when she turned 10 years old. In case you all forgot about it, when a girl or boy turns 10 years old, they are qualified to go on their very own Pokemon adventure. They go out on their own, or with friends, collect Pokemon, battle Gym Leaders and once they get 8 badges, they are qualified to take on the Elite 4. If they are able to defeat them, then they are able to challenge the Champion to a match and if they are victorious against them, they will become the new champion of the league. But Bonnie’s story didn’t quite go down that road. In fact, she didn’t even challenge any of the Gym Leaders in the Kalos Region. She wanted to go on a journey like the 1 she had 2 years ago but to a different region. A region she never heard of. But I’m getting ahead of myself here. Let me tell you all how Bonnie started her very own Pokemon adventure. Bonnie was sleeping. It was her 10th birthday and she knew that. She went to sleep early the night before just so the day would come faster. Her alarm clock went off and she shot up in bed and shut it off. She was already beaming with excitement. She would be leaving home to start her Pokemon adventure. She went running to her brother’s room to wake him up. He had been working on an invention the night before and had stayed up late. She ran into his room and shouted at him. Bonnie: BIG BROTHER! WAKE UP! IT’S MY BIRTHDAY TODAY! WHICH MEANS I GET TO GO ON A POKEMON ADVENTURE! Clemont: Whoa! Wha… Quiet down Bonnie. I didn’t get much- Bonnie: COME ON BIG BROTHER! YOU GOTTA GET UP! I’M LEAVING TODAY! Clemont: Ow! Stop yelling! Alright. Alright. I’ll be downstairs in a bit. Bonnie ran downstairs where her father ,whose name is Meyer, was. He was making breakfast. Bonnie sat down at the table and waited for her meal to be made. It could have been the last time she had a home cooked meal for a while. Her dad put the food on the plate and put it in front of her. Clemont then made it downstairs and sat down at the table. Meyer: Good morning you 2. I see you got a rather loud awakening son. -chuckles- Clemont: Yes. I didn’t get much sleep. But I suppose that doesn’t matter. Most likely more Gym Battles today. Gotta work on more inventions. Bonnie: And say good bye to me! I get to go on a Pokemon adventure all by myself today! Clemont: Yes I know. I am actually going to miss you when you go believe it or not. Meyer: I am too. My son is a Gym Leader and now my daughter is going to become a Pokemon trainer. You both are growing up so fast. Bonnie: Aww daddy. It’ll be ok. Meyer: I know sweetie. Clemont: I guess that means someday me and you will be having a Gym Battle. Bonnie: Ummm… About that… Meyer and Clemont weren’t expecting that to be what Bonnie responded with. They thought she was going to travel the region to collect the badges, challenge the elite 4 and maybe even the champion but it didn’t sound like that with what she said. Clemont: What do you mean? Bonnie: I just… I don’t know if I wanna go on an adventure here. Meyer: Ohh. Is that all? That’s fine then. So where are you going to start your adventure? Kanto? Sinnoh? I know I heard about a new place called Alola. Bonnie: It’s actually none of those places. Clemont: Then… where? Bonnie: I honestly don’t know. Meyer: I don’t understand sweetie. Bonnie: I want to go on an adventure like we did with Ash, Pikachu and Serena. But in a different region. A place I’ve never been to before. But I just don’t know where that is. Clemont: Hmm. I suppose that makes sense. It doesn’t sound like a bad plan. The only thing that’s bad with it is that you want to go somewhere you’ve never been to which means basically somewhere you never even heard of. Meyer: So what are you going to do then? Bonnie: Well I’m still going to go out traveling through Kalos. I’m just not gonna be taking on any Gyms. I’m gonna try to revisit some of the places we’ve been to in our old adventure. Meyer: Well… if that’s what you wish to do, then I won’t stop you. I just want you to have fun Bonnie. Bonnie: I know daddy! Clemont: Maybe you can run into those Pokemon that you made friends with again. Bonnie: Do you think they’d remember me? Clemont: I’m sure they will. Friends never forget a face. Bonnie: Hmm. I think I may do that then. It’d be nice to see them again. Meyer: Well, you should hurry up and eat dear. Bonnie: Ok daddy! As Bonnie was eating Dedenne ran up onto the table and nuzzled (not the move) against Bonnie’s cheek. She patted it on the head and gave it a piece of her pancake that she was eating. It quickly ate the pancake and smiled at Bonnie satisfyingly. Clemont: So I take it that you’ll be taking Dedenne with you? Bonnie: Mhm. It’s my starter Pokemon! -chuckles- Clemont: Ohh! I almost forgot! Clemont ran upstairs into his room. Bonnie, Dedenne and Meyer could hear a lot of rustling going on. Whatever Clemont was doing was causing a lot of ruckus. After a couple of minutes of throwing things around from his room, it stopped and he came running back downstairs. Meyer: What in the world were you doing that was causing that much noise up there son? Clemont: -nervously chuckles- Sorry about that dad. But I was looking for this. Clemont then held out his hand and in it was a PokeBall. He gave it to Bonnie but she seemed confused. Bonnie: Uhh… Thanks brother but why are you giving me this? Clemont: Don’t you remember? This is Dedenne’s PokeBall. I caught it with this when you begged me to catch it. Bonnie: Ohh yea. I forgot about that. But you know Dedenne hates being inside of a PokeBall. Clemont: I know but it doesn’t hurt to keep its PokeBall with you at all times. Bonnie: Well… I suppose that’s true. Thanks Clemont. Bonnie took the PokeBall and put it onto her belt. The 2 embraced in a hug which Dedenne also participated in. Meyer: I’m so glad you 2 are my kids. Clemont: Dad. Meyer: I know. I know. Bonnie: Welp, I’m done daddy! That was really yummy! Meyer: Alright hun. Meyer took the dirty dish and put it into the sink. Bonnie quickly went upstairs and got dressed, washed herself, as well as Dedenne, and put what she needed in her bag. After about an hour of getting ready, she ran downstairs and bolted for the door but before she could open it, her father stopped her. Meyer: Hold on there. Bonnie: What daddy? I wanna go! Meyer: I know sweetie. I know. I just wanted a hug and to say good bye that’s all. The 2 embraced in a hug. It was a touching moment for Meyer at least. Bonnie just wanted to start her journey. Clemont also hugged her as soon as their dad let go. Unlike their father though, this was a more quick hug. He knew his sister wanted to start her journey. Meyer: Be careful Bonnie. Clemont: Take care of my little sister Dedenne. Dedenne: -squeaks excitedly- Bonnie: Bye you 2! Bonnie swung open the door, ran out and shut the door closed. Her 2 family members stood there looking at the door for a couple of seconds before Meyer broke the silence. Meyer: You think she’ll be alright? Clemont: She’s clumsy but I’m sure she’ll be alright. You can’t worry about her all the time dad. Meyer: I know son. Welp, it’s time to get to work.
  3. Table Of Contents Prologue/The Team Season 1 Season 2
  4. Alright. So I've been spending the past 3 days doing the Prologues/Pokemon Team Captures part of the Bonnie Reborn Written Story Run and I think... I'm gonna release the 1st Prologue Episode today. So stay tuned for that. Btw, this will be a new thread. Will not be touching the other 1 at all. Just letting you all know. Also, these 1st couple of Prologues probably won't be that long but should be enough to catch your interests. I hope so anyways.

    1. Q-Jei

      Q-Jei

      You always push yourself to give us playthroughs of quality. I really enjoy your efforts! Since Bonnie's Adventures have been announced a while ago, I'm glad it finally arrives! I'll stay tune for this, good luck 😉

       

      PS: Will we see James in Reborn again? I kinda liked his story as well 🙂

    2. J-Awesome_One

      J-Awesome_One

      It will continue. It's just I've been wanting to do this 1 since late 2017. I wanna get a lot of this out when I'm able to. But James will make its return sometime. Promise. 😄

  5. So I think I'm confident enough to say that this has been opened long enough. So I'm gonna announce the winner. Before I announce the winner though, Bonnie indeed is going to capture 4 Pokemon in my written story run. It's just that 1 of them I deff knew she'd be using on her team. That's why you all chose different options of 3 blindly. So, the winner is... #5 and #6. Which means it's a tie. So I'm gonna go to my phone and put in 5 and 6 and whichever gets chosen will be the ones she catches in her journey. And the winner is... NUMBER 5 IS THE WINNER! So thank you to all the people that voted. This was really fun and... Wait. You wanna know what the options were? Well... Alright. I'll tell everyone except for the 5th 1. You'll see that in the story. Option #1 - Mienfoo/Maractus/Tynamo Option #2 - Aron/Gothita/Mareanie Option #3 - Sawk/Happiny/Frillish Option #4 - Yanma/Trapinch/Timburr Option #6 - Qwilfish/Crabrawler/Mudbray So there were the 5 options that were not picked. I tried going for weird/cute/strong Pokemon because I think they fit with her. So yea. I'll see you all whenever the actual story drops. Stay Awesome!
  6. So as I stated on my post about the Bonnie written reborn run a couple of days ago, I'm gonna do a new (or tbh, a more updated version of the prologue I've already done) prologue for when I can finally start it. But I've been thinking about something. I'm of course doing the whole "Bonnie meets up with her old Pokemon friends and catches them" thing BUT! Should they all be under 1 prologue episode or should they all be under their own separate sections? Here's an example of what I mean.

     

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    Prologue Episode

    Pokemon Episode 1

    Pokemon Episode 2

    Pokemon Episode 3

    Pokemon Episode 4

    Pokemon Episode 5

    End of Episode

     

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    Prologue Episode

    End of Episode

    Pokemon Episode 1

    End Of Episode

    Pokemon Episode 2

    End Of Episode

    Pokemon Episode 3

    End Of Episode

    Pokemon Episode 4

    End Of Episode

    Pokemon Episode 5

    End Of Episode

     

    Btw, just so you all know, excluding the Pokemon Episodes, there will be either 2 or 3 Prologue Episodes before the actual season 1 starts.

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    2. J-Awesome_One

      J-Awesome_One

      I'm starting her off at 10 years old (2 years after her adventure with Ash, Serena and Clemont) and she goes off to basically all the places she's been to and encounters all the Pokemon she had befriended along the way and they become her comrades. So basically it's like this.

       

      Prologue Episode: it's the day she turns 10, which means she can finally go out on her own pokemon adventure. It's basically from when she wakes up to when she leaves the house.

       

      Pokemon Episode: She goes to a place where she has befriended a Pokemon, stuff ensues, she catches it and moves on. (this would happen 5 times considering she already has Dedenne and she befriended 5 Pokemon.) And then I'd have 1 or 2 more Prologue episodes to where she finds out about Reborn, meets with Ame, maybe some stuff happens and then she finally leaves to go to Reborn.

       

      Here. Maybe this will be better. The whole 1st part here is basically from her going out adventuring Kalos all the way to where she goes to Reborn.

       

      So what I'm basically saying is should I do it the way I did it here OR put them up in their own separate stories and not in just 1 post?

    3. Candy

      Candy

      So I'd totes forgotsies the prologues and though they are noice how they are, I think making them their own stories (with more description of places, senses, behavior, etc, and also dialogue) would be much more engaging. Think of the difference between me telling y'all the stuff that happened in my story in the latest episode's summary, vs the short spin-off story I wrote about Aladdin's childhood. If I'm not mistaken, I think the spin-off was more interesting to read than just a series of facts(?) or at least that's what I feel so. 1 vote for separate stories 😛

    4. J-Awesome_One

      J-Awesome_One

      Alright. I was leaning towards more that way but I was just curious. Haha. And they're prob still gonna be shorter than usual but they'll definitely have more talking scenes.

  7. Fellow people of this fine community. I know it has been a long, long, LONG time since this has been updated. A lot of you have been here since late 2017 waiting for this to happen. And trust me. I've been having an itch to do this too. And I know I've been saying "Ohh it's gonna happen this time" or "it's deff happening at that time" and came up short. BUT DO NOT WORRY! While I cannot come up with a specific date, I will say this. I believe that this will finally come back in the upcoming months. BUT... it will be on a different thread. Which means this whole Prologue will be different. It would feel kind of odd to just come back to this after almost a year and a half of no updates. So a new prologue will be told. And also, when the new thread is started, it will start with a Chapter selection. No more will you have to go through all the pages to search for the 1 episode that you didn't see. Thanks to @Candy I now know how to link episodes into a link form. (I have no idea if that makes any sense but you'll see what I mean when this all starts happening) Also, SEASONS! This will have seasons. So yay for that and last but not least, this will also have a theme song. Probably unneeded buuuut it'll be fun me thinks. So that's all I have to say here. And next time you see me saying anything about Bonnie, it will all be officially starting!
  8. Lol. Yea but if it doesn't stay Bug Type, I just don't see the point in catching it. I was wondering when someone was gonna say that though. xD
  9. I'm only asking cus Nappy's Blastoise has Aura Sphere and that's an egg move. So either it had it when he got it or he bred it.
  10. Hey wait. That Squirtle event that's in Bybyxsion Wasteland. Does that come with an egg move?
  11. So I was confused as to why you said don't call the police. And then I read this episode... and then I got it. Buuuut should we take it the way we're led to believe how we're taking it or is she saying she likes Vanilla just like a friend and wanted to say that to Vanilla? It would still make sense for her to be feeling awkward too because she hasn't thrown around that word all too much. Buuuut I could also be overthinking it and then this would mean a romantic feeling. Either way, loved this episode a lot. More Shelly time and recognizing Cain as a friend! Keep up the good work!
  12. I feel like the most I've ever suggested though was to change her hair color and to have Pikachu come back somehow but thanks for mentioning in this. xD
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