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Prologue 1 Of Bonnie: Reborn's True Savior! is up and out! You'll notice that the actual very start of the thread shows a Table Of Contents. You'll be able to search through there to view any story content you might have missed. No more scrolling for a long time to find the last chapter you read. It'll be right there on the 1st page for you. But please, read and enjoy!
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Alright. So I've been spending the past 3 days doing the Prologues/Pokemon Team Captures part of the Bonnie Reborn Written Story Run and I think... I'm gonna release the 1st Prologue Episode today. So stay tuned for that. Btw, this will be a new thread. Will not be touching the other 1 at all. Just letting you all know. Also, these 1st couple of Prologues probably won't be that long but should be enough to catch your interests. I hope so anyways.
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So as I stated on my post about the Bonnie written reborn run a couple of days ago, I'm gonna do a new (or tbh, a more updated version of the prologue I've already done) prologue for when I can finally start it. But I've been thinking about something. I'm of course doing the whole "Bonnie meets up with her old Pokemon friends and catches them" thing BUT! Should they all be under 1 prologue episode or should they all be under their own separate sections? Here's an example of what I mean.
QuotePrologue Episode
Pokemon Episode 1
Pokemon Episode 2
Pokemon Episode 3
Pokemon Episode 4
Pokemon Episode 5
End of Episode
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Prologue Episode
End of Episode
Pokemon Episode 1
End Of Episode
Pokemon Episode 2
End Of Episode
Pokemon Episode 3
End Of Episode
Pokemon Episode 4
End Of Episode
Pokemon Episode 5
End Of Episode
Btw, just so you all know, excluding the Pokemon Episodes, there will be either 2 or 3 Prologue Episodes before the actual season 1 starts.
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I'm starting her off at 10 years old (2 years after her adventure with Ash, Serena and Clemont) and she goes off to basically all the places she's been to and encounters all the Pokemon she had befriended along the way and they become her comrades. So basically it's like this.
Prologue Episode: it's the day she turns 10, which means she can finally go out on her own pokemon adventure. It's basically from when she wakes up to when she leaves the house.
Pokemon Episode: She goes to a place where she has befriended a Pokemon, stuff ensues, she catches it and moves on. (this would happen 5 times considering she already has Dedenne and she befriended 5 Pokemon.) And then I'd have 1 or 2 more Prologue episodes to where she finds out about Reborn, meets with Ame, maybe some stuff happens and then she finally leaves to go to Reborn.
Here. Maybe this will be better. The whole 1st part here is basically from her going out adventuring Kalos all the way to where she goes to Reborn.
So what I'm basically saying is should I do it the way I did it here OR put them up in their own separate stories and not in just 1 post?
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So I'd totes forgotsies the prologues and though they are noice how they are, I think making them their own stories (with more description of places, senses, behavior, etc, and also dialogue) would be much more engaging. Think of the difference between me telling y'all the stuff that happened in my story in the latest episode's summary, vs the short spin-off story I wrote about Aladdin's childhood. If I'm not mistaken, I think the spin-off was more interesting to read than just a series of facts(?) or at least that's what I feel so. 1 vote for separate stories