J-Awesome_One

Omg. I feel so stupid but THANK YOU SO MUCH! Now I just have to deduce the typings. Haha.

So if anyone wanted to spoil for me what the new megas and deltas are in the game, it wouldn't bother me.

What @PokeFailure said!

I don't have a Mac and I'm pretty sure mine will be done downloading sometime around 2 or 3 in the morning. X__x

Haha. Oh. I suppose you're still waiting for yours to download?

You're playing already @Filthy Casual?! Dx Lucky.

It's out!

2 questions. 1. Are you planning on using Dusclops on your team and if so 2. Did you get Reaper's Cloth in Chan's house at the beginning of the game?

Haha. Nice. Idk why but I expected you to throw a fit about getting Lucky Egg before the first gym. xD

Did you ever get a Lucky Egg?

Ohh I will. Speaking of enjoying, are you enjoying it?

I'm really loving doing this but the stopping every couple of minutes to write something down, play the game, write something down, play the game and then do the chapters is killing my vibe to play the game. So what I think I'll do is play through an episode and when it ends, I'll write 1 big Chapter and this way, I'll still be enjoying this whole thing. I'll do sporadic updates of team members here and there but just expect long, big chapters starting now. Hope you all understand and enjoy!

Chapter 6.2 - Needless Deaths! We head out of the forest and see everyone being sad about Orchedy dying… I won’t believe it! Nooo! Honestly, I really do feel sad for Nello here. Not only has he lost his parents but now he’s lost his girlfriend. I just hope this death doesn’t make him do something stupid or act irrational for the rest of the game. Anyways, it’s time to- What you want Therus? Ok. This REALLY bothers me. Another Bulletin Point Time! 1. As soon as she got bitten, why didn’t you immediately give her this medicine!? It would save the drama from everyone and it would spare Nello from thinking about the death of his parents more! 2. When we meet up with everyone after we got out of the forest, he even tells us that he did everything he could to save her. WELL OBVIOUSLY FUCKING NOT SINCE YOU DIDN’T GIVE HER THE MEDICINE! 3. He somewhat starts acting like a dick here for some reason. And you never really get an answer for that. I guess maybe because he’s been in the Distortion World for so long but it’s never explained. Bulletin Point over. After we learn that Therus is an ass and just let Orchedy die, he and Nello fight over the medicine until we take it away and we give it to her. This point pisses me off too. Why fight over the medicine when we’re just gonna use it to save her? Just give it to her already! After that, we decide to go into the volcano. We meet up with Chan and he decides to team up with us. This is good. We need to train a bit anyways. Before we do that though, we ponder why the lava is moving here when everything else hasn’t been moving. Chan tells us that Therus explained that when the portal is near, things will start to move. With that out of the way now, we train a bit with our “boyfriend.” And we get 2 evolutions! We then travel through the volcano fighting off wild Pokemon. We then meet the gang and Orchedy tells us this. After that, Therus tells us that we need to find a way to cross the lava. So we (Chan and Luna) go deeper into the mountain to see what we can use to float across the lava to make it to the other side. At the end of the cave, we see a Magcargo and some Slugma. Chan angers them and we have to fend them off in a Double Battle! Magcargo tries to run off but gets cornered and Chan catches it, hoping it can take us across the river of lava. And of course, that’s what happens. He releases it and we go to the top of the mountain where… Well… It’s a FREE FOR ALL! As in it’s us against them! But Therus has a battle game plan! He’ll take on the Slugmas. Nello and Orchedy will take on the Ghastlys and leftover Slugmas. Kain will take on the Haunters and Dusknoir. (Ohh NOW you’ll do it.) And Chan will take out the Garchomp. Well ok. Says good but who do we take out?... TAKE A GUESS! Well after taking out THE DEVIL, we can relax and… Or we gotta help Chan because he somehow got his ass kicked by a Garchomp! You’re a lousy Dragon Gym Leader trainee Chan! You got 2 dragons and a decently powerful water type Pokemon! How do you lose? Ugh. Move aside peasant. After that pain in the ass, we attempt to escape but as we and Therus run to the other side of the top of the mountain, Garchomp jumps in front of Therus. Now this right here… I like it actually. It’s not the same “We beat it. Now it’ll go away.” Kind of thing. It’s still a threat. But it seems as if Therus has gone… Suicidal? Where did this come from? No matter what we say, he just stands there and says his time has come and basically lets the Garchomp, as Luna says, behead him. Jesus Christ! That’s a bit brutal! I still don't like this death scene though. But I'll explain why at a later time. We meet up with Chan and see the portal. He asks us where Therus was at. We explain to him what happened as we cry. He tells us that we didn’t do anything wrong and to quickly jump through portal before it closes. We do and hey. It’s the end of the episode. No really. Look. And then 2 months past. (Also the beginning of Episode 2) I don’t mind this. They could tell us what they’ve been doing since “last time” we saw them. But I think this is an excellent place to stop. Especially since it’s the end of the episode. Here is the team as of now! This episode has been honestly, really bad and really good. To me at least. If they took out the Orchedy death scene, this whole scene wouldn’t have changed yet. And there was no reason for her to die. Well… I guess there is 1 reason. And I’ll show you when it comes up and trust me. It’s stupid. But I have to say, I liked the fact that we fought against the RULER OF HELL! All in all, I’d give this Episode a 6.5/10. The Luna/Chan love story is rushed and doesn’t make much sense, weird how even Chan’s friends are like “You’re with him? Ohh. Then we’re cool.” Some scenes were not needed here. Especially Orchedy death scene and Nello’s argument about him wanting to find Orchedy earlier. But the graphics look nice. As well as a lot of the backgrounds when we’re in battle. Team Lightning is, for me, as of right now, an OK evil team. They’re stupid but they have shown that they will murder people. And before I finish this, they had one thing no other games or fan made games have had… CHRISTMAAAAAAAAAS!!!!! Next time, we’ll learn where we are, what’s happened to everyone and move along with the plot.

Yea. 4 out of 6 of them have the potential to mega evolve. Camerupt (The winner between the four), Swampert, Steelix and Garchomp. And I wanna say that maybe her Camerupt is her ace but because of Venusaur being out, she chose to go for type advantage. Btw, I wasn't saying that all of them can mega evolve. That would be overkill.

Wasn't like most of her team possible megas? And hey! Another first! No complaining about another powerful tm! (which isn't a bad thing. I enjoy your complaining. ) Then again, I guess Bulldoze is better than her giving away Earthquake huh?

Chapter 6.1 - Luna, I Don't Think We're In Everia Anymore Last time, we heard a loud noise outside the chatel. It’s time to investigate! We go outside and see a group of people gathered in front of a… Dusknoir? Uhh why are you all just standing almost right in front of it? Before I continue, I forgot to talk to other people that were there and I don’t exactly remember why the reason Dusknoir is here so I apologize for that. But anyways, who could possibly take on this beast? I know. Kain! He’s got a Legendary! Let’s see how he- Before we get into the battle with Dusknoir, I want to talk about nicknames really quick. No no. Not Pokemon nicknames. Human nicknames. Us. Hopefully you get what I mean. Anyways, Kain gives us the nickname Lu. Why am I making such a big deal about this? Honestly, Idk. I just think it’s cool that the characters kinda give us or others nicknames. Even if it’s just a shortened version of the name. I like it. Anyways, Dusknoir! I shall bring you to your kne- Banish you to the Shadow Realm! After the battle, we’re teleported to the… Did we just get sent to the Shadow Realm?! No. It’s just the Distortion World. Ok. That makes more sense. Wait… No it doesn’t. How did it send us here? Well while I don’t like just being randomly teleported here for no reason, I do like how everything is all grayed out. Makes you feel spooked. Might as well see if there are any Pokemon here. Hmm. Yes. But nothing catches my eye. Wait. Wait. Yes yes! And… Gotcha! Everyone! Please put your hands together for Shuppet AKA Control! After training Shuppet up some, we decide to try to catch up with the rest of the group. We meet them unable to move because an old man is looking at rocks. How… Horrifying? The old man sees us and introduces himself as… He asks us what we’re doing here and Orchedy explains to him everything that’s happened… As in from like where we first met. Orchedy, I love ya but I don’t think he meant from the beginning of when we first met. But I guess it pays off. He reveals that he knows Dinor and that he trained him to be a Rock Type Gym Leader. I like how Gym Leaders are training new Gym Leaders to take their spot after they retire. That’s pretty cool. Then he tells us that he built a machine,along with Dinor, that could go to other dimensions or something like that. One time, it brought them here but only one could go back and so he stayed behind so Dinor could survive. Aren’t you just sweet Therus. We ask him if there’s a way out and since he’s been here for some time, he’s able to calculate when a portal will pop up. And we could take it to return to the real world. So we all go up to what Therus calls Soul Forest but he tells us something. The fog will get you. Ooooook Therus. Please don’t go crazy on me already. I like ya dude. As we walk through the forest, we and Therus notice that the others aren’t moving and no matter what we say or do, they don’t budge. Therus questions why they won’t move and Luna has to remind him of the fog. HE LITERALLY JUST TOLD US THIS A COUPLE OF SECONDS AGO AND YOU FORGOT ALREADY!? Oy. Then from the trees, a pair of Ariados kidnap Orchedy and Nello. How DARE they touch my Orchedy! And Nello too. As Therus looks at the stiff Chan and Kain, we go searching for our other friends. Before we find them though, we discover something pretty cool. After finding that, we go in search of Nello and Orchedy. As we search for them we find a TM for… Shadow Ball. Another powerful TM. They just love giving us these power moves don’t they? Anyways, we find Nello first and then Orchedy. (Please be ok Orchedy. Please be ok Orchedy.) After getting them back with Therus, he and us decide to get through to Chan and Kain and snap them back to reality. Luna tries one way of getting him back. Did it work? Did her love bring him back?... Nope! It made him go mad and attack her. See? Love is dangerous! Ok. Wow. For some reason, I had a really tough time beating his Pokemon this time than last time. Which is weird cus like they barely even changed. AND I had more Pokemon this time. What?! We soon here a Pokemon cry. Who is it?! Where is it coming from?! It reveals itself to be Hypno! Is this the one causing all of this chaos!? Time to take it down! As soon as Hypno vanishes, Kain and Chan snap back to their senses. Ohh yea. Kain was there too. Is it just me or does Kain just seem to be there through somewhat major situations anymore? He just stood there and said nothing during the Nello argument and now here, he did nothing even while under control. Unless he was battling Therus but it’s never said if he is or not. Why is Kain being forgotten!? After all of that ordeal, Nello tells us some bad news. It turns out Orchedy has been bitten and… No. I can’t think like that. She WILL. PULL. THROUGH! She has to! However you’re feeling Nello, I feel you. She will make it! Everyone goes running out of the forest to check over Orchedy some more. As we go to leave the forest, we hear another Pokemon cry. And it sounds like… THE DEVIL! The Pokemon Devil… Giratina. It was Giratina. What happens next? We will find out next time! Here is the team as of now! This has been an eventful part 1 of the chapter. Lots of important battles and Orchedy’s life seems to be in trouble once again. We need to pray for her. The Distortion World looks nice. As in it does look hopeless and stuff like that. I just hate the way we got there. A random teleporting from Dusknoir even after we defeat it in battle? That’s kinda lame. Next time, we find out what happens to Orchedy and try to escape the Distortion World!

Yea. I'm starting to see it. Haha. Btw, you're just blasting these out like they're nothing. As I'm just starting Chapter 6.1 xD

Again, loving these. I think this is the first time I read through this and didn't see you dislike something. Only took 17 Chapters. xD Very good my friend.

Chapter 5.2 It’s time to start our Christmas shopping! Hmm. Is it me or is it weird to say something like that in a Pokemon game? But then again, it’s kind of awesome. Before we head to where we’re supposed to go, we spot a TM. I wonder what this one is?... For anyone who has a Beedrill, you can now give it X-SCISSOR! Damn. This is another powerful tm so early in the game. I’m not opposed to it but it makes you wonder why the creator of the game decided to put some powerful TM’s so early. Anyways, onwards to Snowleaf Temple! Not a huge place. Just imagine a huge temple in the middle of the area and we can walk around it and in it. That’s about it. But this is indeed where we get our Christmas present for Chan. Before that though, people selling stuff! So what are you se- A lot more powerful TM’s! After that, we battle some trainers and come across this little old lady. She seems to have fallen on tough times and doesn’t have any money. She pleads with us to give her $500 and in return she’d give us something. What a sweet woman! She’s down on her luck and she’s still willing to give us something. It’s ok ma’am. I’ll give you the money. Keep th- After that, we leave and cutscene! We see Kain going exactly where we did and buy Never-Melt Ice. And then we cut over to Chan who somehow… Made it to his house from the beginning of the game. I mean I know he has Dragonite but damn. That’s fast to get there. He’s searching for Luna’s Christmas present. While searching, a person that closely resembles Chan comes walking in. It’s his little brother Nello! Nello explains that he couldn’t finish his internship (to be a doctor I believe) because something was going on so he returned. He asks Chan what he’s been up to and luckily, we are spared with actually having to see Chan explain everything. And then asks Nello to come with him back to Snowleaf City. Nello doesn’t want to leave but Chan just wants to spend time with his little brother. After some more pleads, Nello finally accepts and leaves the room as Chan searches for the present which apparently is a Ruby Necklace that his mom used to have. As we’re about to return to the chatel, Chan and Nello come running up to us with Chan introducing Nello to us. Wow. That Dragonite is really damn fast. We all return to the chatel where we see Kain but… Where’s Orchedy? Where’s sweet, little Orchedy?! Well this is troubling. Orchedy’s missing! Obviously, everyone except for Nello is going to go search for her… Or Nello wants to go look for her. Ok. Yea. Sure. Go look for her Nello. Go look for the person THAT YOU’VE NEVER SEEN BEFORE!!! You’d be lost too. After that, Nello kinda becomes, what I like to call, an emotional dick. He becomes mean to Luna but I somewhat understand why. But I use the word somewhat loosely. Chan tells him that we’ve been through a lot which causes Nello to ask if we’ve lost our parents. When we say no, he starts going off on his brother about their parents and everything. And after all of that, decides to challenge us to a battle and the winner goes to find her. Ok… Bulletin Point Time! 1. Why does Nello care so much for a person he’s never met before? Just a couple of minutes ago, he was stern about staying at the house. Now he’s just all gung-ho about trying to find this girl. 2. Why challenge us to a battle to see who should go looking for her? Why don’t we all just go out and search for her? Nello can go with Chan because he knows what she looks like. Kain and us can go our separate ways to search for her. 3. You’re wasting time! We could be out there looking for her now but you want to battle so a SINGLE person can go look for her! 4. CHAN! SLAP SOME SENSE INTO YOUR BROTHER! TELL HIM TO SHUT UP, STOP THIS NONSENSE, AND EVERYONE GO SEARCH TOGETHER! 5. Chan doesn’t even consider at least going with us to find Orchedy. Yea. You’re SUCH a nice boyfriend Chan. 6. Kain. Nothing wrong with him here. I just find it funny how he’s just become silent to all of this. After we beat him, he starts to cry and runs upstairs. Well it’s time to go search for Orchedy… All alone… Chan? No. Fine. But before we do that, I wanna talk about Nello’s team for a little bit. His team as of now consists of Duosion, Golbat, Girafarig and a Ditto. I think it’s an interesting team for him to have. That one that’s kind of like “Why have that Pokemon on your team” is the Golbat. Idk. It just doesn’t seems like it belongs there. Ditto surprisingly screams out “I’m the mascot of this team!” Idk why but it just does. But that’s all I got to say about that. Before we leave though, let’s check on Nello real quick. We then travel to Crossdeck River and slide across the ice and enter a cave. The Corsol Cave. Just an ordinary looking ice cave but it has a puzzle! We get through the puzzle and… see… poor frozen Orchedy! Jesus! She’s all blue and frozen! Get her the heck out of there now! She’s too precious for us to lose! So it’s obvious that Nello is crushing on Orchedy and vice versa. THIS makes sense for a budding love scenario. Not “I was your bully. I’m sorry. I love you.” “I hated that you were a bully to me. I love you too.” I approve Nello/Orchedy relationship. Chan decides to offer us to go to sleep with him but we decline because we need to train our team up a bit. After some training, we come back and go to sleep… Although, with Chan’s snoring, it might not be that much. As Chan and us sleep, Orchedy and Nello seem to be preparing to go on a little adventure. Kain comes in to get food but instead, gets invited to come along with them and he accepts. They travel to Snowleaf Temple and Orchedy tells a story about how 3 brothers overpowered the 3 Legendary Bird Pokemon, Articuno, Zapdos and Moltres, and caught them. When they died, the birds were released and is said that every midnight before Christmas, Articunio appears. So it seems that that’s what they’re doing there. Soon, the temple shakes and there, in front of them is Articuno! How will they get out of this mess?! Morning time and it’s CHRISTMAAAAAAASSSSS!!!! CHAN! WAKE THE FUCK UP AND GO DOWNSTAIRS! CHRISTMAS IS TODAY! We make it downstairs and before gifts can be passed around, Kain, Nello and Orchedy decide to tell us what happened last night. And… Kain has caught an Articuno… What?! He’s not a main character! Why would he be able to catch a Legendary?! But put the brakes on. I actually like this. Yes. Legendary Pokemon are obtainable all throughout the game but I like the fact that I’m not the only one that can capture them. If I can obtain one, why can’t everyone else? It’s only fair. So after that shocking announcement, it’s time to give and receive Christmas gifts! Yay! Kain goes first and has given Orchedy and orchid made out of Never-Melt Ice to which Orchedy loves. Orchedy then hands Kain a PokeBall. She tells us that the reason she went into Corsol Cave in the first place was to catch a Pokemon for him. Aww! That’s so adorable! Next, it’s Chans turn and he gives us the Ruby Necklace that his mom used to own. Ok. That’s pretty romantic. We go last and give Chan the Dragon Orb and explain to him what it does. I gotta say, I like the gifts that were exchanged here. It really feels like Christmas here. Buuuut… Nello gets nothing. Squat. Which is awkward and kind of rude. When I say rude, I mean Chan should have gotten him something since he begged him to come her in the first place to spend Christmas with everyone. But then again, he and Orchedy seem to be starting something so I guess that’s good enough. This is so nice. You know what would be nicer? A battle. I do like the Christmas feels but I want to battle. Hey! I get my wish as Chan decides to challenge us to a battle. Let’s do this! After the battle, we hear a loud crash outside and everyone (besides us) decides to go and investigate… But that will be saved for next time! Here is the team as of now! This part of the chapter was alright. We finally got to meet Nello and see how he is… He’s ok for me right now. And he better treat Orchedy right. The part with Nello arguing with everyone (except Kain) to look for Orchedy was just… I think it could be nixed or something. Or at least have Chan get some sense into him and have everyone help search for her. But we finally got to Christmas Day and EEEEEEE!!! CHRISTMAS DAY! I felt like I was there with them. It was so fun for me. Next time, we shall go see what that crashing sound was!

Not much JUSTICE had to be done here huh? Haha. But I'm enjoying this so far. Keep it up!