Actually, I'm not asking you to rate the team out of 10. You suggested that he change 4 of his pokemon. That is pretty much changing the entire team. In fact, Smogon even says on their "how to RMT" states as a rule that you shouldn't suggest changing more than 3 pokemon on someone's team. I'm not biased either, I use those same pokemon you suggested, I was making a remark on how you suggested 4 commonly used pokemon that completely changed the entire look of his team. Also, Who challenged you to a pokemon battle? I wasn't questioning your skills as a trainer, nor do I want to test them in a battle. I wasn't trying to be confrontational, just informative. I'm sorry If I came off in a negative manner. I almost never try to do so.
As for the rate, because you are rigt, If I'm going to comment on an RMT, I should be rating it.
The only thing I have to comment on really is Armaldo. If you're going to run a sash on a pokemon it is generally suppose to be used for a turn to set up a boosting move. I would suggest adding swords dance over one of your move. If you choose not to use a boosting move, I would suggest switching over to a life orb.