Moment4Life!

[AutmnStorm]

HELLO! HAI! So I FINALLY got my account to start working so I am now going to upload pages and such on here. So I think you all got the basic's of what this comic is about, just Pokemon.. Comment on this with any criticism, questions, remarks, ANYTHING! And if any of you guys wanna be in a part or two of the comic then just comment this and I'll be glad to put ya in! :3

[i][b]ABOUT Moment4Life[/b][/i]
Moment4Life, Mean in which to live each moment as if it for your last, as in saying just live life. Cause each and ever moment could be your last. Where does this "Moment4Life" come into this story about Pokemon? The main charter Autumn, goes by the saying "Leave each moment as if its your last, like this is your Moment for Life" As being so Autumn being her free spirited being, going by "Red Wave" For her red hair and when she runs its as it her hair waves along with her. Autumn is what people would call "Hot Headed" because her temper is so short, and she loses her temper the most when people call her "Fivehead" Or say remarks about her oversized forhead, but enough about Autumn.
This is what you would call and non the less more mature version of Pokemon. For there is blood and bad language in this story. It is about a team of three people traveling together; Autumn, Rodaku, and N. Autumn we already explained, Rodaku would be what people called "Too cool for school" He seems to be cool and calm in most the story, almost the complete opposite of his sister Autumn. Who Autumn always has a problem with hating how he acts like hes always better then her. While, N is, well, nothing people call him but "Mysterious" And this is what attracts Autumn to him the most, seeing as she finds herself always wanting to figure this boy out. While N, sees himself liking Autumn for the way she cares for her Pokemon and treats them, nothing like hes ever seen. And the way Autumn isin't afraid of anything in her path. And each and every time they are alone N sees himself liking Autumn more and admitting to it while Autumn, being stubborn as she is, refuses to admit her feelings toward N.
So this story here is about Love, Friendship, and just life in general. And what more can I say?

[i][b]COVER[/b][/i]
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[i][b]PAGE ONE[/b][/i]
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[i][b]PAGE TWO[/b][/i]
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[i][b]PAGE THREE[/b][/i]
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[i][b]PAGE FOUR[/b][/i]
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[i][b]PAGE FIVE[/b][/i]
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[Sorry for HORRIBLE quality!]
SO WHOS THIS GIRL YOU MUST SAY?!?! Why that is Autumn, now older and in a new swag! :3 Moral to this, its reuniting it up. SPOILER ALERT!;;; Autumn leaves around the world cause Professor Birch cause he needs her help since him and her are related, for he is her Uncle. Doing so, leaving behind her lovely older brother and mister mystery N behind for a few years. CRAZY STUFF, I know. Well, while Autumn is gone, Rodaku and N become distant and no longer speak since she leaves and Autumn herself and N lose contact in each other making the whole group go their separate ways[Sadface] and after years go by Autumn seems its time to go back home, being all stronger now and ready to beat her big brother in a pokemon battle[Since she never won in a battle with him] Doing so, she hears word on streets that N goes CRAZY on wanting to separating pokemon and humankind and Autumn, well, uhm, she don't like that. So in Autumn's will she wants to stop this and have her old best friend back. Doing so its this long FUN treveling time for her and her brother to find N and stop him. And then finding him they all battle and blah, blah, blah.... THEN AUTUMN AND N REUNITE, then BOOM this AWESOME embrace happens. The end. :3

BEFORE:
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AFTER:
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[[Drawn and Photoshopped by me! I just love this pic tho<321]]

[AutmnStorm]

Yes... With N. >.>
Hes yumm.

And yes you can, chaya wanna look like?! :3

[Will]

It's a bit hard to read... Maybe you could work with the brightness/contrast when scanning/whatever your pages?

Otherwise, it's pretty good. I like it.

You can put me in if you want, but I ain't making any solid requests. And you can imagine that I'd be with Amor.

[Dragonz996]

<~ Here's me, I wanna be in it too
You have a soon-to-be-Hydreigon (Y)

[Neo]

[color="#9932CC"]Very good :3. Me likey the on-going forehead joke[/color]

[Bullet]

[s]thissucks/endthread[/s]

Ehhh, the writing's slanted this way and that and it's not very uniform or easy to read. Sometimes it just looks like you drew the speech bubble first and ended up having to cram it into a small corner.... Other than that, looks fine.

[Maelstrom]

I like the characters and the way they're drawn in your extra art, but what is that fuzzy thing arcing over them?

[Mashew]

I like it. I like N and Team Plasma, the writing is a bit slanted. and OMFG KIRLIA<333

[Iszac]

loooks gooood! I like the art, you have a lot of potential <3~