Raindrop Valkyrie Posted February 17, 2015 Share Posted February 17, 2015 I avoided that Ymora on purpose... it quickly became way too focused on a secondary aspect that wasn't the purpose. The RP wasn;t supposed to be a Dating SIm basically, but it kinda turned into one that jsut so happened to have Pokemon in the background. I don;t want to bash on Chim or his work, that is just my personal feeling to what happened in that RP. Basically, no Secondary thing should ever overtake the purpose of the RP imo. If it does...why isn't just an RP abotu the thing that takes over rather than be one about the Main focus.? ((also, Lexiii guuuuuuuuuurl, don't release plot details of any kind that directly tie into the Story. It is kinda bad hat. We shouldn't be getting a preview, mostly cause people want to find out by watching it unfold, not being told about it. And secondly... it gives players knowledge of where you are headed... which in turn allows some players to try and f with your plans... I doubt that will happen here, but people do it be warned.)) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sutoratosu Posted February 17, 2015 Share Posted February 17, 2015 ...Um, guys, I listed all the foods. There's no cake The cake is a lie! ... ... ... well... that's unfortunate. lies are always worse when it's about cake, soldiers... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shamitako Posted February 17, 2015 Author Share Posted February 17, 2015 The cake is a lie!Perfect execution there, Commander. Bravo I say, bravo *Claps in a very posh manner* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sevonic Posted February 17, 2015 Share Posted February 17, 2015 ...Um, guys, I listed all the foods. There's no cake That's what I thought. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raindrop Valkyrie Posted February 17, 2015 Share Posted February 17, 2015 Pie is better anyway. *ninja smoke screens out.* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rustytengo Posted February 17, 2015 Share Posted February 17, 2015 (edited) Acqui keep the candy color ponies away from my candy colored friendship lasers they are completely different ...Um, guys, I listed all the foods. There's no cake Lyre made a contract with a cute, white, cat, plushy thing she always gets cake. (though if you need me to change it i can its less fun though since she would be crying right now) Edited February 17, 2015 by rustytengo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shamitako Posted February 17, 2015 Author Share Posted February 17, 2015 (edited) Pi is wrong Also, Huk, you mean Nat's GF or that things go to shit in three days? The latter is something people need to know, and that was a good time to say it. The former, well, I don't really know what to say on that one >_< And yes, it does need changed please ^^ Edited February 17, 2015 by KosherKitten Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RubyHeart Posted February 17, 2015 Share Posted February 17, 2015 (edited) EDIT: Dam it Lexi.....Dam it Edited February 17, 2015 by RubyHeart Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shamitako Posted February 17, 2015 Author Share Posted February 17, 2015 EDIT: Dam it Lexi.....Dam it*Dan it Oh, or did you mean Riley and Sharp? Because in that case I didn't actually reveal anything of importance... Though I was trying to hint so people would start guessing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raindrop Valkyrie Posted February 17, 2015 Share Posted February 17, 2015 I mean the both. They also do not need to know shit is going down in 3 days either. Imagine how much more genuine the surprise would be if not even the Players of the characters knew that would happen. It would make the RP more genuine since they have to react to it on the fly, which is when RPing is at it's best imo. I dunno, my philosophy on RP is probably veeeery different from yours. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shamitako Posted February 17, 2015 Author Share Posted February 17, 2015 (edited) Well, that is actually very important to know. In this case, reacting on the fly will not go over well (As in, when we hit that point, things, that I can't say because they are too revealing, will happen and I guess I can't really explain why knowing the timeframe is necessary >_<) And, I can't really imagine how Nat's GF could be messed with much, but I don't really have a defense for saying it outside shooting down any ships involving her... Then again, it might have been good for someone to try to romance her, since she is kind of the most important girl at OI Edited February 17, 2015 by KosherKitten Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevaleresse Posted February 17, 2015 Share Posted February 17, 2015 so i found this http://www.dolldivine.com/magical-girl-bonnie.php and did this as a quick 2-minute thing it's not a set in stone kinda thing but it helps to get a visualization (also because i have no idea what the hell my character would look like transformed so) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sevonic Posted February 17, 2015 Share Posted February 17, 2015 you should hurry up and tell us our elements Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raindrop Valkyrie Posted February 17, 2015 Share Posted February 17, 2015 I didn't say they would be successful attempts lol. But really, there are those players that try to just mess everything up they know about in any way they can... ((I would stamp on them immediately, that isn't an attitude to promote around here.)) Anyway, it is more of a me saying "Be careful" kind of thing. Somethings you might not think are big are in fact... big, and well it is better to keep cards to your chest unless you are certain it doesn't matter revealing them. It is just a different philosophy,I just run things different no biggie. Not like telling you to change it XD. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shamitako Posted February 17, 2015 Author Share Posted February 17, 2015 ... ... ... Sarcy that is beautiful Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rustytengo Posted February 17, 2015 Share Posted February 17, 2015 I changed my post now you get sad puppy dog Lyre i hope you happy Lexi.(at least she has secret chocolate truffle stash though) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commander Posted February 17, 2015 Share Posted February 17, 2015 This is a little nitpicky, but you might want to consider tagging your posts to the PC(s) your talking to instead of the character talking. It makes it easier to follow along. Maybe I'm just being a bit whiny as I'm still trying to figure out who's talked to who. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Code: PIRULUK Posted February 17, 2015 Share Posted February 17, 2015 I made one too... Presenting, Mahou Shoujo Drizzling Rein: I'll probably be basing descriptions off this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shamitako Posted February 17, 2015 Author Share Posted February 17, 2015 That simply won't work, Commander. For one, I'd have to write in third person omniscient (possibly even second person at times, to keep the post focused on the character), and I much prefer third person limited. But also, I'm not necessarily interacting with the characters for my posts. The exit post wasn't about Lyre, it was about Lilith leaving. Sharp didn't talk to Lexi and the gang for the first quarter of her post, she introduced the dining hall. And no NPC has even come close to Arturia or Emberly at all. The NPCs in this are more like OP-controlled characters than actual NPCs. The reason there's names is so you can quickly sort out which PoV I'm using for any given post, since each NPC has a different level of knowledge about each of the other NPCs and characters. Also lets you skip posts from Lilith if you're interacting with Natalie, though I'd recommend reading all of my posts, just in case Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sutoratosu Posted February 17, 2015 Share Posted February 17, 2015 I'm honestly trying, but I think at the end of the day, in certain situations, there's just a genuinely pessimistic young woman deep down inside beneath the outward shell of relative calm and empathy... I can feel it in my soul, soldiers, like she's got a lot to say to certain people, but holds her tongue too damn much even as in her mind she's just hauling off against them... and then she feels conflicted because, while true, those people have no right to act like that, is that still in and of itself not hypocrisy on some scale? and then, she just doesn't know the answer, and so, after a while, she just gets tired of it and starts lying to and telling herself that she doesn't understand why people do the mean shit they do, to avoid... well, all of that logic looping, and it's just a self-perpetuating cycle at disgust of the actions of others, a staunch refusal to voice that qualm most of the time to their face, or at all, and then... ya get the picture. That's what I'm feeling her little "Game" is about and portrays on some level or other.... And you know what though, soldiers? hell, still lighter than any of my other characters even despite it all, so...Lt. Surge 1, haha! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Code: PIRULUK Posted February 17, 2015 Share Posted February 17, 2015 By the way, Surge, the "yay" you're looking for is actually spelled "Yea". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sutoratosu Posted February 17, 2015 Share Posted February 17, 2015 eh, I'll fix it... EDIT: Done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevaleresse Posted February 17, 2015 Share Posted February 17, 2015 This is me giving people a chance to interect with Arturia, btw, so if any9ne wants to do so go right ahead. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commander Posted February 17, 2015 Share Posted February 17, 2015 This is me giving people a chance to interect with Arturia, btw, so if any9ne wants to do so go right ahead. Opportunity taken. (irl my opening conversations are way more awkward than that). Edit: I decided to use that site to give a visual of Nina. No, that's not exactly how her outfit is going to look, but pretty close. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rustytengo Posted February 17, 2015 Share Posted February 17, 2015 So Lexi you when you were telling use where the NPC's were in the dinning hall you called Lilith Layla and me being me i forgot that they where the same person hence why i thought Lilith was not around. Now that I now I know what I'm a gonna do once me and Sev finish up this little interaction hehe, but given it won't be tell sometime tomorrow that Sev's back on that's going to be hard since i usually away from my computer tell 10 something{unless the weather is bad then I won't do what I usually do}...it looks like I will have to use the power of a Vita to post then. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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