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[CW: Poetry] A Place to Put Things


Jory

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Hey guys. I don't think anyone's going to read this, but what the hell. Might as well put an introduction.

Basically, this is a thread where I'm going to be putting the poetry that I write. Some of it is pretty depressing, but I want to start keeping better track of my poems. As I find them in my computer or write them I'll put them in here. Enjoy.

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Written 2/22

Stuck

We open on a young man

He seems to be lost

No where or one to turn to

Simply drifting.

He used to wait, but he gave up

He gave up searching

He gave up hoping

To find any kind of happier half.

He ambles on

Going through motions

Taking steps

Perpetually in circles.

Stuck

Unable to find what he used to

Look for desperately in the

Dark of night.

Stuck

Unwilling to love himself

Like he wants to be loved

By someone else.

Stuck

Living in a cage

Of his own construction.

Stuck

Behind shifting blue eyes.

Stuck

With his words on the tip of his tongue.

Stuck

On his own

Trapped beneath the weight

Of a lonely soul.

He finally stands up,

His eyes gleaming with long-forgotten hope

Only to be battered down

By the harsh winds of reality.

He sits, remaining

Stuck.

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As I gazed up into the inky blackness of the Virginia sky, I lamented the day I was born. Then, the cold droplets of water began to patter gently on my skin. It went slowly at first, as though asking my permission to continue. I opened my arms to the sky and threw my coat off, reveling in the brisk November rain. As the cool water ran in rivulets down my face, I could feel everything that had happened melting away. I opened my mouth and let it out in one primal scream. All the anger, all the frustration, all the futile resentment of people and things that were ultimately less at fault than I. All the depression, all the anxiety, all the fear that my life had ended. The rain took it and, in one great Houdinian act, made it simply disappear. And for the first time today I thought to myself, “Everything is going to be okay.”

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I wrote one in class today (3/17):

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Sentinel

Riding thrugh

an astral plane

My mind my steed

with star-filled mane

Watching the world drift by

as it is torn to tatters

But my stallion sits above

all its noise and its chatter

I look down

and see where I once lived

I mourn my old home

and its once-given gifts

Observe as the Earth

is consumed in flame

And see people realize

That we are to be blamed.

There is no such thing

as "consequence free"

They'll take what they'll take

both from you and from me

The only thing we can do

is escape to the stars

To reach Heaven's gates

and be at last safe from harm.

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Written 3/17

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Today

I woke up this morning
At least I think I did
It felt strange
As though I watched from afar.

I ate an apple this morning
Or remembered one
Its taste was elusive
Like chasing a memory long gone.

I spoke to Mother today
Though I can’t recall where
Her voice has faded now
Simply a whisper of eons past.

I fall asleep tonight
On an ethereal bed
I do not dream
For today was dream enough.

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Written 3/17

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If I Go

I’ve always wondered
Do you think
They would notice
If I go?

Would they throw
themselves to the ground?
Scream and wail
and ask “Why, God, why?”

Would they throw
their voices to the heavens?
Asking how, just how
can it be fair for them?

Would they realize
their woe is mine living on?
And finally understand
what my pain is?

Would they move on
after just a few weeks?
Wondering what had
rained on their parade?

Would I be left alone
to crack and erode?
Nature left to casually
erase all that remains?

Would I be forsaken
by the ones I loved?
Left to the same fate
there as I was here?

If I go
will anyone care?
If I go
I hope so.

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Written 3/18. Feeling better today.

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Redeemed

He stumbles
Falls to the ground
The sick crack of his head
A lonely sound.

He lies there
Unmoving, unfeeling
Simply staring at the sky
Or his case, the ceiling.

He wonders
Ponders the question
Will anyone help him
And will the pain lessen?

He feels sorry
For his lack of health
But he has no one to blame
Except for himself.

He worries so much
That he cannot rise
But he knows he won’t know
Until the moment he tries.

He realizes
Sits up, knowledge gained
He is the one
Who will end his pain.

He stands
Walks forward proudly
“It’s a new day,”
He declares loudly.

He leaves
His house, his prison
To seek happiness
With newfound wisdom.

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Just a drop
One of a million

And that's only my cloud

Among a legion.

We all fall

Each speeding down

Made sleek by rushing wind

Then splashing on the pavement.

I'm sinking

Drawn into the cracks

Never again to feel the soft kiss

Of daylight again.

Time passes

Then I finally feel it

Drawing me in, a moth

to a candle in the window.

I remain with it

Moving slowly but surely

As my long lost bretheren

Join me in my journey.

We stay together

Achieving solidarity

As only parts of a whole can

Acting in perfect unison.

Straining jointly

Against our bonds,

Not discriminating between

The imagined and the material.

Finally, triumphantly

We have broken free

Reawakened and carrying wisdom

From lives lived in days gone by.

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