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Those Who are doomed to repeat it [Feedback/Discussion]


SonOfRed

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I figured I should just make a Discussion thread for this since I have now officially read the entirety of the rules for this sub-forum.

So yeah just give me some feedback on my short story. To tell you a little about it, it was a spur of the moment story I thought up during work. Since my attention span is that of a silver backed ape, i decided to write a brief summary of the plot on my ipod. Now i am building on it and transferring here. most of the ideas behind it are spur of the moment, so bare with me if it takes a little while to update it because i need to make sure it doesnt stray to far from the main story without contradicting itself. So yeah, thanks for taking the time to read it if you do, and I'll try to make it not suck.

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