Garnet. Posted March 10, 2015 Share Posted March 10, 2015 (edited) Why does fanfiction have such a negative connotation? Fanfiction is cool. Everyone should post Fanfic here, if you have any. It'd be cool if we had a huge topic about people writing about characters! Anyway, here's your daily dose of Cain LaRue. I wrote some more, this time it's Fernfiction. slaps knee Reborn Fanfiction written by Protonymic. This follows the protagonist from their point of view. It's really nicely written, please check it out!! :] Edited March 20, 2015 by Spade 1 5 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeMasterJP Posted March 10, 2015 Share Posted March 10, 2015 The Xe and Xyr is definitely somehting I've to get used to. But pretty cool! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garnet. Posted March 10, 2015 Author Share Posted March 10, 2015 Me too, man. I had to keep going back and checking the different forms. I kept comparing Xe to She so i was worried id fuck up but nah. Thanks, friend. :] 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sparky Posted March 10, 2015 Share Posted March 10, 2015 Very nice fanfc to say the least :3 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeMasterJP Posted March 10, 2015 Share Posted March 10, 2015 (edited) Didn't know his last name was LaRue, so french, no wonder he's gay ;p Edited March 10, 2015 by LeMasterJP Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enkhidu Posted March 10, 2015 Share Posted March 10, 2015 (edited) Didn't know his last name was LaRue, so french, no wonder he's gay ;p He's pansexual I believe, and Amethyst made a post not long ago showing the characters surnames (everyone had except Decibel because nobody loves xem). This site really needed a Reborn fanfiction (Well besides Ame's Dangan Reborn I'm really hoping that she will continue it soon) The only thing that I had problems with was the xe/xem/xyr thing, since it isn't something that I'm used to see it took me a while to read it completely, it didn't help that I'm not a native English speaker, but that's something to be expected. Great fanfiction BTW!! Edited March 10, 2015 by Absolute_Zero Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeMasterJP Posted March 10, 2015 Share Posted March 10, 2015 He's pansexual I believe, and Amethyst made a post not long ago showing the characters surnames (everyone had except Decibel because nobody loves him). This site really needed a Reborn fanfiction (Well besides Ame's Dangan Reborn I'm really hoping that she will continue it soon) The only thing that I had problems with was the xe/xem/xyr thing, since it isn't something that I'm used to see it took me a while to read it completely, it didn't help that I'm not a native English speaker, but that's something to be expected. Great fanfiction BTW!! nobody loves xe* how ingorant... hehe and I love xe, xe's adorable Does anyone know how it works with non-binary people, or at least Decibel and the blonde, and their privates? I'm a pervert very curious Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enkhidu Posted March 10, 2015 Share Posted March 10, 2015 nobody loves xe* how ingorant... hehe and I love xe, xe's adorable Does anyone know how it works with non-binary people, or at least Decibel and the blonde, and their privates? I'm a pervert very curious I knew that I'll mess up with something, edited, and it was xem BTW. And I was actually wondering the same thing, just because I don't imagine it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeMasterJP Posted March 10, 2015 Share Posted March 10, 2015 (edited) I knew that I'll mess up with something, edited, and it was xem BTW. And I was actually wondering the same thing, just because I don't imagine it. Maybe they'll have both. God damn lucky bastards now I'm jealous But no I can't really imagine it either. Edited March 10, 2015 by LeMasterJP Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garnet. Posted March 10, 2015 Author Share Posted March 10, 2015 nobody loves xe* how ingorant... hehe and I love xe, xe's adorable Does anyone know how it works with non-binary people, or at least Decibel and the blonde, and their privates? I'm a pervert very curious As a non-binary, they're basically just regular people who denounce their gender. As such, there will be people with the male and female variant parts (because uh, those are kind of necessary), but it's generally a question frowned upon asking. I mean, I don't think people can function without genitals, seeing as waste excretion is a thing. Consider yourself enlightened. :] He's pansexual I believe, and Amethyst made a post not long ago showing the characters surnames (everyone had except Decibel because nobody loves xem). This site really needed a Reborn fanfiction (Well besides Ame's Dangan Reborn I'm really hoping that she will continue it soon) The only thing that I had problems with was the xe/xem/xyr thing, since it isn't something that I'm used to see it took me a while to read it completely, it didn't help that I'm not a native English speaker, but that's something to be expected. Great fanfiction BTW!! Yeah, but you get used to it after a while, trust me. Also, thank you! I had a lot of fun writing it. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeMasterJP Posted March 10, 2015 Share Posted March 10, 2015 (edited) As a non-binary, they're basically just regular people who denounce their gender. As such, there will be people with the male and female variant parts (because uh, those are kind of necessary), but it's generally a question frowned upon asking. I mean, I don't think people can function without genitals, seeing as waste excretion is a thing. Consider yourself enlightened. :] I hate being so black and white. Thanks for enlightening me, I think it'd be cool to know someone who denounced their gender, I bet they're very interesting. Edit: I just found the time to read it, have been very busyish lately I really loved it, it was supersweet and well written, if there is someone who enjoys good grammar it's me, but I like a good story even better Edited March 11, 2015 by LeMasterJP 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garnet. Posted March 11, 2015 Author Share Posted March 11, 2015 I hate being so black and white. Thanks for enlightening me, I think it'd be cool to know someone who denounced their gender, I bet they're very interesting. Edit: I just found the time to read it, have been very busyish lately I really loved it, it was supersweet and well written, if there is someone who enjoys good grammar it's me, but I like a good story even better Thank you sooo much! It means a lot to me. :] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sparky Posted March 11, 2015 Share Posted March 11, 2015 Thank you sooo much! It means a lot to me. :] I think more Cain x Decibel is required xD Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garnet. Posted March 11, 2015 Author Share Posted March 11, 2015 I think more Cain x Decibel is required xD I think we need some more Cain in general. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fireheart4560 Posted March 11, 2015 Share Posted March 11, 2015 What about a fern fiction :3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garnet. Posted March 11, 2015 Author Share Posted March 11, 2015 What about a fern fiction :3 SLAPS KNEE YOU GOT IT BUDDY Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garnet. Posted March 12, 2015 Author Share Posted March 12, 2015 im gonna bump this because i wrote a new one, it's at the top or here if anyone wants to write some fiction though we can put it all in the same topic here that'd be cool right Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeMasterJP Posted March 12, 2015 Share Posted March 12, 2015 (edited) im gonna bump this because i wrote a new one, it's at the top or here if anyone wants to write some fiction though we can put it all in the same topic here that'd be cool right I just read the second one (fernfiction) and I do like it but I have the feeling of being thrown in the middle of something and not staying untill the ending. I'm guessing you're continuing it or was it a one chapter story? Would be a shame, I think there is more value to get out of it as trump would say Again very well written with no gram errors as far as I can tell Edited March 12, 2015 by LeMasterJP Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kurotsune Posted March 13, 2015 Share Posted March 13, 2015 I hate being so black and white. Thanks for enlightening me, I think it'd be cool to know someone who denounced their gender, I bet they're very interesting. Edit: I just found the time to read it, have been very busyish lately I really loved it, it was supersweet and well written, if there is someone who enjoys good grammar it's me, but I like a good story even better Peers at xyr own gender I'll let you know if I find anyone. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Support Squad Felicity Posted March 13, 2015 Support Squad Share Posted March 13, 2015 Peers at xyr own gender I'll let you know if I find anyone. You're not interesting doe ;[ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Enkhidu Posted March 13, 2015 Share Posted March 13, 2015 I. JUST. LOVED. IT!! You really have talent with this, the character personalities are just perfect. One of the things that make me like a fanfiction is that the character(s) personalities aren't changed, so even if the fanfic isn't of a character I like I will enjoy reading the fanfiction. Another thing I liked was the part when Florinia took the blame for a friends death, even if it isn't likely the reason she became like that, mostly because of what Fern said about Titania traumatizing her and that "she lost her friend" (probably implying Titania) it was a nice way of giving a proper reason to Florinia's and Fern's attitude. I really hope that you continue writing reborn fanfictions here, yours are wonderful! Btw do you take requests? 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garnet. Posted March 13, 2015 Author Share Posted March 13, 2015 I just read the second one (fernfiction) and I do like it but I have the feeling of being thrown in the middle of something and not staying untill the ending. I'm guessing you're continuing it or was it a one chapter story? Would be a shame, I think there is more value to get out of it as trump would say Again very well written with no gram errors as far as I can tell I see what you mean, but that's basically all I had in mind. Just the confrontation. I didn't really need a beginning or end, mainly because, well, there isn't one... yet. But there was no context, I understand that much. Some guy starts talking and... that's it that's how the story starts? haha no but thank you! I. JUST. LOVED. IT!! You really have talent with this, the character personalities are just perfect. One of the things that make me like a fanfiction is that the character(s) personalities aren't changed, so even if the fanfic isn't of a character I like I will enjoy reading the fanfiction. Another thing I liked was the part when Florinia took the blame for a friends death, even if it isn't likely the reason she became like that, mostly because of what Fern said about Titania traumatizing her and that "she lost her friend" (probably implying Titania) it was a nice way of giving a proper reason to Florinia's and Fern's attitude. I really hope that you continue writing reborn fanfictions here, yours are wonderful! Btw do you take requests? Thank you so much!! I don't really feel like I did Fern enough justice, and my Kuro was a bit OOC, but I was also thinking that it was in character for him to be out of character, if that makes sense. He's supposed to be like really lazy and not care about anything really, and he rarely ever does his job, so for him to be riled up about this, which has no relevance was supposed to be weird (until you read the end, of course) And, yeah, I figured she wasn't directly responsible for killing her friend. Isn't it ironic that she let emotions cloud her head to become emotionless? There might be more to that story, like who died (maybe it was that one grave in Corey's graveyard that had no relevance at the time, I'm not done with Reborn yet lmao). Also, Fern. Fern is a really sad character, for me. Like I said, I feel like they all lost the same important friend that day, but reacted differently. Fern is the type of guy to want to have a lot of friends (look at all his lackeys at Rini's gym), but I think once that person died he became really cold and mean, and eventually turned into Fern. And now, he still has lackeys, but he doesn't have anyone to really call his friend (except the player character, if you so choose to be his friend). And, thank you again! I probably will, as I'm not even done with Chrysolia, I have a lot more to write about. I do take requests, but just know, if I don't like it I'll probably say no (I don't write smut, but if it's not that I'll probably be like oh yeah i can do that) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LeMasterJP Posted March 13, 2015 Share Posted March 13, 2015 (edited) I see what you mean, but that's basically all I had in mind. Just the confrontation. I didn't really need a beginning or end, mainly because, well, there isn't one... yet. But there was no context, I understand that much. Some guy starts talking and... that's it that's how the story starts? haha no but thank you After seeing the spontanious respond of mrs. Absolute_Zero I would like to revise my words. I really really like it, and I would even love to see more, that's why I try to criticise it as best as I can so you can make it even better! The confrontation is great, but what makes a confrontation even greater is the build up. When the tension rises before the confrontation and I'm shaking in my seat from anxiety that's when I know the confrontation will be best. Of course the actual conversation shouldn't be a letdown then, that'd be very anti-climactic, but I'm sure that won't be a problem for you that's a compliment. Still loved the story, but I want to love it even more! Edited March 21, 2015 by LeMasterJP Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garnet. Posted March 14, 2015 Author Share Posted March 14, 2015 After seeing the spontanious respond of mr Absolute_Zero I would like to revise my words. I really really like it, and I would even love to see more, that's why I try to criticise it as best as I can so you can make it even better! The confrontation is great, but what makes a confrontation even greater is the build up. When the tension rises before the confrontation and I'm shaking in my seat from anxiety that's when I know the confrontation will be best. Of course the actual conversation shouldn't be a letdown then, that'd be very anti-climactic, but I'm sure that won't be a problem for you that's a compliment. Still loved the story, but I want to love it even more! (that's ms.absolute zero) i appreciate the criticism, trust me. i see what you mean when you say there's no rising action though. i got you next time tho Thank you :] Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BalletDuckNinja Posted March 14, 2015 Share Posted March 14, 2015 Would anyone be interested in a sort of retelling of Reborn from the POV of my character? It's really just the plot of reborn through a player character that got slowly moulded as I played through the game. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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