Eviora Posted April 4, 2015 Share Posted April 4, 2015 (edited) Hello everyone! This thread is for feedback on the prologue of my story Harbinger that I posted in another thread. (The thread will expand to cover more of the story later if/when it is posted.) I would really appreciate any constructive criticism, comments, or general feelings about what you have read. Thanks for reading and... enjoy! Link to story: http://www.pokemonreborn.com/forum/index.php?showtopic=13492 Edited April 4, 2015 by Eviora Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raindrop Valkyrie Posted April 4, 2015 Share Posted April 4, 2015 Just an idea for you. You may want to place the link to the story here in the Original Post, and the link to this Feedback thread in the OP at the top of your story thread. This way it is easier to navigate between the 2, or if they finish reading the story, they need only scroll up and click the link to go comment elsewhere and don't have to go seek out the thread of their own accord. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eviora Posted April 4, 2015 Author Share Posted April 4, 2015 Thanks for the suggestion! Aaaaand.... done. =p Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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