TyranntX Posted May 15, 2015 Author Share Posted May 15, 2015 Oh I wasn't looking for King, per se. Just something better than, well, an Officer or something. Then you might want to think about joining the 7th kingdom once its open to the public Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sutoratosu Posted May 15, 2015 Share Posted May 15, 2015 Jesus H. Christ... these folks, they seem to know just how to freaking grind Stratos and Azauqyar's gears... Reverse psychology obviously ain't working here, maybe they should just outright tell them to say yes to the dang throne... This is precisely why 3 out of my 5 PCs have no loyalties to an official nation... gotta appreciate that freedom. I'm honestly just wondering if the lessons the two of them are trying to subtly give are ever going to get through though. Because yes, they are trying to teach something here... Stratos just tried again, in fact...might not look like it, but if you go back and read what he actually says... cause they already know how to do this stuff, they know how to keep the order and hold the discipline, and one of them definitely knows what it means to rule, having seen both so many good and bad examples over time... They're just trying to pass on the knowledge in their own ways...and unfortunately they have to make it a crash course, cuase there ain't much time left... I gotta admit though. This is kinda making for some pretty good tension and conflict right now...XD 2 old geezers trying to teach something as fast as they can out of urgency, and 2 young folks who seem like they ain't quite understanding yet... could make a proverb out of it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commander Posted May 15, 2015 Share Posted May 15, 2015 Oh I wasn't looking for King, per se. Just something better than, well, an Officer or something. I still haven't gotten a response on my novel idea, but so far I only know I have a chapter to do all this character development (...If I'm restricted to that, I will probably cut back 2/3rds or more and go with a less twisted idea). The queen position will open up and there is still a remaining Commander position (I feel 3 is plenty for a Kingdom). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pixl Posted May 15, 2015 Share Posted May 15, 2015 I still haven't gotten a response on my novel idea, but so far I only know I have a chapter to do all this character development (...If I'm restricted to that, I will probably cut back 2/3rds or more and go with a less twisted idea). The queen position will open up and there is still a remaining Commander position (I feel 3 is plenty for a Kingdom). I didn't catch your idea, but that might be something I'm interested in. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yash Posted May 15, 2015 Share Posted May 15, 2015 I still haven't gotten a response on my novel idea, but so far I only know I have a chapter to do all this character development (...If I'm restricted to that, I will probably cut back 2/3rds or more and go with a less twisted idea). The queen position will open up and there is still a remaining Commander position (I feel 3 is plenty for a Kingdom). Sorry about that.. Sleep is vital to my survival.. You can go ahead with it.. You can play it out fully, the chapter thing shouldn't be an issue.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darvan Korematsu Posted May 15, 2015 Share Posted May 15, 2015 Jesus H. Christ... these folks, they seem to know just how to freaking grind Stratos and Azauqyar's gears... Reverse psychology obviously ain't working here, maybe they should just outright tell them to say yes to the dang throne... This is precisely why 3 out of my 5 PCs have no loyalties to an official nation... gotta appreciate that freedom. I'm honestly just wondering if the lessons the two of them are trying to subtly give are ever going to get through though. Because yes, they are trying to teach something here... Stratos just tried again, in fact...might not look like it, but if you go back and read what he actually says... cause they already know how to do this stuff, they know how to keep the order and hold the discipline, and one of them definitely knows what it means to rule, having seen both so many good and bad examples over time... They're just trying to pass on the knowledge in their own ways...and unfortunately they have to make it a crash course, cuase there ain't much time left... I gotta admit though. This is kinda making for some pretty good tension and conflict right now...XD 2 old geezers trying to teach something as fast as they can out of urgency, and 2 young folks who seem like they ain't quite understanding yet... could make a proverb out of it. Well you could use "the young eat the old" or however it goes. I'm just rolling with the punches and dishing out hits here and there. I kinda got dragged into this from Chapter 1 because 3 of us are working on our own subplot. Then again, going back to this you said earlier, just because someone is young does not mean they cannot be insightful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sutoratosu Posted May 15, 2015 Share Posted May 15, 2015 Well you could use "the young eat the old" or however it goes. I'm just rolling with the punches and dishing out hits here and there. I kinda got dragged into this from Chapter 1 because 3 of us are working on our own subplot. Then again, going back to this you said earlier, just because someone is young does not mean they cannot be insightful. I'm not saying they aren't, because maybe there is a bit of fear there with Kruga gone and the fact they don't have time. like he said when he was talking with Azauqyar, they gotta move fast. Either way though... someone's gonna be getting trapped in that Odd Keystone for this. As to who though... that remains to be seen. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K_H Posted May 15, 2015 Share Posted May 15, 2015 I'm not saying they aren't, because maybe there is a bit of fear there with Kruga gone and the fact they don't have time. like he said when he was talking with Azauqyar, they gotta move fast. Either way though... someone's gonna be getting trapped in that Odd Keystone for this. As to who though... that remains to be seen. This is what I feared would happen. People messed around, and now we've got a situation on our hands. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yash Posted May 15, 2015 Share Posted May 15, 2015 This is what I feared would happen. People messed around, and now we've got a situation on our hands. Well it's a good thing.. Keeps stuff fun.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darvan Korematsu Posted May 15, 2015 Share Posted May 15, 2015 (edited) I gotta say that Odd Keystone is gonna be a doozy to whoever gets put in that thing. Depending on the mechanism of it imprisoning people, this could go a few ways. I'd like to speculate the possibilities, assuming the Keystone has it's independent method of judgment. Of course, the most likely thing that would happen is Alucard getting imprisonment in the Keystone. However, that would not allow an interesting plot twist. A few other options of what I can see happening is maybe Ulkina or Syni trapped in that thing. However, if you want to go the absolutely ballistic ape-shit route, it would be a most chaotic thing if Azauyar were to get imprisoned in that thing. To sum up: Expected, Alucard Unsurprising: Ulkina, Syni Unexpected: Stratos, Eric Shocking: Azauqyar. The Keystone is gonna make the Sky Kingdom arc ballistic if that goes through. EDIT: Had to reread what the Keystone does, and it seems to work best on ghosts and spectres. However, the "spirit" part could play a role in what I'm saying, with the mentalities of the main Sky chars. Edited May 15, 2015 by Darvan Korematsu Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sutoratosu Posted May 15, 2015 Share Posted May 15, 2015 I gotta say that Odd Keystone is gonna be a doozy to whoever gets put in that thing. Depending on the mechanism of it imprisoning people, this could go a few ways. I'd like to speculate the possibilities, assuming the Keystone has it's independent method of judgment. Of course, the most likely thing that would happen is Alucard getting imprisonment in the Keystone. However, that would not allow an interesting plot twist. A few other options of what I can see happening is maybe Ulkina or Syni trapped in that thing. However, if you want to go the absolutely ballistic ape-shit route, it would be a most chaotic thing if Azauyar were to get imprisoned in that thing. To sum up: Expected, Alucard Unsurprising: Ulkina, Syni Unexpected: Stratos, Eric Shocking: Azauqyar. The Keystone is gonna make the Sky Kingdom arc ballistic if that goes through. EDIT: Had to reread what the Keystone does, and it seems to work best on ghosts and spectres. However, the "spirit" part could play a role in what I'm saying, with the mentalities of the main Sky chars. Actually, from the lore about it, I'm pretty sure an individual has to be a legit ghost in order to be vulnerable to being imprisonned in it. And not like the type of deal with having the soul ripped out of the body by the Key Stone itself, but a legit, wandering ghost who is terrorizing people and has been at it for a while. As in something like a poltergeist or a demon So yeah... fairly certain anyone who is "Living" like Ulkina, Stratos, Eric, Azauqyar, Swain, etc... wouldn't be at risk... but dead folks like Syni and Alucard likely would be. EDIT: and while we're on the subject, I intend to sign up a sixth and final (At least until Azauqyar and Brantyn and possibly Sebastian are all dead...) character. He's gonna be... a wandering spirit tomb. 108 spirits, all in one. I'm gonna have fun doing a type of hive mind character... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darvan Korematsu Posted May 15, 2015 Share Posted May 15, 2015 Welp I'm most likely not gonna be on Saturday, and maybe into Sunday morning. Gonna go camping with my old man for the first time in a while. I'll prolly not post tomorrow, but who knows. I'll be on for today until the late afternoon, and I'll allow Yash to bunny Alucard and Ulkina for Saturday until Sunday afternoon (which should be about midnight into Monday morning for him). Yash, if you do wanna bunny the two of them, I will only not permit anything serious to the plot, like the emotionally-driven stuff I have written so far. You can make them agree all you want, but yeh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cytan Posted May 15, 2015 Share Posted May 15, 2015 (6th, and last Pokemon) Name: Unknown(Call it Ditto for now) Age: Unknown Gender: Genderless Rank: Wanderer Kingdom: None Pokemon: Ditto Bio: Ditto was not created in a lab, it just appeared one day... It was just as confused as anyone would be. Ditto is on an identity crisis, so most of the time, it finds itself transformed as other Pokemon. It has mastered physical looks, but to copy personality, it needs to stalk the copied Pokemon and see. No one knows what side this Pokemon is on, or if it's even from Earth in the first place. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commander Posted May 15, 2015 Share Posted May 15, 2015 Yeah...I gotta say Ditto is one of those Pokemon that make people like me want to throw my computer across the room. If you want to go through with this, it can't transform into any of the PC/Important NPC characters nor Pseudos, Megas and Legendaries, can only learn 4 moves at a time, and can only learn moves from a Pokemon's learnset, and can only transform as one Pokemon in a battle. It still breaks the rule of powerplay with that, but it's more controllable in that state. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K_H Posted May 15, 2015 Share Posted May 15, 2015 I was gonna mention it back when we were talking about Smeargle, but decided against it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yash Posted May 15, 2015 Share Posted May 15, 2015 (6th, and last Pokemon) Name: Unknown(Call it Ditto for now) Age: Unknown Gender: Genderless Rank: Wanderer Kingdom: None Pokemon: Ditto Bio: Ditto was not created in a lab, it just appeared one day... It was just as confused as anyone would be. Ditto is on an identity crisis, so most of the time, it finds itself transformed as other Pokemon. It has mastered physical looks, but to copy personality, it needs to stalk the copied Pokemon and see. No one knows what side this Pokemon is on, or if it's even from Earth in the first place. Wait till Tyrannt comes and gives you approval for this.. Though I doubt it should be an issue.. Yeah...I gotta say Ditto is one of those Pokemon that make people like me want to throw my computer across the room. If you want to go through with this, it can't transform into any of the PC/Important NPC characters nor Pseudos, Megas and Legendaries, can only learn 4 moves at a time, and can only learn moves from a Pokemon's learnset, and can only transform as one Pokemon in a battle. It still breaks the rule of powerplay with that, but it's more controllable in that state. I agree with Commander on this.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darvan Korematsu Posted May 15, 2015 Share Posted May 15, 2015 Totally not turning my Lucario into SF Akuma. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K_H Posted May 15, 2015 Share Posted May 15, 2015 (edited) Totally not turning my Lucario into SF Akuma.You aren't the only one who's got a member of the Lucario Line that is similar to a SF Character. My Riolu even shares similarities in his name with Ryu Hayabusa, and when he Evolves, he'll have more in common than just the Name.(Hint: What's the Signature Move for both?) Edited May 15, 2015 by K_H Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cytan Posted May 15, 2015 Share Posted May 15, 2015 I only made Ditto because Zoroark was made. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darvan Korematsu Posted May 15, 2015 Share Posted May 15, 2015 Akuma's sig move was the Raging Demon. Ryu's is his Metsu Shoryuken and Hadoken only in his dark form. His sig move on his own is the Shinku Hadoken. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TyranntX Posted May 15, 2015 Author Share Posted May 15, 2015 Your character has been submitted. Also I know I said that my 6th was going to come in the next chapter.... BUUUUUUT I just got too excited. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ragnar Posted May 15, 2015 Share Posted May 15, 2015 these troublemaking Gyarados... Rain is not pleased in his peacekeeping disciples. lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
K_H Posted May 15, 2015 Share Posted May 15, 2015 (edited) these troublemaking Gyarados... Rain is not pleased in his peacekeeping disciples. lol Hey, at least things are going smoothly in the Water and Land Kingdoms. It's only in the Magic Kingdom that things are going screwy, thanks to a certain Zoroark... Edited May 15, 2015 by K_H Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yash Posted May 15, 2015 Share Posted May 15, 2015 Also Cytan, the Zoroark is one of my characters.. Part of the story.. So that's why.. Anyways, your ditto has been accepted.. Just try not to get into everything with the ditto.. That's all... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ragnar Posted May 15, 2015 Share Posted May 15, 2015 Hey, at least things are going smoothly in the Water and Land Kingdoms. It's only in the Magic Kingdom that things are going screwy, thanks to a certain Zoroark... well it isn't, the land kingdom is severely damaged at the moment. I think King Krusher is unable to attend the treaty due to he has to guard what's left of his kingdom. plus they're plotting something real bad that involves a certain continent pokemon.. I think this counts as a fail to convince the Land kingdom, due to the unfortunate turn of events that had happened there. Rain may have to leave it for a while and may head towards the Magic kingdom to see what's going on there.. (if that's what I think Zaire wants) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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