Yash Posted May 20, 2015 Share Posted May 20, 2015 Speaking of you still need to say how my exploration tea, is doing. The one NOT looking for groudon. I thought you would handle it yourself.. Since you want me to do it, just post again saying your team has reached the destination and describe the place a little.. I will get stuff happening after that.. If you are talking about the one with Xeen and all I thought you guys would make your way to the Underdark kingdom right?? Um what you mean by that either the guys that isn't looking for the groundon responding or I responding(Ignis or Rader)? Speaking of Rader, still no stuff for him of the fields exploration. Same with you.. I guess handling all the story work had me distracted from these.. Just point me to the posts and I will get on it.. Oh yeah, I had to ask, where did Rader send the gabites to scout? You haven't mentioned that.. Also he was supposed to interact with the king.. I think that is stil pending.. Plus you didn't send anybody to get the help that those pokemon had agreed to give to the sneasel scouts.. Also I think Magister and the Jellicent have set sail.. Some more details about that would help me make some stuff happen.. Bibs if you can get in a post about their plan and stuff.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Omega_Ra1der Posted May 20, 2015 Share Posted May 20, 2015 (edited) Ignis(Entei)/Rader(Manectric) Before Ignis just left the borders, he felt something similar in his mind, like a former brother in the grounds. He told both the troops and the commander "I just felt something that isn't the wave crashing. Something similar like in another life. I am going back to track down this. Rader, I'm handing over the reins to you." The young commander responded with: Yes sir! Boys, off to the fields! The commander continue his way to fields while Ignis returned to the capital since that where is the "feeling" was leading to. On the way back, he noticed some villages were destroyed but some villages were completely untouched. "Hmm, must been a supernatural pokemon who protected the villages from the wave." wondered by Ignis but he was feeling guilty for not informing the king about the wave. "Hm, maybe I should return to the capital to tell the king." He arrived to the capital and went to the throne room to only hear the king talking about something. He entered the throne room to only see a suicune sitting there in front of the king. He spoke to suicune "Who are you but I get the feeling I have seen you before?" This post here in Page 5 EDIT: Also we have a good backstory between of the trio. Just saying for all of the people. Edited May 20, 2015 by OmegaRa1der Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TyranntX Posted May 20, 2015 Author Share Posted May 20, 2015 Krushermsent Radner to tarous plains (or some where north) to see about recruiting Pokemon and claiming territory. He sent a small force this time around because he figure anticipating a fight like last time is a bad idea Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yash Posted May 20, 2015 Share Posted May 20, 2015 I'll edit my last post and have the stuff for rader in that.. Done.. Check the IC thread for Raders post.. Speaking of you still need to say how my exploration tea, is doing. The one NOT looking for groudon. Still don't know which one you are talking about.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Omega_Ra1der Posted May 20, 2015 Share Posted May 20, 2015 (edited) I thought you would handle it yourself.. Since you want me to do it, just post again saying your team has reached the destination and describe the place a little.. I will get stuff happening after that.. If you are talking about the one with Xeen and all I thought you guys would make your way to the Underdark kingdom right?? Same with you.. I guess handling all the story work had me distracted from these.. Just point me to the posts and I will get on it.. Oh yeah, I had to ask, where did Rader send the gabites to scout? You haven't mentioned that.. Also he was supposed to interact with the king.. I think that is stil pending.. Plus you didn't send anybody to get the help that those pokemon had agreed to give to the sneasel scouts.. Also I think Magister and the Jellicent have set sail.. Some more details about that would help me make some stuff happen.. Bibs if you can get in a post about their plan and stuff.. Correction: Dragan sent the scouts to find the king which will require Ty to post. Also Re-read the post that Rader was in(Pg.5), you see any mentions of Gabites? It was Dragan who sent the scouts. I will get to the sneasels side as soon ty posts. Edited May 20, 2015 by OmegaRa1der Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sutoratosu Posted May 21, 2015 Share Posted May 21, 2015 (@Wander. Got dupe post erased) Ulkina (Latias) "Thank you for your service Captian. I will do my best to not disappoint. I am willing to start whenever you want. I just need to go off and tell a good friend of mine the news." She flew to the window staring at the beautiful mountains outside. They were breathtaking. She mused with herself, indue time she could finally have a regal purpose to life instead of wandering aimlessly like she had followed for years. Finally she could enjoy her family. Finally, she felt at a stable home. Azauqyar was near the door to the throne room. He seemed puzzled or intrigued by something. Ulkina didn't understand what, but she got the jist of it. "Unless you have something else you wish to confer Captain, you can carry on." Aria (Lucario) Stratos had turned around right at the correct moment to catch Aria's eyes glowing a faint light blue. That was the reason the guards closed in on her, to investigate the most curious actions of the Lucario. Stratos looked angry and puzzled at the same time. "What did you just do convict?" Stratos asked. Aria looked up directly into the eyes of the blue dragon. "You know, you and I are not so different. Sure the circumstances were different, but at our core, we have something in common. I may be a fool and a weakling, but I can read your heart and mind alike. I must say some interesting topics of discussion surfaced." "I understand I shouldn't be in any position to speak, but I am most curious about you. I could see younglings taunting you, mocking you, and bullying you. I could see at one point you were weak like me. What happened to those days?" The Lucario chuckled to herself. "I can see it now. The Raksha Demon versus the Sky's Titan. That would make for an interesting fight. If we weren't knee deep in conflict, I would legitimately want to spar with you. Yeah... Darvan can you remove the parts in red, and about Stratos speaking, seeing as he's... not your PC at all. And another thing, can you please stop determining the expressions/ body language and minor actions of other peoples PCs, cause I've noticed this as well a few times, and while it might be only minor bunnying, it's still bunnying. Sorry to call you out, but over the course of this, you all will find I'm very... particular about my PCs, I have a certain way of doing things with them, and when someone starts messing with their characterization by taking up the reigns without getting permission from me first (Or at least talking to me about it first if they're the host, since they can kinda take temp control if it's crucial to move the story along or etc.) That and the fact that looking back on what I posted for Stratos ((@Dorvan, looks like a glitch or something happened...)) Stratos- Salamence The giant began to walk away from her cell. Both of the mages glanced at each other questioning as he passed right by, as if he intended to really just up and leave the interrogation without uttering even a single word more to anyone. They practically leaped out of their skins the moment he turned his gaze upon them. "You," He said, looking at the female. Her eyes still glistened with tears as she stared up into the fiery spheres. "Where is the Keystone?" "The arch Magus took it back into the heart, my lord-" "Go get him, and tell him we'll probably be needing it again. Have it brought to the keep, and make sure he and the white council come with it and are prepared, just like the trial." She still shuddered from what she had glimpsed, but she but deeply. "As you wish, lord champion..." And off she was. Stratos didn't skip a single beat, turning to the male. "And you, go find the one called thanatos. Last I saw, he and lord Azauqyar were speaking in the throne chamber." "As you wish, my lord..." and he too was off... leaving Stratos alone with the convict... alone except for the two dozen guards who had been creeping closer and closer the entire time in order to hear better. Stratos made no move to chastise them though. They were to watch the prisoner, afterall, and it was no secret that some of them were eager to get blood for what had occured at the trial. Maybe hearing a sob story had doused some of that eagerness though... What you said about being able to read his thoughts and all that from the whole Aura thing Lucarios have... it really makes no sense at all given Stratos literally A- got over the juvenile tauntings of his childhood long ago and the fact that B- Most of the fuckers who made fun of him... are now, years and years later, either low ranking footsoldiers or low ranking officers, compared to him being the freaking champion of the land... so who ended up on top in the end? and therefore, C- How can you read thoughts that a character doesn't even have at that moment? So yeah... there's a few issues with Bunnying... it screws up what the author had planned for their OC and contradicts what they write, even though by creative right alone, they are generally the only ones who should have control over the character, and it also causes a host of other issues. which is precisely the reason why it's seen as bad etiquette in the first place. Basically what I'm askign here is to please stop putting words in my narration/ into my characters mouths where I didn't put any for it in the first place. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darvan Korematsu Posted May 21, 2015 Share Posted May 21, 2015 Mmk Wander a few things 1. Sorry for the bunnying. I got a little too into it. Fixed it. 2. To address A, B, C I can explain A - I may know that, but Aria doesn't automatically know that. B - Again, Aria may not know that, considering all she knows about Strat is the past time period and foreign rumors. C - Unintended bonus of having a psychic/pseudo-psychic/esper as a character. She didn't exactly "see" the memory like how the Xatus did when they extracted it like a vision, but she could feel his old feelings, because odds are he never forgot completely, he just buried them in the back of his mind and Aria is resurfacing them. Her guess is an assumption. If you're weak you get picked on or helped. 3. Edited the scene to how I (from the eyes of Aria) saw it. I'm writing it from where I assume Strat is, which would be near or distantly away from the cell, but still there, which is how I interpreted it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sutoratosu Posted May 21, 2015 Share Posted May 21, 2015 Mmk Wander a few things 1. Sorry for the bunnying. I got a little too into it. Fixed it. 2. To address A, B, C I can explain A - I may know that, but Aria doesn't automatically know that. B - Again, Aria may not know that, considering all she knows about Strat is the past time period and foreign rumors. C - Unintended bonus of having a psychic/pseudo-psychic/esper as a character. She didn't exactly "see" the memory like how the Xatus did when they extracted it like a vision, but she could feel his old feelings, because odds are he never forgot completely, he just buried them in the back of his mind and Aria is resurfacing them. Her guess is an assumption. If you're weak you get picked on or helped. 3. Edited the scene to how I (from the eyes of Aria) saw it. I'm writing it from where I assume Strat is, which would be near or distantly away from the cell, but still there, which is how I interpreted it. Well, thank you, my good man, I appreciate it. The new version is far better, IMO EDIT: and yes, before anyone bothers asking, the Stealing that quote from Tyrion lanister was completely necessary. And if that story is a bit sub par/ lacking and rushed, too bad, it's the very short version, and is fully intended to be that way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commander Posted May 21, 2015 Share Posted May 21, 2015 Sorry about the delay. I had a few things I had to take care of today beforehand. And that was the short version of my post. Actually, I consider that length to be standard length for an RP. (Probably because I can write a lot). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darvan Korematsu Posted May 22, 2015 Share Posted May 22, 2015 Trying to figure out whether or not everyone is at a halfway decent stopping point for Chapter 2. I know Commander and a few of the slower guys are needing to catch up, but I've resolved most of the plot points for Ch. 2 I need to resolve. Prolly could put up one more post on my behalf for Ch. 2 and everything beyond that would be pure gravy. Just wondering since Tyran wanted to end this thing at the end of the week, ergo, today or Saturday, but there's some knots we have to tie in order to get full closure. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ragnar Posted May 22, 2015 Share Posted May 22, 2015 I'm just waiting for Cytan to reply and it really depends on what course of action he will take before I get posting again. my original plan is: once Rain's business is done with the magic kingdom, he is set course to meet with the Sky kingdom, that is if there are no hindrances along the way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TyranntX Posted May 22, 2015 Author Share Posted May 22, 2015 Well you could respond to the earthquake. After all it can be felt all over the world Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Komodojoe Posted May 22, 2015 Share Posted May 22, 2015 (edited) While there hasn't been any kind of confusion yet (or at least there doesn't seem to be), I just want this to be perfectly clear. Those ruins don't have anything to do with Groudon. Those are the ruins that Pavise resides in and that's where I will introduce it (but not just yet). If there's a problem with it, I'll be sure to edit that post when I can. Edited May 22, 2015 by Komodojoe Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Omega_Ra1der Posted May 23, 2015 Share Posted May 23, 2015 (edited) Actually, I just thought something about the officers. How make a restriction so people can't just make a dragon type officer right away. Make so at least the typing or something similar to the appointed commander. For an example, a magnezone with a manectric commander. Pavise inspired me. EDIT: In the post about the bovine family, does that mean I can take a portion of all of the families except for the lucario one. Edited May 23, 2015 by OmegaRa1der Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TyranntX Posted May 23, 2015 Author Share Posted May 23, 2015 From the sound as of it the third family needs more convincing. As the do not seem to understand the philosophy of the kingdoms in the west Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yash Posted May 23, 2015 Share Posted May 23, 2015 Actually they are more interested in being left alone.. The critters are the peacekeepers for tauros plains, so they are attracted to Rain's group.. The Bovine value strength, so they will go with the Land as they know the Land has already defeated the Magic once.. The Vulpolupine are actually tricksters.. So you should be careful.. Also is there any other scouting trip left that hasn't been given a result or push in the story?? I know that Magister is looking for the Orb and am waiting for a post from Pineapple.. Anybody else?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pixl Posted May 23, 2015 Share Posted May 23, 2015 Last I remember, you had the two Cryogonal from Permafrost meet up after their runs, waiting for Artemis and the Vanilluxe, but Artemis returned to base and the Vanilluxe is nowhere to be seen. But no PCs, I think. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yash Posted May 23, 2015 Share Posted May 23, 2015 Ya, those two have to wait for Roht to get an answer.. The vanilluxe can just chill for a while.. can't help the pun Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pixl Posted May 23, 2015 Share Posted May 23, 2015 Mm, sorry 'bout the short post. But Hakumen isn't a central character at this point so it's mainly just a transition should he receive orders Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commander Posted May 24, 2015 Share Posted May 24, 2015 Mm, sorry 'bout the short post. But Hakumen isn't a central character at this point so it's mainly just a transition should he receive orders I'll include more stuff for Commanders to do after a little while. I wasn't sure how Permafrost was going to turn out so I had to plan stuff for one or two people to do. If you want, I can let you take control of Yuki, King Cold, Artemis, or Enkidu. Just know I have plans for them if you do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ojama Yellow Posted May 24, 2015 Share Posted May 24, 2015 Oh. My god. Dead internet for three days. This. Was. Horrible. I'm busy getting up-to-date again right now. Sorry! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darvan Korematsu Posted May 24, 2015 Share Posted May 24, 2015 Oh. My god. Dead internet for three days. This. Was. Horrible. I'm busy getting up-to-date again right now. Sorry! Dude that sucks, but you think that's bad? 70% of all my posts are made from my cell phone (like this one). The remaining 30% is divided between my school and public library computers. Haven't had working Internet at my house in like years. Still though three days eh? Some folks gotta hurry da fuq up, because some of us are ahead of the game. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ojama Yellow Posted May 24, 2015 Share Posted May 24, 2015 Dude that sucks, but you think that's bad? 70% of all my posts are made from my cell phone (like this one). The remaining 30% is divided between my school and public library computers. Haven't had working Internet at my house in like years. Still though three days eh? Some folks gotta hurry da fuq up, because some of us are ahead of the game. I'm just used to my internet at home. I'm hardly ever somewhere else, except for school and sport clubs, where I haven't been at all the past few days. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Omega_Ra1der Posted May 24, 2015 Share Posted May 24, 2015 Ty, permission to post about Dragan meeting up with the king? He could be that messager as mentioned before. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pixl Posted May 24, 2015 Share Posted May 24, 2015 I'll include more stuff for Commanders to do after a little while. I wasn't sure how Permafrost was going to turn out so I had to plan stuff for one or two people to do. If you want, I can let you take control of Yuki, King Cold, Artemis, or Enkidu. Just know I have plans for them if you do. Ahh, Yuki sounds fun. It would also help me stay in a creepy mood (if not creepier). Just PM me what you had in mind if this is ok. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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