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Welcome to Reborn's one stop shop for hyper-realistic gore! (And good Creepypastas and sometimes the readings there of). Here to sing praise for the good, or fling shit at the bad. I thought we needed this thread. 'Cause we're not screwed up enough. Have fun and always to remember to credit it, weather it should get the views or not. Just don't cross the Reborn rules line, 'kay?

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I Work as A Real Estate Agent. This is a Collection of Letters I Received Recently From A Client.

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Dear Mrs. Anais Donaldson,

I would like to thank you for helping us find a new home. Since the mysterious noises that we were hearing in our old house, we knew that we most definitely needed to find a new place to live. Josh and I were incredibly unsettled by the noises, and Amanda was waking up in the middle of the night in tears, she was so scared. We find this house to be a lot less troubling, and we feel a lot safer here. Thank you again.

One thing that I would like to ask about is the state of the living room walls. Chips of the wall keep on falling off, and they look like they could crumble at any moment. Do you think you could direct us to someone who would help us fix that?

Thanks again,

Sierra Greggerson

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Dear Mrs. Anais Donaldson,

Thank you so much for referring us to that worker! He did an excellent job fixing the walls, and now they look absolutely perfect! He put an extra layer of plaster on them and now they are much more sturdy. It turns out it wasn’t that big of a problem, as he didn’t even have to tear the walls down or anything. Nevertheless, he did a great job.

Thanks again,

Sierra Greggerson

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Dear Mrs. Anais Donaldson,

I am so sorry for sending you so many notes. I’m sure you expected that once you had sold us the house, we would be done with each other, and I apologize for bothering you so much about our new house. It’s just that I have one small complaint about the new house. Well, it’s not so much my complaint as it is my daughter’s. She is afraid to be in the living room without me or Josh with her. She says that she can hear pounding on the walls whenever she is in there alone, almost like there is someone on the other side of the wall, but whenever she goes to check the room that is on the other side, no one is there.

Now, I haven’t heard anything for myself yet, but she claims that this has been happening every time she walks into the room by herself. It doesn’t happen whenever Josh or I are in the room with her, so we don’t know anything for certain, but I figured that I should still bring this up to you, just in case something is the matter with the house.

Yours truly,

Sierra Greggerson

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Dear Mrs. Donaldson,

I have made a mistake that I know I’m going to regret for the rest of my life. As you probably already know, Amanda turned 10 a little while ago, and so Josh and I felt it was a good time to start letting her try staying home by herself. We started off easy, letting her stay home for half an hour while we went to go stop by the bank, and now I wish that I had have made her come with us.

Someone came into the house and took her. We called the police as soon as we realized that she wasn’t in the house, and they came and investigated, but they said that from as far as they could tell, nobody had ever been in the house. There were no traces of DNA, no fingerprints or anything. Someone took my daughter, and I have no way to figure out who.

I’m sorry for bothering you with my personal matters.

Yours truly,

Sierra Greggerson

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Dear Mrs. Donaldson,

I’m pretty sure that this is just because of the grief I have been feeling lately, but I’ve started to hear that pounding that Amanda was talking about whenever I’m sitting alone in the living room. It’s the weirdest thing, when I’m sitting in there alone, I can hear it as loud as it could possibly be, but when I call Josh in, it goes silent. It’s as if whatever is making that noise only wants me to be able to hear it.

Sierra Greggerson

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Dear Anais,

I finally cracked today, and I have most possibly had the worst day of my life. I told Josh to get the hammer that he keeps in the garage and break down the living room wall. He didn’t want to at first, but he finally did it after I begged him fr an hour. I can’t believe what I saw inside that wall, it’s too much to bear.

Her body. Her body was inside the wall. My lovely, wonderful baby.

There’s no doubt that it was her. It’s only been a couple of weeks, so the body hadn’t really started to decay yet, and it was unmistakable. Somehow, someone managed to kill my beautiful daughter and stuff her into our living room walls. I tried to call the police again, but once again, they couldn’t find any DNA or fingerprints. As far as they can tell, nobody other than me, Josh and Amanda have ever been in the house since we bought it.

The worst part is, I still hear the pounding. I hear it in all the rooms now, and no matter what I do, it won’t go away.

Sierra Greggerson

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Dear Mrs. Anais Donaldson,

I am sorry to tell you that although the house you sold us was beautiful, my wife and I have decided to move out. After the death of our daughter, we figured that we needed a change of scenery in order to help us cope.

I’m afraid we are not interested in doing business with you again. Sincerely,

Josh Greggerson

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  On 7/15/2015 at 10:01 PM, Zidlijan said:

I Work as A Real Estate Agent. This is a Collection of Letters I Received Recently From A Client.

Linked to source^

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Dear Mrs. Anais Donaldson,

I would like to thank you for helping us find a new home. Since the mysterious noises that we were hearing in our old house, we knew that we most definitely needed to find a new place to live. Josh and I were incredibly unsettled by the noises, and Amanda was waking up in the middle of the night in tears, she was so scared. We find this house to be a lot less troubling, and we feel a lot safer here. Thank you again.

One thing that I would like to ask about is the state of the living room walls. Chips of the wall keep on falling off, and they look like they could crumble at any moment. Do you think you could direct us to someone who would help us fix that?

Thanks again,

Sierra Greggerson

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Dear Mrs. Anais Donaldson,

Thank you so much for referring us to that worker! He did an excellent job fixing the walls, and now they look absolutely perfect! He put an extra layer of plaster on them and now they are much more sturdy. It turns out it wasn’t that big of a problem, as he didn’t even have to tear the walls down or anything. Nevertheless, he did a great job.

Thanks again,

Sierra Greggerson

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Dear Mrs. Anais Donaldson,

I am so sorry for sending you so many notes. I’m sure you expected that once you had sold us the house, we would be done with each other, and I apologize for bothering you so much about our new house. It’s just that I have one small complaint about the new house. Well, it’s not so much my complaint as it is my daughter’s. She is afraid to be in the living room without me or Josh with her. She says that she can hear pounding on the walls whenever she is in there alone, almost like there is someone on the other side of the wall, but whenever she goes to check the room that is on the other side, no one is there.

Now, I haven’t heard anything for myself yet, but she claims that this has been happening every time she walks into the room by herself. It doesn’t happen whenever Josh or I are in the room with her, so we don’t know anything for certain, but I figured that I should still bring this up to you, just in case something is the matter with the house.

Yours truly,

Sierra Greggerson

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Dear Mrs. Donaldson,

I have made a mistake that I know I’m going to regret for the rest of my life. As you probably already know, Amanda turned 10 a little while ago, and so Josh and I felt it was a good time to start letting her try staying home by herself. We started off easy, letting her stay home for half an hour while we went to go stop by the bank, and now I wish that I had have made her come with us.

Someone came into the house and took her. We called the police as soon as we realized that she wasn’t in the house, and they came and investigated, but they said that from as far as they could tell, nobody had ever been in the house. There were no traces of DNA, no fingerprints or anything. Someone took my daughter, and I have no way to figure out who.

I’m sorry for bothering you with my personal matters.

Yours truly,

Sierra Greggerson

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Dear Mrs. Donaldson,

I’m pretty sure that this is just because of the grief I have been feeling lately, but I’ve started to hear that pounding that Amanda was talking about whenever I’m sitting alone in the living room. It’s the weirdest thing, when I’m sitting in there alone, I can hear it as loud as it could possibly be, but when I call Josh in, it goes silent. It’s as if whatever is making that noise only wants me to be able to hear it.

Sierra Greggerson

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Dear Anais,

I finally cracked today, and I have most possibly had the worst day of my life. I told Josh to get the hammer that he keeps in the garage and break down the living room wall. He didn’t want to at first, but he finally did it after I begged him fr an hour. I can’t believe what I saw inside that wall, it’s too much to bear.

Her body. Her body was inside the wall. My lovely, wonderful baby.

There’s no doubt that it was her. It’s only been a couple of weeks, so the body hadn’t really started to decay yet, and it was unmistakable. Somehow, someone managed to kill my beautiful daughter and stuff her into our living room walls. I tried to call the police again, but once again, they couldn’t find any DNA or fingerprints. As far as they can tell, nobody other than me, Josh and Amanda have ever been in the house since we bought it.

The worst part is, I still hear the pounding. I hear it in all the rooms now, and no matter what I do, it won’t go away.

Sierra Greggerson

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Dear Mrs. Anais Donaldson,

I am sorry to tell you that although the house you sold us was beautiful, my wife and I have decided to move out. After the death of our daughter, we figured that we needed a change of scenery in order to help us cope.

I’m afraid we are not interested in doing business with you again. Sincerely,

Josh Greggerson

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Damn, why are these creepypastas always so PREDICTABLE? Also, I find it really funny that the woman keeps bothering the real estate agent like she has no friends to talk to.

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  On 7/16/2015 at 12:17 AM, DarkSpite said:
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Damn, why are these creepypastas always so PREDICTABLE? Also, I find it really funny that the woman keeps bothering the real estate agent like she has no friends to talk to.

well she doesn't have any friends thats the thing lel

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  On 7/16/2015 at 4:48 PM, Darvan Korematsu said:

Anyone ever read the Russian Sleep Experiment? That one was majorly fucked up.

I've read it a few times. I remember the build up being good at the ending being meh. I might read it again and get back to you..

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Okay, so there's, like, 4 things I wanna talk about.

First off:Russian Sleep Experiment. It's still pretty good. I like how it told you what the gory stuff was without going into to much detail. Sometimes leaving things up to the mind and make for a better effect.

Second: This video:

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It's pretty damn good. Only they don't use many characters from good pastas, but I think that's part of the joke.

Third:This pasta:

This is my favorite pasta. The writing is pitch perfect, The main character is great and you feel for him, the gore is used VERY lightly, if at all. It gives off a chilling vibe making you wonder what could do this to the guy, and there's a twist at the end that isn't stupid bullshit! No, really! This is awesome, and the dramatic reader just sells it all! You can hear the dread and confusion and lost-ness (if that's word) in his voice, No really, either go listen to the dramatic reading, or read the pasta and then listen. I want to everyone to see this.

And finally: Do you prefer dramatic readings or reading it yourself?:

I prefer dramatic readings because when I'm on my PC I'm never doing just one thing. Plus, if the reader is good, then they'll know how to get the feeling across right. Plus, most of the time readers don't read bad pastas,so you can avoid crap with more ease. But if prefer reading it yourself, please tell us why.

Anyways, David out.

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  On 7/16/2015 at 11:29 PM, Sinikuro013 said:

oi vey. The only thing I didn't like about the video though was that it threw a blanket on all creepypastas, saying that all of them are like those bad ones. Sadly, it seams more like that every day.

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One that really freaked me out was "Normal Porn for Normal People."


It wasn't really anything terrifying, just more or so... Unnerving.


The mental images that the descriptions gave weren't pleasant. I thought about it for days.



Another that bothered me was The Smiling Man.


I'm scared of men as it is, so to read this story just bothered me. ;___;"



We Danced


Was another alright one.



Mr. Widemouth was also okay.


Only thing that turned it off for me was that I kept picturing Mr. Widemouth as a gremlin, and I love that movie. xD


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