Aljen Posted September 1, 2015 Share Posted September 1, 2015 (edited) "The war never ends, the battlefield just changes."----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- INTRODUCTION STORY 8 Years after the World War II, the world now back to peace, people was finally live happily at last. That year, you and your best friend all turn 18....On your friend birthday, he asked you to go with him to find a kind of special rock as a present for his birthday. There was a rumour that it can be found inthe wood from the mountain.Finally, you found that rock. but now, both of you are lost. And in the journey to find the way out, you encountered a strange creature with its ears shaped like aletter V. Looks like it was running away from something.After you helped it escaped from whatever chasing, it told you its name - Victini and it come from a different world. And before you can say anything, that thing appeared - A big shadow with a shape of a dragon, and it dragged you to a twisted dimension.You can feel the burn on your arm, a Bracelet was made from fire.... Its power broke you free from the dimension. But instead of returning you home, it brings you to a whole new world...The Pokémon World....And the Journey return home begin... --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- THE CHARACTER "In Pokémon Lost Story, you can choose between Kobi and Rust to explore the region, each will sometimes have different interactions on events, different tasks and so on.."*Every characters comes with multiple outfits *KOBI The Heroine A calm, curious teenage girl who wish to explore the region and reveal the secrets behind the Pokémon World. Victiny likes her for her generosity, smart and cheerful.In-game footage (might not be final) Reveal hidden contents RUSTThe HeroA bold and brave teenage boy who want to be come the Pokémon Master and finding his way home of course, he also want to find out the true power of the bracelet (also know as Victory Band).In-game footage (might not be final) Reveal hidden contents ALJEN (>3<)The RivalAs Victini said: "This boy posses a strong ambition, he stands between the good and the bad."In-game footage (might not be final) Reveal hidden contents (More coming soon) VICTINI The Victory Pokémon The one who made all this mess >.<, He give the Protagonist the Victory Band from its own Power, there is rumour that the band is made from the legendary power - Victory Power.------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ THE EVIL TEAM ???(Still in the development) .THE SHADOW????The thing that dragged you into the twisted dimension. What is it true form? And what does it want?THE DISTORTION CRACK"This world is tearing apart"Cracks of time and space which sometimes appear, They will destroy anything near them...------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ FEATURE This game is made by RPG Maker XP with the Pokémon Essentials Script Base and includes...♪ 721 Pokémon to catch.♪ A new story...♪ Whole new region Zeta to explore.♪ Tasks and Side quests.♪ GTS system.♪ Wide screen which act as touch screen sometimes.♪ Redesigned Menu and other interfaces.♪ Time counting when Distortion Crack appear (seal it quick...)♪ Multiple save files.♪ And many more....♪ Sealing Cracks with the Power of the Band.. *animation not final* Reveal hidden contents . ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------SCREENSHOT Sorry for the screenshots are in Vietnamese >.<. I'm doing both English And Vietnamese version Reveal hidden contents ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------MUSIC Reveal hidden contents TRACK HERE: https://soundcloud.com/huy-228366854/ ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------CREDITS I dont know how to express my thanks to all the people for helping me making this ~^^~...... Thanksssss Alot.... Reveal hidden contents Script Credits ==================================Luka SJ - for his awesome Elite Battle system ~^^~KleinStudio - for his BW Kit and his support, I cant do this without him helping me so much xDPoccil && Maruno - The lead dev of Pokémon Essential.help-14, Rayd12smitty , zingzags for their Following Pokémon scriptFL for HUD script, On-Screen daycare script ~^^~Rot8er_Cone/ for his support whenever i have problems with scripts.shiney570 - for the BW menu >:3meji71 for his script and GenVI add on ^^and Others:MissingLukey ,cSc-A7X ,2and2makes5 ,Gallanty,Syledude ,kdiamo11....Sprite Credits ==================================Layell and his team of Smogon X Y sprite project:thatssowitty, Branflakes325, aXI,Legitimate Username,spaceemotion,viberdk1,DanteDT34Joshr691.Peetzaahhh for the awesome logo >3<OutOfGalaxy for the Idea of Kobi and othersTiểu Hồng for the Idea of RustThe Spriters- Resources ~^^~Translator Credits ==============================Pokémon Việt NamTiểu HồngF.mon ProjectPokemon-vnPokemonVNMusic Credits ===================================Bobby RichesonSupport Credits=============================================Đ.KhoaKhang LêOutOfGalaxyTiểu HồngPokemonVNPokemon-vnLunaroseMorbitangelKleinStudioand Of course.... Nintendo and Gamefreak for the Original Pokémon games. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ SUPPORT BANNER There are many ways you can help supporting me by using these ~^^~ Reveal hidden contents ALL HEROES SUPPORT BANNER [url="http://www.pokemonreborn.com/forum/index.php?showtopic=17143"][img=http://i.imgur.com/E7UBVy4.gif][/URL] THE SHADOW SUPPORT BANNER[url="http://www.pokemonreborn.com/forum/index.php?showtopic=17143"][img=http://i.imgur.com/0Mc5ryh.gif][/URL] THE HEROINE SUPPORT BANNER [url="http://www.pokemonreborn.com/forum/index.php?showtopic=17143"][img=http://i.imgur.com/wx1c7oT.gif][/URL] ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------P/s: I'm also looking for a music composer for my game ~^^~, please send me a pm or comment on this thread if you are interested Edited September 28, 2015 by Aljen Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Global Mods Ice Cream Sand Witch Posted September 1, 2015 Global Mods Share Posted September 1, 2015 omg, this looks amazing o w o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hexagoen Posted September 1, 2015 Share Posted September 1, 2015 hold up. first of all, welcome to the forums. second of all... that was AMAZING!!! pokemon, platnum themed graphics (which by the way are my favorite), amazing scripts... a VIETNAMESE version!!! i would love to see more XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aljen Posted September 1, 2015 Author Share Posted September 1, 2015 thank you XD, are you vietnamese too? xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fumble Posted September 1, 2015 Share Posted September 1, 2015 Holy, this game looks amazing! The plot seems pretty unique, I'm excited for this~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrazySheriff Posted September 1, 2015 Share Posted September 1, 2015 Just blown away by quality. Nothing more to say. Wish you all the luck, and dont stop! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aljen Posted September 1, 2015 Author Share Posted September 1, 2015 Thank you I wont ~^^~, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sunbean Posted September 1, 2015 Share Posted September 1, 2015 Really, really awesome game you've got going. I'm really excited to see where you're going with it! Since the Distortion World seems to be important to the story... I hope we'll be visiting it in this game? c: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Autumn Rain Posted September 1, 2015 Share Posted September 1, 2015 Wow... this is awesome! I automatically +1 this. Good job and good luck! =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aljen Posted September 1, 2015 Author Share Posted September 1, 2015 (edited) On 9/1/2015 at 12:55 PM, Sunbean said: Really, really awesome game you've got going. I'm really excited to see where you're going with it! Since the Distortion World seems to be important to the story... I hope we'll be visiting it in this game? c: Of course we will ~^^~, i also love your Pokemon Scribe Project, the characters and the map in BW looks pretty awesome ~^^~ and thank you Night Fighter. Edited September 1, 2015 by Aljen Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shing Posted September 1, 2015 Share Posted September 1, 2015 This looks really interesting man. And now do i wish i could learn vietnamese words as a kid lol. I failed basically to learn my own country language, but no worries too much, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TRHStatement Posted September 1, 2015 Share Posted September 1, 2015 This looks amazing! You're definitely bringing something new to the table! Can't wait for it to come out! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aljen Posted September 1, 2015 Author Share Posted September 1, 2015 Thank you xD Dont worry about Vnmese part, there will also be an english version ~^^~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FlameMasterInfernape Posted September 1, 2015 Share Posted September 1, 2015 this game is interesting can't wait to play it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hiss13 Posted September 1, 2015 Share Posted September 1, 2015 This actually looks really good. Plus, your female protagonist looks absolutely adorable and that is always a plus. XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commander Posted September 1, 2015 Share Posted September 1, 2015 I'm not going to lie. This game looks really, really good graphic wise and the story idea doesn't sound too bad. You could say that you've really perked my interests with this. Also, every time I see Vietnamese I instantly think Vietnamese Crystal. Hopefully the game doesn't read like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pbood2 Posted September 1, 2015 Share Posted September 1, 2015 This looks amazing aljen. Honestly I can't wait to see what you do with this but those screenshots OMG I'm in love lol. Welcome to the forums also. It's a great place to get help especially if you need it and I hope you find that composer you're looking for. Have a great night (Vietnam right?) On 9/1/2015 at 5:09 PM, Commander said: I'm not going to like. This game looks really, really good graphic wise and the story idea doesn't sound too bad. You could say that you've really perked my interests with this. Also, every time I see Vietnamese I instantly think Vietnamese Crystal. Hopefully the game doesn't read like that. What because I'm confused. You said i'm not going to like then say it looks great and the story doesn't sound bad and that you're interested but you're not going to like? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aljen Posted September 1, 2015 Author Share Posted September 1, 2015 (edited) What is Vnmese Crystal @@? And i guess im staying up late tonight xD, and thank you for your comment guys T^T P/s Remember what is Vnmese Crystal right now @@.... Edited September 1, 2015 by Aljen Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commander Posted September 1, 2015 Share Posted September 1, 2015 On 9/1/2015 at 5:42 PM, Aljen said: What is Vnmese Crystal @@? And i guess im staying up late tonight xD, and thank you for your comment guys T^T It's a bootleg version of Pokemon Crystal with a translation that is so bad it's hilarious. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aljen Posted September 1, 2015 Author Share Posted September 1, 2015 (edited) >.< mine support dual language so i guess i wont be like that >.<" Hopefully But still when im working on English project please help me with grammar ^^ Edited September 1, 2015 by Aljen Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sunbean Posted September 1, 2015 Share Posted September 1, 2015 You can't get much worse than Vietnamese Crystal, lol. Quartz comes close but... Nothing worse. You'll be fine with English grammar, worry not! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Milotic Posted September 1, 2015 Share Posted September 1, 2015 I'm blown away man, seriously this looks really good, cant wait to try it out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aljen Posted September 1, 2015 Author Share Posted September 1, 2015 >.< thanks, i will try finish tweaking kobi and making overworld of rust by tonight Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mde2001 Posted September 1, 2015 Share Posted September 1, 2015 This looks awesome! Can't wait to play it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Drymus Posted September 1, 2015 Share Posted September 1, 2015 This looks AMAZING. Any idea when a demo will be released? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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