JellyJYSK Posted July 6, 2016 Share Posted July 6, 2016 (edited) ...I tried. I'm still learning and this is the first avatar sprite I've made. Constructive criticism is advised xD EDIT;; Okay, I redid the sprite and I came up with this piece of work Edited July 7, 2016 by JellyJYSK Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon116 Posted July 6, 2016 Share Posted July 6, 2016 I'm only seeing a movie poster. Are you sure this is a trainer sprite? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pocky Posted July 6, 2016 Share Posted July 6, 2016 Pretty nice, but just so you know to save in png instead of jpeg. PNG usually wields better looking images and keeps the transparent backgrounds. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon116 Posted July 6, 2016 Share Posted July 6, 2016 It's a good shape and design. I would say the color palette needs work to give it more shading. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Commander Posted July 6, 2016 Share Posted July 6, 2016 Some of the details are a bit hard to see since this is like Gen III sized sprites (I prefer bigger sprites tbh since they are easier to spot detail). Only glaring error I can spot are the black lines around her skirt. It's not what you did was necessarily wrong, but it isn't consistent with the rest of the sprite and a dark border for a very light color doesn't mix all that well. I'm not really a spriter though so my feedback is rather limited. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JellyJYSK Posted July 7, 2016 Author Share Posted July 7, 2016 Some of the details are a bit hard to see since this is like Gen III sized sprites (I prefer bigger sprites tbh since they are easier to spot detail). Only glaring error I can spot are the black lines around her skirt. It's not what you did was necessarily wrong, but it isn't consistent with the rest of the sprite and a dark border for a very light color doesn't mix all that well. I'm not really a spriter though so my feedback is rather limited. I fixed the black lines! I agree that they did NOT look attractive, so I fixed them! :3 Thanks for the advice and help! ^ v ^ It's a good shape and design. I would say the color palette needs work to give it more shading. Im not good at shading, but I tried to put depth into the skirt. Only the skirt. lol :3 Pretty nice, but just so you know to save in png instead of jpeg. PNG usually wields better looking images and keeps the transparent backgrounds. Wow, you're right! I made the picture bigger and saved it with PNG. Look at that lovely majestic transparent background -swoon- I'm only seeing a movie poster. Are you sure this is a trainer sprite? O-oh... does the movie look good at least? xP Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragon116 Posted July 8, 2016 Share Posted July 8, 2016 O-oh... does the movie look good at least? xP It looks like the sound of music. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JellyJYSK Posted July 11, 2016 Author Share Posted July 11, 2016 It looks like the sound of music. ...That's... good, right? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anthony810 Posted July 13, 2016 Share Posted July 13, 2016 (edited) How did we get from sprite to movie? O.o Edited July 13, 2016 by Anthony810 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crow_BlackFeather Posted July 21, 2016 Share Posted July 21, 2016 As a spriter myself it needs some black outlining you can't have just pure color as the outlining for parts of the sprite there has to be a bit of black. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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