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I'd like to ask if you'd be okay with being restricted to manipulating flames of your own creation and small to medium average flames made through natural causes, but not fires made through Lumen-based means? Apart from that, this is perfectly fine, and for future reference your character was most likely blessed by Marius.

Making the change now. Also have to ask, why Marius?
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  On 9/18/2016 at 8:14 PM, M_Cowher said:

I'd like to ask if you'd be okay with being restricted to manipulating flames of your own creation and small to medium average flames made through natural causes, but not fires made through Lumen-based means? Apart from that, this is perfectly fine, and for future reference your character was most likely blessed by Marius.

Making the change now. Also have to ask, why Marius?

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Don't worry - that wasn't aimed at you, it was for Stratos. Your Lumen is fine - you have less control overall from what I can tell, so it evens out.

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Don't worry - that wasn't aimed at you, it was for Stratos. Your Lumen is fine - you have less control overall from what I can tell, so it evens out.

Oh, sorry. I'll fix that.
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Not to be rude and all, but can I just point out that the link to my character submission links to my subsequent post a few posts after the real thing instead of the submission itself?

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Sorry for the wait!

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Aaaaaaand I'm done.

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EDIT: Changed all instances of 'Tess' into 'Tessa' as it is better. Thank you, Piruluk, for shining this light upon me~ Also, yeah, we should totes team up, lolz

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  On 9/18/2016 at 8:04 PM, InnocentBoy said:

My sheet for my character.

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Accepted!

  On 9/19/2016 at 7:33 AM, Amanojaku said:

Sorry for the wait!

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Accepted!

  On 9/19/2016 at 10:50 AM, Bfroger6 said:

Aaaaaaand I'm done.

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EDIT: Changed all instances of 'Tess' into 'Tessa' as it is better. Thank you, Piruluk, for shining this light upon me~ Also, yeah, we should totes team up, lolz

Accepted!

  On 9/18/2016 at 4:09 AM, Hukuna the Undying said:

Enjoooooooooooooooooy~ ((sorry I went a bit hamtastic.))

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Accepted!

If I accepted someone twice, oops. I'm tired

EDIT: As I am a total tryhard, there is now a Lightgivers channel on Showdown! It's... just called Lightgivers. I'll be posting periodic updates there, live help with everything and communicating with you guys a lot more there. Please check it out; there's a poll on there right now, actually.

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  On 9/19/2016 at 3:59 PM, Anethia said:

EDIT: As I am a total tryhard, there is now a Lightgivers channel on Showdown! It's... just called Lightgivers. I'll be posting periodic updates there, live help with everything and communicating with you guys a lot more there. Please check it out; there's a poll on there right now, actually.

so just to let you know I am not on Showdown nor will i ever be....probably(since itwould make my computer explode or at least crash it) so if there is anything you need to tell me PM me or something.

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  On 9/18/2016 at 3:36 PM, Ragnar said:
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Character Name: Roy, The Windslicer
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Appearance: Roy stands 5'7 tall, has a pale skin tone and has a medium built frame body and has green narrow eyes giving him the expression of being annoyed. His long jet-black hair is tied into a ponytail knot and has single oversized side bangs that stick out at the right side of his forehead. Roy's attire consist of a rugged white fur coat with a hood and wears dark purple pants and thick snow boots.
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Backstory: Roy is a stubborn lower-class boy who lives in a small camp somewhere in the unforgiving tundra of Aquilo. He spends most his time hunting with his two older brothers in the wide plain of ice, scavenging for food and clothing they could find in this frozen wasteland. He tends to reluctantly tag along with them just because his father told him it is for his own good. Of course, his brothers do the heavy work while his only job is only to carry the load and their hunting equipment, watching them from the distance. Roy disapproved of how things work and believe he is ready to go on his own and is ready to face the harsh terrain of Aquilo, alongside with his trusty katana.
Being defiant that he is, Roy sneaks in the middle of the night and went down hunting on his own, trying to prove himself worthy to his father that he can take care of himself and is just as good as his brothers. Roy went searching for meat in the wide terrain and goes to the breeding grounds of where the animals are. He manages to kill a deer by surprise and just as he was about to go home to bring the meat. A small pack of arctic wolves shows up right in front his path. Roy immediately draws his sword and tries to defend himself.
The wind howls as he stands there om his highest guard, anticipating the wolves to pounces, He twirls his sword in a fluid motion and noticed something different about it, like somehow it got lighter than usual. The rabid dog pounce as Roy swings wildly. just before the wolf makes contact a feet away from him, a violent gale struck the beast as it sends plummeting towards the snow field ground. Roy accidentally unlocks his Lumen due to sheer terror and was confused on what just happened, he didn't make contact with the wolf yet somehow he manages to fend it off with his swing.
He tries it again and releases a windy shockwave while the wolves stay on their feet and tries to maintain their balance from the strong draft the boy is producing with his sword. Lucky for Roy, he didn't have to exhaust himself from doing this over and over again as his brothers arrive at the scene to scare the wolves away with torches. They rush in to check on their brother and saw what just happened, Roy's reaction was the just same and even said that he doesn't need his their help. Roy receives a slap from his worried sick father as soon as they got home and at the same time hugs his youngest troublesome son.
His father decided it is best to send Roy somewhere where he can develop his new found gift, someone to mentor him, keeping him at bay which Roy grudgingly agrees to.

Personality: Even tho his intentions are in the right place, Roy tends to solve them by the means of his stubbornness. Roy has anger issues. He is defiant and utterly impulsive and likes to prove that he can handle things on his own. Roy is somewhat anti-social and has a hard time getting along with others or showing his emotions. As such he constantly behaves in a confrontational manner to all people, even those who are attempting to be kind towards him.
Lumen: Wind manipulation: Enchant blade
Roy has the gift to generate a wind vortex by continuously twirling his sword making it a propeller of some sort to control the air flow within the vicinity. While whirling his blade, Roy has the choice to either pull nearby objects towards him like a vacuum or push back incoming threats by the sheer force of this gale.
Both effects depend on how strong the wind he's generating and how much force he's exerting. Roy has difficulty in moving objects with large density, while the lesser ones are a breeze to him. (no pun intended) If he forces this ability too much, the pressure of the wind might shatter the object he's spinning as the whirlwind he created will instantly disperse.
Roy can also release a small shockwave of razor wind by doing a 90 degrees slash of his sword, that can knock back or cut objects within the line. Objects that have higher wind resistance cannot easily be blown away by this gale. Roy needs to charge this ability before using it again.
Weapon of Choice: Katana, made for slicing and dicing

I'm done, sorry about the delay. let me know if there's anything needs to be change.

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So, because I'm an idiot, I realized too late that a combat knife would not suit Aria at all and changed the weapon. Well, I kept the old one in strikethrough in case it isn't approved.

EDIT: I also edited her Lumen a tad to be a bit more detailed since I pretty much went broad on it. The bold is the newly edited parts. If it's not okay, I'll delete it.

EDIT 2: Edited the chain length according to Acqui's advice on the showdown room.

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