anethia Posted April 2, 2012 Share Posted April 2, 2012 (edited) Ok, so after some time of me being lazy and not making this I've finally gotten up and decided to do it xD ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Prologue -Mysterious Shadows~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Silently, twilight fell onto the misty, pure lake where, sitting on a grey rock, sat Ethan, sketching the various Pokemon in the lake. Ripples on the lakes surface made Ethan look up to where it came from; a Pokemon may come out from the spot. Ethan was there for what felt like an eternity before waves churned in the centre of it and all the Pokemon seemed to have vanished. "What's happening?" Ethan asked himself. Then a heavy downpour of rain came. But the skies were clear five seconds ago! Ethan's aqua, blue eyes skimmed the surface. But nothing was unusual, apart from the more ferocious wind than usual that bashed his brown hair, red striped top and bright blue jeans to the side. Ethan drew himself up to leave, when he saw red lines quivering inside the lake. Now, the lake was boiling and the water was spouting up, as if being controlled by an invisible force. Slowly, the water crawled out of the crater, containing the water. Ethan slowly backed away from the water but it continued to climb up to him. Then, as suddenly as it had came, it vanished and Ethan saw the red lines retreat. What was it?! He had no time to think about it; A mysterious flying Pokemon had swooped down now and flew back up as swiftly as it had appeared. Just what had happened? And what would this mean for Hoenn? "Ethan hurry up!" Cried a voice. His mother from Petalburg, his hometown. "You'll be late for Battle School!" Ethan jumped. He had totally forgot! His first year of Battle School was today! He rushed up the hills, through the forest, and through the gate for his home. Once there, his mother beckoned him into the car for his first year at Battle School. But years had passed from that fateful event and Ethan, aged 9 now, had a much bigger surprise waiting for him... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Prologue end~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Sorry about how short these are; They'll increase in length at the 2nd chapter. Edited April 13, 2012 by Shirinui Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aero Posted April 2, 2012 Share Posted April 2, 2012 (edited) >9 years old Anyway, pretty good for a prologue. oh and I just realized you used the quote i always used in my signature on TBT in your sig qq What gets me though, Ethan is the name of the main male character in HGSS (don't know if you purposely used it for that), so I'll be visualizing him in Hoenn during your story unless you give a complete description of how he looks, lol. And according to your description, he looks like Red from R/B/Y. xd Edited April 2, 2012 by Aero Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
anethia Posted April 2, 2012 Author Share Posted April 2, 2012 Holy crap did not notice that xD I had no idea that I done that. Also what was the quote again? ;o Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aero Posted April 2, 2012 Share Posted April 2, 2012 Challenges make life hard, overcoming them makes life meaningful.~ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
anethia Posted April 2, 2012 Author Share Posted April 2, 2012 Shush. Nobody knows yet >:C Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aperture Draconequus Posted April 5, 2012 Share Posted April 5, 2012 >Photographic Memory. And Legendaries are so Mystical.. Why can't Real life have pokemon? :sdface: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
anethia Posted April 5, 2012 Author Share Posted April 5, 2012 (edited) Thanks for the positive reviews! Here comes Chapter 1! (Also Ethan was meant to look like Red) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Chapter 1- Battle School~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Wind whistled through Ethan's hair as he swept through the plains, carried inside a car towards his battle school.His mother's blood red hair swished back and forth, silently brushing her royal blue dress. Her pink High Heels weighed down the pedals for powering the machine. Eventually, they pulled up, abruptly, beside the tower which happened to be the trainer school. It was huge and beautiful. It had to be at least 100 floors of blue solar panels for the power. It had an automatic door and an orange spiked top. Rows of wood, blue, red and yellow topped houses, for lessons and one house joined onto the tower hotel and it was labelled; Main Hall. "You go straight into the Main Hall!" Ethan's mum called "No dawdling!" Ethan ran straight into the hall where, to his surprise, sat hundreds of students who were chattering away, waiting for the assembly to start. Ethan scanned the seats, looking for an area to sit down. He sat down, gingerly, beside a woman who looked as if she would burst out crying any second. She was dressed in a bright red dress and sat clutching a necklace. "Welcome!" Cried a voice, suddenly, from the end of the hall. There was a man who was dressed in a brown suit. He rambled into a big speech about welcoming them and what not for what seemed like hours. Then Ethan simply fell asleep. "and that! Is what will happen today!" Ethan stirred and woke up. All of the school was moving! He got up and dashed outside towards the reception. First years were always bullied by the higher years. Luckily, he was the first to the reception and got his key before anyone else. Then he opened his room, went inside and twirled round where a figure sat, frozen and staring at him. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~Chapter 1- Battle School~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Edited April 5, 2012 by Shirinui Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phoenix Posted April 5, 2012 Share Posted April 5, 2012 I can't wait for the next one Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aperture Draconequus Posted April 6, 2012 Share Posted April 6, 2012 >Staring at yourself. >Stare.. Star.. English Defeats itself >.< Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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