Fanfiction - Chosen of Hatred

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I don’t own Pokémon, Nintendo/Gamefreak does, and  bla bla bla bla......,

 

Anyway, this is one more attempt in making a fanfiction, and I’d like you all to take in consideration that I’m brazilian , soooo ..you can expect a lot of flaws in my English grammar.

 

I’ve had this story for quite some time in my mind , but I’ lacked courage to write it,

hope you all like and please, review it !  it’s very important that you guys/girls tell me your opinions and CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM , it’s always gratifying !( flames will be ignored).

 

OBS : I’ll only stick to 1st- 6th generations of Pokémon.

 

And now without further ado, The First Chapter !

 

Enjoy ! ( or not…)

 

 

 

Subtitles:

 

“talking..”

 

“SCREAMING!”

 

“thinking/poké-speech”

 

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CHAPTER 01 – THE INVICTUS GYM-LEADER OF VERIDIAN.

 

 

Kanto, October 19th, 05:15 AM -  Veridian Gym

 

Ash woke up and did his personal hygiene like any other day, after that, he dressed in his tracksuit and went for a run around route 23, doing all types of exercices to maintain his fitness, after all, a gym leader have to show strength, not only for his adversaries , but to their pokémon too…

 

“phew…I’ve runned a lot today..” said the puffy raven-haired man, now entering in his shower.It was like this everyday : Run , Eat , wait for challengers …to come to their certain defeat….yes , he is that confident and strong now, after 10 years of brutal training in the most dangerous places around the world from Mt.Silver to Mt.Coronet, anyway..all over the map.

 

All of his fellows, now in their final evolution, even Pikachu, (now a Raichu) choose to evolve and help his trainer in conquering all the leagues.But despite all the training, Ash had fun every time he could …with a lot of woman, after all , a guy have his necessities, no matter how kind and honorable he may be, Raichu and the others teased him all the time because of that , much to their trainer’s chargrin….yes, the once innocent, dense and carefree boy..is now a womanizer, brutal , serious,  Champion-level warrior, and together with his “army”, defended his position with a tremendous winning-streak, never seen before in all the regions..truly something to be proud of..in his and in every Kanto Citizen opinions.

 

Later, 9:00 AM – Gym Arenas

 

“Come on Raichu.., we have a long day of training and battling ahead of ourselves, so hurry the hell up already !” said ash in a harsh but friendly tone..

 

“Raiiichuu – raiii”(“I’m coming ..i’m coming ..sheesh” ) wined his most faithful partner, dragging itself towards the training area of the enormous gym.

 

Despite their bickering, Ash and Raichu trusted each other completely, they were in complete sync in all gym-battles, a synchrony  that was only rivaled by the Ash-Greninja duo…speaking of the blue frog-like shinobi Pokémon, Ash looked into the central arena and saw Greninja, already sparring with Lucario…

 

“NIINJAA!!!”screamed the shinobi , throwing  his water shuriken into the jackal, jumping on him with his blades ready to clash , at the same time, lucario avoided the water star and formed a glowing sphere in his hands, rapid firing at his opponent, who dodged with great agility….all of his pokemon.. from Venusaur to Noivern where training on pairs in the various elemental fields scattered in the gym ( more like a roman coliseum) .

 

“ Great ! they’re already into it !…see Raichu ? you could learn a lot from their example !..” said ash looking at raichu with a smirk in his face, barely avoiding a Thunder by said pokemon .

 

“RAIII RAAAICHUUU !!“( “up yours ketchum !”) raged the orange mouse, making ash and the others laugh hard …

 

“hahahahahha!! You’re 10 years too early if you think you can shock me Raichu, being lazy like you are, your chances are 1 to 1000000 in hitting me!hahahaha” laughed the leader at his pal , further infuriating said mouse.

 

(“like you are one to talk master,… you are just as lazy as he is”) said lucario, causing all the others to laugh even harder then before, much to Ash’s annoyance ..

 

“hoooh, I see how it is you smartass jackal, it seens your morning spar wasn’t nearly enough to warm you up, so I think you and EVERYONE here should Run 4000 laps, do

5000 push-ups, 5000 pull-ups and 6000 squats just to begin…” said Ash in a manical and sinister tone, making everyone pale, except Salamence, one of the most proud and powerful of his team..

 

“Sceeeptile ! Scep..?” (“y-you are joking r-right Ash ?)  said Sceptile, now walking with his mate Serperior towards ash…

 

“ROOOAAAR!!!” “(humph !!! nothing that we didn’t do before !!!)” screamed salamence, flying with swellow, staraptor, unfezant, noivern, pidgeot, taloonflame and charizard in their trainer’s direction..

 

“ Listen up , all jokes aside, I think you guys and girls are doing a wonderful job .., but remember, there’s always someone stronger then us and training just as hard, if not harder,  out there, so I want every single one of you training like there is no tomorrow ..

do that and I’ll grant you one week worth of rest..sounds good ?” everyone agreed to that, roaring, chirping, screaming ( you all got that..) all over the place..

 

“ THEN GET BACK TO IT YOU WIMPS !!!“ screamed ash , with an aura-empowered voice..

 

(“master is wonderful…so powerful and kind at the same time, but what would we expect …after all that crap he went through, specially after that whore of a woman left him and their triplets behind like that, and for what ? .. to be with that green-haired idiot…” ) thought lucario, with a frown in his face..

 

“ You’re no exception Lucario ! SO STOP DAY-DREAMING AND GET YOUR ASS OVER THERE !!!”

 

(“o-of course master ! i-im coming !)

 

“d-daddy ?...” “dad…” “….father” said three new voices, making everyone stop and look in their direction..

 

“ Ruby ?, Sapphire, Emerald ?..what are you three doing out of bed ?..” said the Young Father, now more calm..

 

“we..we missed you daddy, so we thought we could come and watch you train..”said the 6 year old emerald, with tears in her big cyan-blue eyes.., been hugged and calmed down by her two sisters “

 

“ Oh…I’m sorry i‘ve awoke you my little princesses, please don’t cry…you  can stay, and after Daddy’s training, we can all go and have ice-cream, how about it ?”

 

“Father, you do realize we just woke up don’t you ? …” said the serious and stern one of his three daughters, Ruby Ketchum..

 

Scratching his head, ash let out a goofy laugh, and embraced his three most precious

Jewels in the entire world..

 

“hehehehe…maybe you’re right Ruby..”

 

“ Come on ! don’t i got to voice my opinion ! ? daad ! I’m all right with ice-cream !! it’s the most delicious food ever ! “ said a excited sapphire, the most cheerful of the three ..

 

“ umm…i..i think  sis is right dad.., we should’t eat ice-cream right now , it’s not good f-for our heal …heath i-i mean health !..” said emerald, the shy and sweet one, blushing up a storm and looking down..

 

(“so adorable!..”) thought ash looking at his youngest with pride and joy, but looking up and frowning right after…remembering a certain someone he thought that he loved a long time ago…

 

(“I’ll make sure that you never see MY daughters ever again…you backstabbing bitch..”) thought the Gym Leader clenching his fists.

 

 

 

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AAAND CUT !

 

Well , what you think guys ? Good ? bad !

Please tell me where I can improve ok ?

 

Next Chapter : Ghost from the past .

 

See ya !