Dragonite149 Posted April 15, 2012 Share Posted April 15, 2012 (edited) (Preface) Reborn had finally returned to its former glory. Thanks to Champion (Insert name here) Crime and Poverty’s firm grasp on the region weakened and eventually faded into a mere remnant, a nightmare from the past and nothing more. But Champion (insert name here)'s reign of prosperity was short lived. A mere two years after (His/Her) rein began (He/She) was called upon by the Council of the Five Dragons the authority behind the Pokémon league to meet with them immediately. A replacement needed immediately. The Champion promptly called upon His/Her Longtime friend Professor (insert name here) for advice. Professor (insert name here) recommended Renowned Water Pokémon Master Aquarius as a more than fitting replacement for the time being. The professor arranged everything the current champion was on (His/Her) way to meet with the Council and the Interim Champion was on a plane set for arrival in three days… This is where the story begins… and like it says on top that is only the Preface a backdrop to the epic story that i am going to tell i wish this could become canon but i highly doubt it... sadface anywhooo this story would potentially take place two years after the events of Reborn the game. this would also serve as a go between for the sequel (implying sequel) thoughts and constructive criticism are appreciated please don't flame/troll me because you probably have better things to do Edited April 15, 2012 by Dragonite149 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragonite149 Posted April 16, 2012 Author Share Posted April 16, 2012 The winds were so calm that day. The clouds, fluffy as can be. A Pilot’s dream if you think about it. Aquarius was Minutes away from reaching his destination. He was excited although he tried to portray a serious demeanor, Aquarius just couldn’t help but grin and grin he did. Aquarius smiled as he watched his two year old son try to peek out the window his beautiful wife making the young child sit and put its safety harness back on. When suddenly the whole world seemed to shake and rattle. It’s a horrible experience the feeling of helplessness as you free-fall to your doom and there’s nothing you can do to stop it. Aquarius made for the doors in hopes of saving his family but the emergency exits would not budge and all the parachutes were gone… this was the end for him nut he would not let his son meet this bitter end. He noticed that in panic one of the passengers had shattered a window, a window of hope he grabbed his young son too young to understand and told him that he would be all right he gave him his goggles as a good luck charm tied them to his tiny clothes and chucked him out the window… His son landed in a lake just as the plane crashed into a mountain peak and was engulfed in flames in caseyou needed a teaser >.> Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maelstrom Posted April 16, 2012 Share Posted April 16, 2012 Not really believable- you're chucking a toddler out a window. I'm assuming this is a small private plane. Those windows might be big enough. Commercial airlines, not so much. Dat glass/plastic is like bulletproof strength, what with having to maintain cabin pressure and prevent people from breaking through them. No parachutes on commercial arilines either. Wouldn't have enough time to strap one on and line everybody up to jump out a door that is probably impossible to open mid-flight (what with the air pushing the door closed, not to mention mechanical design)- before coming to a horribly abrupt halt. Falling is still falling and with that speed, water is still like hitting pavement. Especially from a height where the plane can still drift over the lake and then crash up in a mountain. Hope that 2 year old can swim. But I'd roll with it. This is pokemon, afterall. Also pikachu probably did it. Rodent sneaking onto planes to eat through electrical wires. >> Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragonite149 Posted April 16, 2012 Author Share Posted April 16, 2012 thanks for the feedback and your right i just need a way for the kid to survive he is the main character after all Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maelstrom Posted April 16, 2012 Share Posted April 16, 2012 It's your story, but maybe he tosses a pokeball out the window with a flying pokemon? All up to you. ^ was just me going "ahh" after all the planerides I've been on. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragonite149 Posted April 16, 2012 Author Share Posted April 16, 2012 great idea im considering the father tossing his dragonite (still in a pokeball) out the window to save his son when he throws the child out the window. and then the dragonite leaves him on the shore and dives into the lake to live there (playing a major role deep in the story) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maelstrom Posted April 17, 2012 Share Posted April 17, 2012 I like it. Don't let me change your story too much. It is YOUR story after all. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyrus Posted April 17, 2012 Share Posted April 17, 2012 We need more shitsux so terrible it's the greatest thing ever kind of idea. That's the Reborn FanFic IMO. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragonite149 Posted April 17, 2012 Author Share Posted April 17, 2012 (edited) okay guys I like it. Don't let me change your story too much. It is YOUR story after all. i kinda also wanted to make it a community effort as well (Reborn is a part of us all after all not just me or Ame) that's why im doing this to make everyone's imagination come to life i'll make more topics conserning this fanfic and Polls too Once i figure out how to make them concenring the story line/characters Edited April 17, 2012 by Dragonite149 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yuki Posted April 18, 2012 Share Posted April 18, 2012 I was around last season and am actually one of the people in charge of leaders and stuff this season so I'm not sure if it would be "cheating" to help out too much xP Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragonite149 Posted April 18, 2012 Author Share Posted April 18, 2012 there is no cheating xD since it whould belong to everyone no one can get cheated lol anywho yeah uhh this is mostly the go between the end of reborn the game and it's sequal so i need it to explain what happened in between the games Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dragonite149 Posted April 18, 2012 Author Share Posted April 18, 2012 (edited) Maybe we can ask Ame if just straight up the community can write the story of what happens after the game (with Ame's guidance of coarse) to set him up for the Sequel(implying sequel) Edited April 18, 2012 by Dragonite149 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yuki Posted April 19, 2012 Share Posted April 19, 2012 Well we'd need the game to be finished for that. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheOneAndOnlyEnigma Posted May 30, 2012 Share Posted May 30, 2012 Maaaaybe we could have a little mini manga series each month Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Summer Posted May 30, 2012 Share Posted May 30, 2012 great idea im considering the father tossing his dragonite (still in a pokeball) out the window to save his son when he throws the child out the window. and then the dragonite leaves him on the shore and dives into the lake to live there (playing a major role deep in the story) Let's give him a newborn pokemon instead that he can raise to be his partner, but if you prefer Dragonite, it's up to you. Just saying. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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