Developers Jan Posted December 23, 2016 Author Developers Share Posted December 23, 2016 On 12/23/2016 at 1:52 AM, HYCROX said: https://drive.google.com/open?id=0Bw1HU_sZjRnkQUcwbUkyWW9xRnM Slowpoke, Slowbro and Magmar (front AND back) are now done, I'll do the Charmander line and Snorlax ones tomorrow. Expand The ideas are there, but these need some work. Firstly, you're actually editing the wrong backsprites.... We're switching from 4th Gen to 5th gen. I supplied you with the 5th gen back sprites in the main post. That aside, I have quite a bit of criticism. Reveal hidden contents Well, let's start out with this. A lot of the outlines of the normal pokemon are left alone, which creates a conflicting contrast with the the new colors set in. This mostly stands out with Voltorb and Electrode. -> You have to reblend the gray pixels around the eyes and the top of the sprite otherwise it'll look weird like this. When reblended, it'll look like this. Though, I can't say I'm a huge fan of this color theme. I'm assuming it's supposed to be a Cyndaquil line theme. Perhaps try to mock a different Pokeball? Preferably not the Great or Ultra Ball. ----------------------- The hair on top of the Slowbro isn't the same resolution as the sprite, so it looks really really weird. You have to resize them by 50% before spriting anything new on them. ----------------------- -> The idea of coconut Exeggcute is cute, but I think the brown is too harsh. There's also a problem with the outline again. If you brighten the colors a bit and add a black outline for the red, it'll come out looking like this. I'll be using the one I fixed up so you can move on to Exeggutor with my criticism in mind. Though I think some slight changes to the leaves might be good as well. ------------------------- Same with Exeggcute. Amazing idea, but the execution isn't all there. the black shades are too similar so I can barely see its body. The blue is a nice blue in contrast, though. The outline needs fixing here as well. This one might need to be redone from scratch. ------------------------ This one has outline problems too, but it isn't as bad. I just don't really think the color scheme here works. The blue and green are conflicting. I think it's best to start from scratch with this one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Developers Jan Posted December 23, 2016 Author Developers Share Posted December 23, 2016 On 12/23/2016 at 1:37 AM, U-M said: I'd like to try my hand at Cubone and Marowak. Brainstorm: Camo Cubone Expand I like the idea, but it needs a little work. There are outline problems that need to be fixed. Try changing the body's outline to a darker shade of the blue the body has. The red marks on the face needs to be blended slightly better. On 12/23/2016 at 2:22 AM, EliteFlyingTaco said: Mew and Mewtwo are here! The Mega Mewtwo will be done tomorrow. Expand Approved! Nice work!! On 12/23/2016 at 2:18 AM, Bluedodobob said: Here's the beedrill line done (including mega). I'll take the Pidgeot and Butterfree lines next. Expand A big improvement from what you showed me before. Darken the purple on all the sprites just a tad and show them to me again. Almost there! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyanna Cyril Posted December 23, 2016 Share Posted December 23, 2016 Here's the shiny Poliwag. Wasn't sure if you were going to like red or not, so wanted to know what you think before doing the rest similarly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Developers Jan Posted December 23, 2016 Author Developers Share Posted December 23, 2016 On 12/23/2016 at 3:00 AM, Cyanna Cyril said: Here's the shiny Poliwag. Wasn't sure if you were going to like red or not, so wanted to know what you think before doing the rest similarly. Expand Omg... That's literally so fkn cute. I love it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyanna Cyril Posted December 23, 2016 Share Posted December 23, 2016 On 12/23/2016 at 3:10 AM, Jan said: Omg... That's literally so fkn cute. I love it. Expand I'll try to get the other two done tomorrow. Thanks for the compliment! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Plok Posted December 23, 2016 Share Posted December 23, 2016 Gonna work on sandshrew,sandslash and psyduck Reveal hidden contents Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ojama Yellow Posted December 23, 2016 Share Posted December 23, 2016 been trying to work on a shiny arcanine since yesterday, will also do growlithe later im gonna be honest, im not a high quality spriter, though. so even though im working on them rn its probably a good idea to allow other people to take a shot at them either way (barkus is god) edit: oh yes, small mention of what palette im using exactly- im trying to give arcanine a palette similar to stoutland, with the fur looking alike to stoutlands and the manes having the color of stoutlands 'stache. figured id let this know already so that if its not a good idea I can already start working on something else Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Veterans Zumi Posted December 23, 2016 Veterans Share Posted December 23, 2016 Eevees are done! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AnnDy Posted December 23, 2016 Share Posted December 23, 2016 I want alakazam plsss =)) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alex Posted December 23, 2016 Share Posted December 23, 2016 Male Rattata: Female Rattata: Male Raticate: Female Raticate: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bazaro Posted December 23, 2016 Share Posted December 23, 2016 On 12/23/2016 at 6:54 PM, Alex said: Male Rattata: Female Rattata: Male Raticate: Female Raticate: Expand Male Raticate has an extra grey pixel on its eye, and neither Raticate backsprite have red eyes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alex Posted December 23, 2016 Share Posted December 23, 2016 On 12/23/2016 at 6:58 PM, Bazaro said: Male Raticate has an extra grey pixel on its eye, and neither Raticate backsprite have red eyes. Expand ty, fixed now (hopefully). also the black lines just match the outline of the forums, they are there, jus trust me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bluedodobob Posted December 23, 2016 Share Posted December 23, 2016 Improved beedrills as requested. Reveal hidden contents Also, what do you think of monarch butterfree and pidgeospray? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
U-M Posted December 23, 2016 Share Posted December 23, 2016 Alright, updated Cubone and Marowak: Not sure about the eye area on marowak, but Cubone looks a lot better to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliteFlyingTaco Posted December 23, 2016 Share Posted December 23, 2016 Put the Mega Mewtwo's on hold because I got an idea for Farfetch'd. Here's the front sprite. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hycrox Posted December 23, 2016 Share Posted December 23, 2016 Ayyyy, that's pretty good Voltorb resembling a TM and Bluish Magmar. Yea or nay? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyanna Cyril Posted December 23, 2016 Share Posted December 23, 2016 Poliwhirl reporting for duty! Lemme know if you want me to clean them up in a certain way. Don't know if the front sprite's edges are good enough/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guzam Posted December 24, 2016 Share Posted December 24, 2016 Here's what I've got for Paras and Parasect so far: Liking the Parasect more than the Paras tbh. Get back to me when you can Janiel/Zum Edit: Since it doesn't seem like anyone else wants it yet, I've got a Mankey loosely based on Stufful's color scheme (Minus the white): Like the two above, I'll wait for approval before I start back sprites. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Veterans Azeria Posted December 24, 2016 Veterans Share Posted December 24, 2016 Switched around the colour schemes for Omanyte and Kabuto for fun. Oh and I made 2 versions of Aerodactyl but idk which one I like more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fumble Posted December 24, 2016 Share Posted December 24, 2016 On 12/23/2016 at 11:20 AM, Zumi said: Expand just wanted to say that this is beautiful zumi <333 also love the legendary birbs, white rats, perry the psyduck, and fossils; good work and can't wait to see the rest of the shinies~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hycrox Posted December 24, 2016 Share Posted December 24, 2016 https://drive.google.com/open?id=0Bw1HU_sZjRnkQUcwbUkyWW9xRnM Hopefully everything's all right, Everything of my batch is here (added pancake Snorlax and modified some of the colour schemes). I would also like to claim the Rolling Stones (Geodude line), Staryu, Starmie and Onix Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Developers Jan Posted December 24, 2016 Author Developers Share Posted December 24, 2016 On 12/23/2016 at 9:17 AM, Njab said: Gonna work on sandshrew,sandslash and psyduck Reveal hidden contents Expand Omg... This is so cute. Either Sandshrew works so I'm going to take the one on the left.. That Perry the Platypus Psyduck is too precious. Approved! On 12/24/2016 at 12:11 AM, Guzam said: Here's what I've got for Paras and Parasect so far: Liking the Parasect more than the Paras tbh. Get back to me when you can Janiel/Zum Edit: Since it doesn't seem like anyone else wants it yet, I've got a Mankey loosely based on Stufful's color scheme (Minus the white): Like the two above, I'll wait for approval before I start back sprites. Expand The colors for Paras and Parasect are good but they need to be corrected. The shading is a different shade of blue entirely. Perhaps add some saturation to the purple so that the spots stand out more. Overall pretty solid job! Mankey is fine too, so if you want to make a back sprite on that then go ahead. On 12/23/2016 at 7:38 PM, Bluedodobob said: Improved beedrills as requested. Reveal hidden contents Also, what do you think of monarch butterfree and pidgeospray? Expand Beedrill line is accepted as complete. Monarch Butterfree is pretty nice and I like the idea. So that's approved. All I need is a backsprite (And the other gender differences for Butterfree.) Pidgeot is fine, but I would go more toward a golden yellow rather than a greenish tint. On 12/23/2016 at 9:20 PM, U-M said: Alright, updated Cubone and Marowak: Not sure about the eye area on marowak, but Cubone looks a lot better to me. Expand The color choices are fine, but they need to be blended better. The outline on Cubone's and Marowak's body are still incorrect. They should be a dark blue instead of a green. Try adding a different shade of red to the spots. On 12/23/2016 at 10:07 PM, EliteFlyingTaco said: Put the Mega Mewtwo's on hold because I got an idea for Farfetch'd. Here's the front sprite. Expand Omg. That's cute. Approved. All I need is a back sprite now. On 12/23/2016 at 10:18 PM, HYCROX said: Ayyyy, that's pretty good Voltorb resembling a TM and Bluish Magmar. Yea or nay? Expand Voltorb is much better. I would avoid using brighter colors for Magmar. Try going with something darker. The outline is still incorrect here as well. It's a red when it should be dark/light blue. Also let's slow down on claiming stuff. Wait until I approve your other ones first. Quality over quantity is key! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Developers Jan Posted December 24, 2016 Author Developers Share Posted December 24, 2016 On 12/24/2016 at 12:42 AM, Azeria said: Switched around the colour schemes for Omanyte and Kabuto for fun. Oh and I made 2 versions of Aerodactyl but idk which one I like more. Expand I skipped this one by mistake so yolo double post. Just pretend it's one big post. Overall really solid job. I think I like the Aerodactly on the left better. Approved! On 12/23/2016 at 11:59 PM, Cyanna Cyril said: Poliwhirl reporting for duty! Lemme know if you want me to clean them up in a certain way. Don't know if the front sprite's edges are good enough/ Expand Perfect! Approved. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alex Posted December 24, 2016 Share Posted December 24, 2016 Touched up on the rattata/raticate sprites, they look much better i think Reveal hidden contents Male Rattata: Female Rattata: Male Raticate: Female Raticate: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliteFlyingTaco Posted December 24, 2016 Share Posted December 24, 2016 Here is the complete Farfetch'd set Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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