Alex Posted January 2, 2017 Share Posted January 2, 2017 the front sprite has one random white pixel, but the sizes are fine Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hycrox Posted January 2, 2017 Share Posted January 2, 2017 (edited) I made Exeggutor's torso a lot darker, but if you feel that it is still not enough of a difference, then I'll change it. Also.... Several days ago, I had an idea for Rhydon.... I already knew it was gonna be hard, but I still suffered for five days with that idea.... Hopefully you'll enjoy.... if it is not considered good enough, then I shall go cry in the corner think of something else.... Here it goes.... Spoiler Edited January 2, 2017 by HYCROX Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atticus Posted January 2, 2017 Share Posted January 2, 2017 12 minutes ago, HYCROX said: Hide contents oh my god we are number one but every one is replaced with rhydon's cry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hycrox Posted January 2, 2017 Share Posted January 2, 2017 Just now, Atticus said: oh my god we are number one but every one is replaced with rhydon's cry I'll do it on Movie Maker tomorrow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MakaTorracat Posted January 3, 2017 Share Posted January 3, 2017 lolol probably going to come up with some other ideas, never realized how bright this would be xD But hey, it was fun to do based on Huntail's shiny with shiny clamperl's pearl Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dypatome Posted January 3, 2017 Share Posted January 3, 2017 15 minutes ago, MakaTorracat said: lolol probably going to come up with some other ideas, never realized how bright this would be xD But hey, it was fun to do based on Huntail's shiny with shiny clamperl's pearl Just a warning, Jan (or Zumi) may reject this because Jan's stated that they don't want any of these to be super bright, like this green is and the center is. Speaking of the center; a problem with it is that it's so bright you can only barely see the outline of the eyes; you need to make the yellow darker so that it's more clear, or it needs to be a different color entirely. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MakaTorracat Posted January 3, 2017 Share Posted January 3, 2017 (edited) 26 minutes ago, Dypatome said: Just a warning, Jan (or Zumi) may reject this because Jan's stated that they don't want any of these to be super bright, like this green is and the center is. Speaking of the center; a problem with it is that it's so bright you can only barely see the outline of the eyes; you need to make the yellow darker so that it's more clear, or it needs to be a different color entirely. Yeah I noticed that as I was making it, which is why I am making a different version. I mainly just continued it to see how bright I could make it. Figured I would share it here before posting a better one ^^ Thanks for the advice anyways though edit: darkened all the colors except the orange a bit still probably going to mess around with cloyster some more though Edited January 3, 2017 by MakaTorracat Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hycrox Posted January 3, 2017 Share Posted January 3, 2017 Yesterday I forgot to present Slowpoke and Slowbro. If everything's okay with these then I'll move on to the backsprites. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Veterans Zumi Posted January 3, 2017 Veterans Share Posted January 3, 2017 On 1/2/2017 at 2:09 AM, HYCROX said: I had two ideas for Voltorb and Electrode: Premier Ball and Cherish Ball Baseball and Basket ball. EDIT: Did the front of Golduck too: Fedora or no fedora? EDIT-EDIT: Doduo with different shading. If it's good now I'll move on to the backsprites. As for Voltorb and Electrode, you're on the right path with the first set, but the second set is lacking shading, which you really shouldn't leave out. I still feel like you'd be better off if you actually picked a different set of Pokéballs though, because these just look really plain and not all that original to me. Golduck is good, but i'd leave the hat off-- Other than that it's nice looking! I think you should be able to move on to the backsprites for this one (Please make sure to have a version with a transparent background though, it'll save time for Jan) Doduo's colors are still too saturdated and are painful to look at, as well as the shading being barely visible and the colors being generally too dark to distinguish from each other, so I'll have to reject this one again. 17 hours ago, MakaTorracat said: Thank you so much oh, and as a joke thing, I messed around with doduo's sprite XD I know it was claimed already but I was just messing around while I waited to get shellder and cloyster Personally I think it's cute, but it was more of "lets pass the time" than actual spriting. Do with it as you will, or don't do anything. Idc owo/ Now off to work on Shellder and Cloyster Heyyyyy this one is pretty cool! I'm gonna wait with approving this one though because of Hycrox having originally claimed this one, so I'll let Jan make a final judgement on this one later. 14 hours ago, Korvpizza said: Magikarp and Gyarados are finally done! I made them look like the dimensional rift Gyarados, just a little less demonic. Reveal hidden contents Also Jan, I noticed that Grimer and Muk were credited under MakaTorracat, even though I made them. (That is, if my sprites were accepted, but I think that was the case.) Anyways, it doesn't seem like there's anything left that hasn't already been claimed. So I guess -if they get accepted- these are my last gen 1 sprites. Bruhhh these are super nice. Well done! I'll make sure to update the claim list later. 12 hours ago, MakaTorracat said: Sorry to hear about Jan D: Well, here is Shellder owo/ Based off of Clamperl's shiny Nice job! All there's left to do is indeed the size fix, and getting rid of that one pixel in the top right corner of the front sprite, and then you should be set. I made Exeggutor's torso a lot darker, but if you feel that it is still not enough of a difference, then I'll change it. Also.... Several days ago, I had an idea for Rhydon.... I already knew it was gonna be hard, but I still suffered for five days with that idea.... Hopefully you'll enjoy.... if it is not considered good enough, then I shall go cry in the corner think of something else.... Here it goes.... Reveal hidden contents Looks better than the previous one, but there's the shading issue again; you're using a color that's only slightly darker than the lighter ones, and this makes it look like as if there's no shading. The Rhydon is also lacking shading as well as having improper use of black, and as much as I like memes and think it's pretty funny what you did, I really don't think I should accept this one. 8 hours ago, MakaTorracat said: Yeah I noticed that as I was making it, which is why I am making a different version. I mainly just continued it to see how bright I could make it. Figured I would share it here before posting a better one ^^ Thanks for the advice anyways though edit: darkened all the colors except the orange a bit still probably going to mess around with cloyster some more though Looks better than your first attempt, but the colors of the center of the cloyster are still too light. Try using a darker outline, or at least use it for the outline of the mouth and the eyes, as they're barely distinguishable from the rest of the sprite. 4 hours ago, HYCROX said: Yesterday I forgot to present Slowpoke and Slowbro. If everything's okay with these then I'll move on to the backsprites. There's an anti-aliasing problem here, and the edges are blurry. Also, the colors are a bit too similar to the original sprites, so perhaps try something else? (Also is that a The Flash reference on the slowbro or what) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hycrox Posted January 3, 2017 Share Posted January 3, 2017 4 hours ago, Zumi said: As for Voltorb and Electrode, you're on the right path with the first set, but the second set is lacking shading, which you really shouldn't leave out. I still feel like you'd be better off if you actually picked a different set of Pokéballs though, because these just look really plain and not all that original to me. Golduck is good, but i'd leave the hat off-- Other than that it's nice looking! I think you should be able to move on to the backsprites for this one (Please make sure to have a version with a transparent background though, it'll save time for Jan) Doduo's colors are still too saturdated and are painful to look at, as well as the shading being barely visible and the colors being generally too dark to distinguish from each other, so I'll have to reject this one again. Looks better than the previous one, but there's the shading issue again; you're using a color that's only slightly darker than the lighter ones, and this makes it look like as if there's no shading. The Rhydon is also lacking shading as well as having improper use of black, and as much as I like memes and think it's pretty funny what you did, I really don't think I should accept this one. There's an anti-aliasing problem here, and the edges are blurry. Also, the colors are a bit too similar to the original sprites, so perhaps try something else? (Also is that a The Flash reference on the slowbro or what) Well, I added some shading to the Voltorb and Electrode sprites (the sports ball ones), because there are not really many recognizable Pokeballs aside from the Pokeball, Great Ball, Ultra Ball and Master Ball, in my opinion. But if you don't like it, then I can change it. Regarding Doduo, I think that the Blue bird idea will not work here, and therefore am suggesting you to use MakaTorracat's idea if she doesn't mind (this one): I also added some shade to Exeggutor: And completed Golduck's backsprite: Gonna work on the rest of them now (and yes, Slowbro's a reference to The Flash). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MakaTorracat Posted January 3, 2017 Share Posted January 3, 2017 I have no problem with the doduo being used xD If you want me to make the rest of the sprites though they have to wait till after I finish making cloyster perfect and when school is out lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hycrox Posted January 3, 2017 Share Posted January 3, 2017 (edited) Idea for Rhydon (Rhyhorn will have this colour scheme too). Any thoughts? Is it approved? Edited January 3, 2017 by HYCROX Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dypatome Posted January 3, 2017 Share Posted January 3, 2017 (edited) Just going to throw this out here. Jan made a Steven Universe-styled Geodude, so I threw this Rhydon together real quick inspired by the Steven Universe drill. Give it some thought; I can finish the other sprites and possibly remove the background if it's usable. Edit: Can someone please explain to me how the both of us managed to submit a Rhydon at the exact same time? @Jan @Zumi The one I've made was 100% just for fun, so Hycrox's should receive priority as he's the one who originally claimed it. Edited January 3, 2017 by Dypatome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hycrox Posted January 4, 2017 Share Posted January 4, 2017 Lol I forgot Slowpoke and Slowbro again Now with a bit more shading! If you really don't like the design then I'll change it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hycrox Posted January 4, 2017 Share Posted January 4, 2017 19 hours ago, Dypatome said: Just going to throw this out here. Jan made a Steven Universe-styled Geodude, so I threw this Rhydon together real quick inspired by the Steven Universe drill. Give it some thought; I can finish the other sprites and possibly remove the background if it's usable. Edit: Can someone please explain to me how the both of us managed to submit a Rhydon at the exact same time? @Jan @Zumi The one I've made was 100% just for fun, so Hycrox's should receive priority as he's the one who originally claimed it. No worries mate, the best one should be selected (yours looks great too btw). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Atticus Posted January 4, 2017 Share Posted January 4, 2017 (edited) sorry i just had to improve hycrox's slowpoke/bro because this idea is PRICELESS Spoiler Edited January 4, 2017 by Atticus edit: ninja'd by hycrox himself oh my Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hycrox Posted January 4, 2017 Share Posted January 4, 2017 36 minutes ago, Atticus said: sorry i just had to improve hycrox's slowpoke/bro because this idea is PRICELESS Hide contents Looks great to me. Don't mind my design then. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MakaTorracat Posted January 5, 2017 Share Posted January 5, 2017 Fixed (I think) shellder sprites Just finishing Cloyster now, will edit this post when I finish Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alex Posted January 5, 2017 Share Posted January 5, 2017 im not sure why you resized the front sprite; it looks blurry now. the front sprites for gen 1-4 pokemon are supposed to be a different size to the backsprites Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Developers Jan Posted January 5, 2017 Author Developers Share Posted January 5, 2017 Hello everyone! I finally got my computer up and running so I should be able to take a look at these pretty soon... Give me a day or two to get re adjusted and I'll have everyone's reviews up and ready! Thank you for your patience and thank you Zumi for taking the time to look after this thread while I was gone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ojama Yellow Posted January 5, 2017 Share Posted January 5, 2017 its been five years since I posted my arcanine and promised id get back to growlithe and I still havent done so. and I most likely wont be getting back to it soon enough, so im gonna withdraw on making growlithe. for reference, this is the shiny arcanine I made. feel free to start arcanine from scratch again if you got a different idea, though. sorry for the inconvenience. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MakaTorracat Posted January 5, 2017 Share Posted January 5, 2017 I had been told it needed to be resized D: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Might Gai Posted January 6, 2017 Share Posted January 6, 2017 17 hours ago, Kiteruguma said: its been five years since I posted my arcanine and promised id get back to growlithe and I still havent done so. and I most likely wont be getting back to it soon enough, so im gonna withdraw on making growlithe. for reference, this is the shiny arcanine I made. feel free to start arcanine from scratch again if you got a different idea, though. sorry for the inconvenience. i will jump right on it, respect for that awesome shiny (best one i saw so far) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Developers Jan Posted January 6, 2017 Author Developers Share Posted January 6, 2017 On 1/5/2017 at 7:34 AM, MakaTorracat said: Fixed (I think) shellder sprites Just finishing Cloyster now, will edit this post when I finish There wasn't any sizing issue with the original one, though. It's all good. I got these saved. Marked as completed! On 1/4/2017 at 1:05 PM, Atticus said: sorry i just had to improve hycrox's slowpoke/bro because this idea is PRICELESS Reveal hidden contents Oh my god. This is pretty neat. I'll put you both down for credit. Approved! On 1/3/2017 at 5:33 PM, Dypatome said: Just going to throw this out here. Jan made a Steven Universe-styled Geodude, so I threw this Rhydon together real quick inspired by the Steven Universe drill. Give it some thought; I can finish the other sprites and possibly remove the background if it's usable. Edit: Can someone please explain to me how the both of us managed to submit a Rhydon at the exact same time? @Jan @Zumi The one I've made was 100% just for fun, so Hycrox's should receive priority as he's the one who originally claimed it. On 1/3/2017 at 5:32 PM, HYCROX said: Idea for Rhydon (Rhyhorn will have this colour scheme too). Any thoughts? Is it approved? So I really like both of these. Hycrox, I can tell that your shading/color usage is getting better. Nice job! I think I may go with the Drill styled Rhydon. I like the green that was used. On 1/3/2017 at 0:27 PM, HYCROX said: Well, I added some shading to the Voltorb and Electrode sprites (the sports ball ones), because there are not really many recognizable Pokeballs aside from the Pokeball, Great Ball, Ultra Ball and Master Ball, in my opinion. But if you don't like it, then I can change it. Regarding Doduo, I think that the Blue bird idea will not work here, and therefore am suggesting you to use MakaTorracat's idea if she doesn't mind (this one): I also added some shade to Exeggutor: And completed Golduck's backsprite: Gonna work on the rest of them now (and yes, Slowbro's a reference to The Flash). I have an idea for Voltorb/Electrode, so give me a few to whip up an example. Exeggutor came out nice! I'll be approving this one. All I need is a backsprite. Golduck's backsprite is approved, however, there is an issue with the outline not being too light so you can barely make it out. I fixed this, though. Just pointing it out for future ref. Oh yeah, can you post Golduck's front sprite as its own file, too? Ty in advance. ------ @MakaTorracat Going to have to reject this one for now. There are issues with shading not being very noticeable, and the fact that the blue on the body is pretty messy. There's a resolution problem that brings in 1x pixels into a 2x sprite, so it looks extremely weird. I'd say to avoid blue with this bird for now. On 1/2/2017 at 10:04 PM, MakaTorracat said: Yeah I noticed that as I was making it, which is why I am making a different version. I mainly just continued it to see how bright I could make it. Figured I would share it here before posting a better one ^^ Thanks for the advice anyways though edit: darkened all the colors except the orange a bit still probably going to mess around with cloyster some more though Hm... Not too sure about the color scheme for this. The Green is fine, but the colors used in the inner core are strange. It's pretty bright too. Perhaps use another color for the cores? On 1/2/2017 at 6:41 PM, HYCROX said: I made Exeggutor's torso a lot darker, but if you feel that it is still not enough of a difference, then I'll change it. Also.... Several days ago, I had an idea for Rhydon.... I already knew it was gonna be hard, but I still suffered for five days with that idea.... Hopefully you'll enjoy.... if it is not considered good enough, then I shall go cry in the corner think of something else.... Here it goes.... Reveal hidden contents . . . . . . . . . Well played. It's a little too memey so I think I'm going to reject it. But it was definitely funny so I give you points for that. On 1/2/2017 at 4:29 PM, Korvpizza said: Magikarp and Gyarados are finally done! I made them look like the dimensional rift Gyarados, just a little less demonic. Hide contents Also Jan, I noticed that Grimer and Muk were credited under MakaTorracat, even though I made them. (That is, if my sprites were accepted, but I think that was the case.) Anyways, it doesn't seem like there's anything left that hasn't already been claimed. So I guess -if they get accepted- these are my last gen 1 sprites. @Korvpizza These are beautiful! Marked as completed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hycrox Posted January 6, 2017 Share Posted January 6, 2017 The Golduck frontsprite, as you requested. And Exeggutor's backsprite. 53 minutes ago, Jan said: I have an idea for Voltorb/Electrode, so give me a few to whip up an example. And also Jan, what do you mean by this? sorry I'm dumb Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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