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[OOC/SIGNUPS] Aurora University for the Preternaturally Gifted


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Hello, dear student! I am Minerva Agnusdei, President and founder of the Aurora University for the Preternaturally Gifted. I am delighted to inform you that you have been accepted to our ambitious new school, and I hope to see great things out of each and every person we've chosen to attend. Enclosed in this letter, you will find several items that will be essential to the first days of attendance, including a class registration form to be returned as quickly as possible as well as a document collecting some vital data we will need about you. . .

-Acceptance letter from Aurora University

So what is this?

 

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Setting

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Rules

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Character Sheet

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With that, there's not much else to say, other than dropping an invitation for the Discord server. I hope you enjoy the game!

 

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Franken Furter huh?

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Name: Lin Zoren

Gender: Male
Age: 90
Species: Chinese Sea Dragon

Appearance: Zoren is a young sea dragon about 50 feet long in length and 3 feet in width. His body is covered in aqua green scales, with yellow fins lined along the spine. At the end of it, there is an aquamarine tail fin about 4 feet wide. His head is adorned with a large pair of golden horns that glow in darkness. Two white whiskers extend from his crocodile-like nose.

He takes a human form when traveling on land. In his human form, he's a six-foot tall, yellow-skinned teenage boy of average build, wearing verdant and white oriental clothes much like that of ancient Chinese scholars (Like this, sans the face). He takes a feathered fan with him all the time. 


Personality: Zoren is very orderly and tidy. He's very interested in human culture and politics and often shares his thoughts on it. He's also a very strict person, taking upon himself to enforce rules around his living space. He rarely goes out on his own, often reading newspapers and other information media. However, with a simple 'Please', he can be dragged out of his dorm easily.

On relationships, he's often the kind that waits passively and breaks up passively, rarely making either kind of move on his own. For some reasons, he never seems to be hurt from breakups ever. Though, he does seem to read a lot of romance novels after breakups.


Backstory: Zoren hails from the East China Sea, a descendant of the East Sea Dragon King. 'Zoren' came from 'to assist' and 'man'. As a child, he loved to play with sunken ships and planes on the seafloor, but it didn't take long for him to get tired of them. He wanted to know about the world above water, so he asked his parents. In return, they took him to a Chinese hermit and had him as Zoren's teacher. The hermit was a sagacious Jinshi of the late Qing Dynasty who went into seclusion upon the Xinhai revolution. He taught Zoren all that he knew about the world, especially the politics. The young dragon showed huge interest for politics. The hermit tried his best to persuade him not to involve himself in the affairs of man. Unfortunately, when the hermit died, Zoren did not give up his goals. He'd read newspapers sold in the seaside towns nearby, constantly keeping himself updated on the state of the Asian countries. During this time, he had also exchanged information with sea monsters traveling by the Kuroshio and the Oyashio, learning even more about exotic cultures. He wanted to travel with them as well, but his parents did not allow him to do so, fearing that he might become a revolutionary with their aid.
One day, the news of the Aurora University spread to their ears. Believing that he'll be much safer in the university's care, Zoren's parents sent him there. He decides to take a major in History and aspires to raise poor countries from poverty and war.

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A cup of tea is brought to someone's mouth.

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Toned down the sociopathy in the personality section a bit
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Hokay, sheet notes incoming for the ones that have been submitted thus far. As a note, spoiler tagging them will make it a lot easier to navigate the thread.

 

kj1225: Muggles are a veto. Mad science isn't magic. It's a supernatural academy, man.

 

Felix: Looks ok to me. Fashion is a bit odd of a choice, but not an unacceptable one.

 

Mr. Divergent: . . . Hooookay, where do we start. First off, the appearance section is a little odd. Black eyes aren't really a color, unless you mean to say his irises are black, which is, uh, unusual. A "colorful" face is also a bit odd; is his face multicolored or something? 

Onto the personality. This is basically a mess of contradictions. He's an arrogant dick, but also a ladies man. Except he doesn't like them, but they like him regardless of how much of an ass he is? He's cold, but easily flustered, and nice to people. I can't really get an image of the way this guy acts at all.

Backstory is also strange and contradictory. His parents wanted to live a mundane life but also surrounded their kid with all sorts of magical tutors but also didn't ever let him do anything until he. . . asked them nicely? It also highlights him as rather too "special" and comes off as Sue-ish. (There are pinned topics about what Mary Sues are.)

 

My final advice: pick a direction with the character. Start with one or two basic ideas of what you want to do, and build around those. Right now, you're all over the place with the character, and it comes off as really incoherent. 

 

IntSys: Looks alright. Backstory is a little much but not egregiously so. 

 

Cronos5010: Looks ok, but I'd honestly rather see a character that isn't sociopathic out of you.

 

Sl4cker: Backstory justification is slightly weak when it comes to justifying why he's at Aurora. Otherwise looks okay.

 

 

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Ok, here's my sheet. Did my best.

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Let me know what you think of this. Like I said, I haven't done much role-play, so sorry if I'm bad :( 

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Here's a character; I'm a geography nerd.

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Shaun the Werewolf comes to town...

 

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"There are motions I would like to show you."

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