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[OOC/SIGNUPS] Aurora University for the Preternaturally Gifted


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Cool Girl: No. I'll tell you the same thing I told Divergent via PM; stop trying to be the protagonist. This is a game about a bunch of kids that happen to be magic going to college and dealing with all of the associated troubles, not about the hero going on his epic journey. The background is just way too much - and no, you're not allowed to carry a gun around campus. Plus you reference things like "exorcist powers" which uh, aren't a thing?

 

Powder Miner: Discussed already and accepted.

 

Cinder: Remove the "accidentally murderating" people, or at least tone it down so you won't horribly maim people randomly. Elsewise, looks okay.

 

Pigeon: . . . Um. You don't really get to just show up at a university and go to classes. You need an actual reason to be there.

 

Elf: Idunn looks okay to me. 

 

kj: No issues.

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Woops, forgot to post here. Working on a sheet.

 

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  On 4/22/2017 at 6:13 PM, Adamance Ascendant said:

Cool Girl: No. I'll tell you the same thing I told Divergent via PM; stop trying to be the protagonist. This is a game about a bunch of kids that happen to be magic going to college and dealing with all of the associated troubles, not about the hero going on his epic journey. The background is just way too much - and no, you're not allowed to carry a gun around campus. Plus you reference things like "exorcist powers" which uh, aren't a thing?

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So, I was wondering what changes should I make. I made the gun change thing. She doesn't own a gun. You can let me know by PM on the reborn forums. I really appreciate your feedback, just want to know how I can make it work. Thank you! :D 

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  On 4/23/2017 at 12:02 AM, Cool Girl said:

So, I was wondering what changes should I make. I made the gun change thing. She doesn't own a gun. You can let me know by PM on the reborn forums. I really appreciate your feedback, just want to know how I can make it work. Thank you! :D 

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If you could get on the Discord so we could discuss it live, that'd be great.

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Oh, right. If that's the case, I'll just go with the contested idea of a sleepy werewolf. 

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  On 4/22/2017 at 11:53 PM, Twinwolf said:

Woops, forgot to post here. Working on a sheet.

 

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