Korlif Posted June 28, 2017 Share Posted June 28, 2017 (edited) Like the title says, I redid the battle sprites for shadow Mewtwo. I tried going for the Pokken-style Shadow Mewtwo. I used parts from M-Mewtwo X, Greninja, Boldore, and Deoxys-Speed to make this. I just really like the crystals and the glowing tail on Pokken Mewtwo, plus I think legendary Pokemon deserve their own unique shadow sprites, like Lugia. Also, I know the legs are horrible, but this is my current best. If anyone else here can fix them please do so and post them; I'll definitely use them Edited June 28, 2017 by Korlif Delete file not meant to share Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wolfox Posted June 28, 2017 Share Posted June 28, 2017 looks pretty nice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Daniel Blackworth Posted June 28, 2017 Share Posted June 28, 2017 From an audience's point of view, I have to say that there are points which could use some improvement like the legs, the shading, and the overall combination of colors, but I do think it's a good start. I'm not a spriter, so I can't give specific stuff on how it could be improved though. Anyways, it'd be interesting to see future works. Best of wishes! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ocho Posted June 28, 2017 Share Posted June 28, 2017 12 hours ago, Korlif said: Spoiler Like the title says, I redid the battle sprites for shadow Mewtwo. I tried going for the Pokken-style Shadow Mewtwo. I used parts from M-Mewtwo X, Greninja, Boldore, and Deoxys-Speed to make this. I just really like the crystals and the glowing tail on Pokken Mewtwo, plus I think legendary Pokemon deserve their own unique shadow sprites, like Lugia. Also, I know the legs are horrible, but this is my current best. If anyone else here can fix them please do so and post them; I'll definitely use them Not bad, but some things are just weird, like its legs and its head. I think you should stay with just recoloring mewtwo but with this color scheme. If you could make the tail and shoulder? green instead it would be perfect (since madelis said the green aura was "its true power"). I wanna see more of your work in the future Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peanuts Posted June 29, 2017 Share Posted June 29, 2017 (edited) This looked interesting so I gave it a shot. I have completely cleaned up the front and am partially done with the back. I'm also cleaning up the outline as I'm going since it just looks a lot better. You made a good effort with the legs, they are just difficult to draw. I think your biggest issue is that you made the thighs a little wide. Front: Redid the left side leg completely, and simply made the upper thigh of the right side one more narrow. Remade the crystal by the face and widened the torso a bit so it looks less like mewtwo is wearing a corset. I had no idea how to make the glowing tail look better so I pretty much left it as it was. I've also removed some of your 'speckled' shading since I don't think it is necessary since mewtwo has a smooth texture. I left out the two nubs near mewtwo's ankles since I couldn't seem to make that look good; if you want them then I'll try adding them back. Eye color is a little weird right now. The original yellow will stand out only if the scelera is dark, so I've got blue and yellow at the moment. Any color suggestions there? Back: Moved the rightmost leg so that it looks more like it's under the body. I might need to fix the left side a little more so the thigh stands out a bit more. I still have yet to clean the outline for the back. In the back, the nubs actually accentuate the ankles so they help. Edited June 29, 2017 by Peanuts Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aboodie Posted June 29, 2017 Share Posted June 29, 2017 I made one like a year ago, seeing this post actually made me do a few touch ups to it xD Also, the face needs some slight edits, there should be 2 eyes visible with that head pose, one that is complete and the other only around 1/3 or 1/2 of it visible. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Korlif Posted July 9, 2017 Author Share Posted July 9, 2017 Sorry about the late response, but I've been away from the internet for a while (If this is considered necro-posing then I am extremely sorry, but this was the earliest point that I could respond). Thanks everyone who gave me pointers and to Peanuts who fixed a lot of my mistakes. Thanks, man. I'll go back to the board and try working on the points everyone mentioned myself, if only to improve for myself. Hearing back from you all was really motivating. Thanks again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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