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Flannery in Reborn - The Tale of a Firehead [Last defeated: Aster & Eclipse]


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~EPISODES LIST~

 

*** SEASON ONE - CHILDHOOD ARC ***

1. Dysfunctional Family

2. A Dish Served Cold

3. To Lavaridge Town

4. An Old Friend

5. Recklessness Of Beginners

6. Stardust

7. Echoes Through The Mirage

8. No Holds Barred

9. Without You I'm Nothing

 

*** SEASON TWO - DEPARTURE ARC ***
10. Seventeen Years Later

11. Reborn City?

12. Ambassador Of Hoenn

13. Gone

 

*** SEASON THREE - REBORN CITY ***

14. To Grandview Station

15. Outrageous Arrival

16. Recovery

17. Dounia The Healer

18. Fist Of Justice

19. Infernal Encounter

20. A Dangerous Meteor Fallen From The Sky

21. The Dark Knight Of Reborn City

 


Episode 22 - Scoreboard

  • #################### | 90% - Storyline
  • #################### | 0% - Writing
  • #################### | 0% - Illustration

Total:

  • #################### | 30%

"Back from holidays! Well, now where were we?"

 

(Updated 08/27/22)


 

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Thank you very much !

I always love to see people enjoying what I did. Of course, you can use a similar pattern to help the reader to understand who was talking, I found it less tricky. Also, I don't just want to write a story, the pictures you see include redone Pokemon Ruby screenshots. It's pretty satisfying to see what is possible with some softwares like Advance Map or Gimp. Furthermore, I ended up the whole Little Flannery walking sprites, Little Winona is the next. But it took me a large amount of time, so I think I won't post another episode right now. And I thought it was a good idea to let the story taking place in Hoenn for now, just before the episode 17 of Reborn comes out. Take a deep breath, I already predicted what will happen for the second part ;)

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Thanks!

The entire childhood arc is almost complete, it was really amusing to do connections between Flannery and some miscellaneous elements of the game. I do my best to make the story pleasant to read as well as create a faithful story beside the manga with the relationship between precise characters, especially the Gym Leaders. It will continue as written at the end of the episodes :)

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This was great! Loved the whole teaching Flannery how to catch a Pokemon scenes. Although, I will say that the flames you used as Will-O-Wisp were really shocking. They looked like they were burning alive. XD Then again, I guess none of us really know how it looks when a Pokemon has been burned. Anyways, nice job on this 1. Can't wait for the next update!

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Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. Concerning the flames, that's the best way I've found to show the Pokemon burning. As long as there are people to comment and appreciate the story, I'll keep working on Flannery adventures. Without readers, I would feel empty and demotivated quickly. After all, what's the point of creating arts and stories if there is nobody to contemplate them? Furthermore, I apologize if the story does not happen in Reborn for now, but I have not resisted to the idea of writing a good prologue. It's a way for me to make it attractive as the player already know (or not) what Reborn is made of, but I also wanted to add some depth to the characters background. In almost every game made by Game Freaks, the MC's mother does not have a great role to hold. For Flannery, the things are not the same with the knowledge she inherited from her grandfather. That explains in part why I spend so many time polishing her childhood. I invite people to come and give their opinion about the childhood arc as four episodes remain before the actual timeline.

 

Thank you again! Without your support, I am nothing.

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  On 2/19/2018 at 12:47 AM, Q-Jei said:

Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. Concerning the flames, that's the best way I've found to show the Pokemon burning. As long as there are people to comment and appreciate the story, I'll keep working on Flannery adventures. Without readers, I would feel empty and demotivated quickly. After all, what's the point of creating arts and stories if there is nobody to contemplate them? Furthermore, I apologize if the story does not happen in Reborn for now, but I have not resisted to the idea to write a good prologue. It's a way for me to make it attractive as the player already know (or not) what Reborn is made from, but I also wanted to add some depth to the characters background. In almost every game made by Game Freaks, the MC's mother does not have a great role to hold. For Flannery, the things are not the same with the knowledge she inherited from her grandfather. That explains in part why I spend so many time polishing her childhood. I invite people to come and give their opinion about the childhood arc as four episodes remain before the actual timeline.

 

Thank you again! Without your support, I am nothing.

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Curious enough, I just told Awesome_One the importance of the readers earlier today xD Let your imagination run wild, and don't apologize for doing so :P I look forward to seeing how Flannery decides to leave Hoenn~

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You're welcome! And yeah, this bathing scene was a nod to a chapter in the manga. As a respect for those who never read Pokemon Adventures Sapphire & Ruby, I'll put a spoiler below.

 

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If this part was unexpected for you, let me tell you that the content of the chapter number 7 is absolutely nuts beside. I don't even think that anybody has an idea of what will exactly happen next. Stardust was quite time-consuming to write, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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  On 3/30/2018 at 6:52 PM, J-Awesome_One said:

Awesome job! I wasn't expecting Winona to be in this. Let alone in this way but wow. 1st Pokemon capture and new people to meet! But I'm a bit confused. Are her legs broken or they're just hurt so badly that she can barely move them?

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Thank you for the feedback! Yeah, I could not dare talking about Flannery's past without ever quoting people who changed her life. Winona is one of them. Indeed, if Flannery did not exist, Winona would have been my favorite Gym Leader from all regions. Despite of her importance in the manga, she's still too underrated in my opinion. It almost makes me want to see her interfere further with Flannery in Reborn. And don't worry for her legs, she won't keep it for her whole life, Mr. Moore has some plans for her. Her recovery will take place in one of the two last chapters of the childhood arc ;)

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Thanks! Hey, what’s a Gym Leader such as Mr. Moore without a Gym Battle worthy of the name? The way he fought against the challenger was inspired by Solaris, and the latter was an alternate version of Fern, he might have a greater importance later in this run. All the design of the gym was an idea of myself. The first meeting implying Flannery and our dear top dog in Reborn will be priceless 😏

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  On 5/16/2018 at 6:53 PM, Candy said:

Nice battle scenes~ and creative battles too 😄 that swalot got me scared there

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Thx! I'm glad you enjoyed the battle! It took me two days to get all these battle scenes done. Lots of them include sprites from Pokemon Mystery Dungeon. Then, I added some random effects that I reshaped myself to make it more immersive. And yeah, Swalot was quite spooky in this episode. But somehow, I couldn't blame Typhlosion's foes. It was all the fault of their tutor who trained it in a bad way. I promise to make the scenes of the next chapter at least as awesome as for this one. You won't be disappointed 😉

 

  On 5/18/2018 at 9:34 AM, Lost Swordsman said:

I almost thought that Typhlosion would lose/die.

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None of Flannery or Mr. Moore's Pokemon is gonna die in the childhood arc. But I decided to add some specific features on the Reborn run of Flannery, including brand new sprites and custom battles like @Mr. Finn planned to do with his own playthrough. I already managed to get some of these features done, more especially a full extra animated scene in Shade’s Gym. But I can't show it before the time for this was coming. I could understand if that would be the case later, but I hope that nobody will reject my work because of some creepy stuff. I can only but thank you all for the attention you paid for my story.

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