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Flannery in Reborn - The Tale of a Firehead [Last defeated: Aster & Eclipse]


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  On 5/25/2019 at 1:04 AM, Candy said:

well tbf I decided to totally ignore the canon ages and made Kiki an old woman, Luna also around 15, and maybe others who I don't recall at this moment 😛

it's fanfiction, you're already changing a lot of the plot of Ame's story so like, age shouldn't be a huge deal as long as it's not lewding minors uwu

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That's what I thought too. And as long as the content of the story is coherent and entertaining, everything should be fine 😄

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Oh my god this is so sad (T-T) I hope Vulpix is fine...also I like the inner monologue when Flannary is unconscious lol so cheesy 😛 I was scared that Torkoal was really going to die and was glad that he is just hurt whew . And you did a great job making Reborn city really feel like a post-apocalyptic place,I'm really mad at those boys talking about Flannery like she is a piece of meat but in a dump like Reborn city there is bound to have scum like them looking at you Fern aaaand I miss Jacques already (TwT) hope he is alive....somewhere....and well. Can't wait for best boy Cain's appearance next episode (:D) Thank you Q-Jei (*^▽^*)

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You started with hitting us in the feels right away. T~T  You've got a beautiful episode all ready. And I like your added animations!

In all fairness, I think Flannery spent too much time talking when she should have rushed to the Grand Hall for Nurse Joy. Torkoal's health was critical after all 😧

I look forward to seeing how this story unfolds~ 

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That was some superb gif wow *o* I could feel Flannery's self-disappointment

I'm still hoping Jacques is alive tho cause it's kinda odd that he left Flannery just as the accident was about to happen 👀

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  On 5/25/2019 at 6:23 PM, J-Awesome_One said:

Very interesting episode and scary as well. Not knowing the fate of Torkoal, Vulpix or Jacques is scary but also exciting. And I seriously love the animation. Great episode as always!

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Thank you @J-Awesome_One! The animation you're talking about has been entirely created with GIMP (No website tools ^^). It's more than 250 images scrolling at speed of one image all the 90 milliseconds. So yeah, that was a very hard work, and I'm very proud of it to be honest 😉 I've spent more time for this GIF than for all the other illustrations.

 

  On 5/26/2019 at 6:24 AM, Angelkitsune said:

Oh my god this is so sad (T-T) I hope Vulpix is fine...also I like the inner monologue when Flannary is unconscious lol so cheesy 😛

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Thanks! But why do you say that the monologue part was 'cheesy'? I've not made this scene for nothing. I've made it the same way as when your character lose consciousness in one of the final scenes of Pokemon Mystery Dungeon (Blue/Red Rescue Team). Besides, there was a time when I went into surgery for an ear operation. I remember having been plunged into madness and unconscious dream because of an unexpected issue with the gas used to keep me asleep, and I could barely move my limbs. But each time I tried, it hurt so much that I thought someone was tearing them out. Even today, I still have bad memories of this moment, except that everything was pale and green with disformed faces. So, no! I've really lived this type of thing, and the bad moment endured by Flannery is a small overview of how I felt at this time myself. That's why calling it "cheesy" is not appropriate in my opinion :,^(

 

  On 5/26/2019 at 5:01 PM, SilverAngelus said:

You started with hitting us in the feels right away. T~T  You've got a beautiful episode all ready. And I like your added animations!

In all fairness, I think Flannery spent too much time talking when she should have rushed to the Grand Hall for Nurse Joy. Torkoal's health was critical after all 😧

I look forward to seeing how this story unfold~ 

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Thanks 🙂 At least, it didn't take too long for Torkoal before returning back to his Pokeball, and hopefully, doing so probably slowed down the pain. But still, losing Vulpix's Pokeball was a very undesired thing to Flannery since she loved her a lot too. When this happened, she felt torn between two dramatic events, couldn't survive panic and almost lost her self-control. I've already experienced what it feels like: when you're annoying by a first trouble, then by another one, you're starting to feel disoriented and can find yourself overwhelmed very quickly 😞 Therefore, the intervention of Julia is more a benidiction than anything else for our dear Gym Leader (Or should I say 'ambassador' 😉) You'll see, there will be a recovery for Torkoal, and I already said that Vulpix was one of the starters. So, the true question should be: "In which state will we find Vulpix?". Also, there was a moment when Flannery started to feel begged by Julia's questioning with her Pop Quiz line, so she knew that there was a priority to set for Torkoal 😉 The only thing I feared during this epsiode was more than these two losses were forshadowing people's concern for Jacques.

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  On 5/26/2019 at 6:18 PM, Q-Jei said:

Thanks! But why do you say that the monologue part was 'cheesy'? I've not made this scene for nothing. I've made it the same way as when your character lose consciousness in one of the final scenes of Pokemon Mystery Dungeon (Blue/Red Rescue Team). Besides, there was a time when I went into surgery for an ear operation. I remember having been plunged into madness and unconscious dream because of an unexpected issue with the gas used to keep me asleep, and I could barely move my limbs. But each time I tried, it hurt so much that I thought someone was tearing them out. Even today, I still have bad memories of this moment, except that everything was pale and green with disformed faces. So, no! I've really lived this type of thing, and the bad moment endured by Flannery is a small overview of how I felt at this time myself. That's why calling it "cheesy" is not appropriate in my opinion :^(

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Sorry about that....I didn't play mystery dungeon before and I definitely didn't have a surgery so I don't know how much pain you went through.And I also apologize for being insensitive as I sometimes don't know I have hurt someone with my words.Again I'm really sorry.

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  On 5/27/2019 at 7:20 AM, Angelkitsune said:

Sorry about that....I didn't play mystery dungeon before and I definitely didn't have a surgery so I don't know how much pain you went through.And I also apologize for being insensitive as I sometimes don't know I have hurt someone with my words.Again I'm really sorry.

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Don't worry, it's not such a problem actually. It's just that I should have talk about it earlier, so maybe people would have understood better 😕 As for the Mystery Dungeon games, I can assure you they are good spin-off games. It's very detailed with a careful work on the story, espcially Explorers of Time and Darkness 😉 Even if the gameplay has nothing to do with the core series, I found it really enjoyable and challenging most of the time (Wink at Primal Dialga).

 

  On 5/26/2019 at 6:24 AM, Angelkitsune said:

I was scared that Torkoal was really going to die and was glad that he is just hurt whew . And you did a great job making Reborn city really feel like a post-apocalyptic place,I'm really mad at those boys talking about Flannery like she is a piece of meat but in a dump like Reborn city there is bound to have scum like them looking at you Fern aaaand I miss Jacques already (TwT) hope he is alive....somewhere....and well. Can't wait for best boy Cain's appearance next episode (:D) Thank you Q-Jei (*^▽^*)

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Reborn deserves the description it deserves indeed. And justice will be made, I promise! As you may have guessed, the next episode is supposed to show the recovery of Torkoal. It can actually be saved, but things are not always that predictable. As written at the end of the episode, destiny’s tide remain untamable. But be reassured with the bad boys, Flannery will have her revenge against them (And I'm not even talking about Fern 🔥) Anyway, I appreciate that you're still following me despite it takes me a lot of time before to upload another part of the story. Thank you for your support, I'll need it to write the next episode, even if it's supposed to be shorter than the last one 😉

 

  On 5/26/2019 at 6:17 PM, Candy said:

That was some superb gif wow *o* I could feel Flannery's self-disappointment

I'm still hoping Jacques is alive tho cause it's kinda odd that he left Flannery just as the accident was about to happen 👀

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Thank you Candy-sama :^D

I've spent two days to improve the images and be sure that nothing unwanted has occured during the tests to make it work. And yes, this episode was quite a pain to write since I don't like seeing Flannery sad or tortured. But sadly, this accident is a mandatory move to take for all the newcomers in Reborn 😞 Also, I'm glad to know that people still want to see Jacques alive. For now, mystery about him remains thick. But on the other hand, it's just the begining of the story 😉 (Giggles since 15 episodes are already out) Even if we don't see him later, it's likely for us to still hear about him in the future. But I prefer to keep silent about his case, for the moment...

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Interesting way to, so to speak, "reset" Torkoal. I liked how you didn't give Torkoal like the best kind of moveset. I mean yea. Overheat is powerful as hell but it has a drawback on it as well. Loved how you basically had the 2 rival battles have a reason to them. To reteach your Torkaol how to battle again. And VERY nice touch with some of the starters getting stolen. Overall, very nice read and can't wait for Episode 17. 🙂

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  On 7/26/2019 at 6:05 PM, Majin J-Awesome_One said:

Interesting way to, so to speak, "reset" Torkoal. I liked how you didn't give Torkoal like the best kind of moveset. I mean yea. Overheat is powerful as hell but it has a drawback on it as well. Loved how you basically had the 2 rival battles have a reason to them. To reteach your Torkaol how to battle again. And VERY nice touch with some of the starters getting stolen. Overall, very nice read and can't wait for Episode 17. 🙂

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Thank you 🙂

Yes, this is what I've planned from the beginning. To decrease Torkoal's level, there had to be an initiating event. The accident in Grandview Station was exactly what we needed to make it happen. Also, his moveset should be pretty balanced indeed. And I don't consider him to be invisible at all, we have a video evidence after all. Speaking of battles, the fight against Aster & Eclipse remains the most dangerous to Flannery, in my opinion. All this to say that everything has its justification. Nothing has been thought impulsively. For example, I would have not allowed these battles to start if Torkoal was too weak to handle them. Fortunately, the Grand Hall has a super Nurse in its Pokemon Center, so his recovery has been made possible 😉

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  On 7/26/2019 at 11:00 PM, Q-Jei said:

Thank you 🙂

Yes, this is what I've planned from the beginning. To decrease Torkoal's level, there had to be an initiating event.  The accident in Grandview Station was exactly what we needed to make it happen. Also, his moveset should be pretty balanced indeed. And I don't consider him to be invisible at all, we have a video evidence after all. Speaking of battles, the fight against Aster & Eclipse remains the most dangerous to Flannery, in my opinion. All this to say that everything has its justification. Nothing has been thought impulsively. For example, I would have not allowed these battles to start if Torkoal was too weak to handle them. Fortunately, the Grand Hall has a super Nurse in its Pokemon Center, so his recovery has been made possible 😉

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Ohh yea... speaking of the nurse, I thought for some reason you were gonna make her secretly evil. Lol.

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so... I've been reading this for the past 4~4 1/2 hours...

 

Holy. Shit.

 

Firstly, you're a talented writer. You made a backstory for a character I've been wanting more for. And you made that backstory damn good. Gamefreak lost a lot of potential not giving her more attention...

 

Secondly, I am more motivated to actually write the story that I've wanted to for a long while. I'm actually going to start that now...

 

I cannot wait for more of this story.

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  On 7/26/2019 at 11:18 PM, Majin J-Awesome_One said:

Ohh yea... speaking of the nurse, I thought for some reason you were gonna make her secretly evil. Lol.

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Hehe, interesting! I would love to know what's brought you to think she could be evil. After all, she healed Flannery's Torkoal, and everything is alright now. So, I'm curious about your opinion. What would be the point of creating a malevolent character who performs miracles?

 

  On 7/27/2019 at 11:55 AM, Shadow Rysing said:

so... I've been reading this for the past 4~4 1/2 hours...

 

Holy. Shit.

 

Firstly, you're a talented writer. You made a backstory for a character I've been wanting more for. And you made that backstory damn good. Gamefreak lost a lot of potential not giving her more attention...

 

Secondly, I am more motivated to actually write the story that I've wanted to for a long while. I'm actually going to start that now...

 

I cannot wait for more of this story.

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Thank you very much for the compliment!

 

It's gonna be two years since I'm working on this run, and I'm glad to know that there are still people who discover it for the first time. As long as there are readers who will show interest to this story, my motivation will still be hold to the maximum level 🙂 At least, we both agree on the following subject: Flannery deserves more attention. I already noticed there are a lot of fans who think the same way about her, and that could be explained by several factors. Firstly first, Flannery is badass. Her tsundere attitude combined with her skill as a Fire Type Gym Leader makes her particularly attractive, and even more when you know she used to be novice Gym Leader. Consequently, she still has a lot to learn, which means that she can potentially grow up through numerous hardships. This piece of detail is very helpful and inspirational for writing. Also, the other factor that makes Flannery so appreciated is very simple: she's a Gym Leader. When we talk about Gym Leaders, we talk about characters who have a very short time spent in the public eye, Brock and Misty being the only exception. Fortunately, justice has been made in the manga for most of them, Flannery included. But still, this is also this ephemeral duration that reinforces this desire of seeing more of these characters, not to mention that Flannery's grandfather is a former member of the Elite 4. All this plus her gorgeous physical appearence makes Flannery a wonderful character with a lot of possible backstory to develop, which explains why I wrote a very big prologue before to set the story in Reborn 😄

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  On 7/28/2019 at 1:39 PM, Q-Jei said:

Thank you very much for the compliment!

 

It's gonna be two years since I'm working on this run, and I'm glad to know that there are still people who discover it for the first time. As long as there are readers who will show interest to this story, my motivation will still be hold to the maximum level 🙂 At least, we both agree on the following subject: Flannery deserves more attention. I already noticed there are a lot of fans who think the same way about her, and that could be explained by several factors. Firstly first, Flannery is badass. Her tsundere attitude combined with her skill as a Fire Type Gym Leader makes her particularly attractive, and even more when you know she used to be novice Gym Leader. Consequently, she still has a lot to learn, which means that she can potentially grow up through numerous hardships. This piece of detail is very helpful and inspirational for writing. Also, the other factor that makes Flannery so appreciated is very simple: she's a Gym Leader. When we talk about Gym Leaders, we talk about characters who have a very short time spent in the public eye, Brock and Misty being the only exception. Fortunately, justice has been made in the manga for most of them, Flannery included. But still, this is also this ephemeral duration that reinforces this desire of seeing more of these characters, not to mention that Flannery's grandfather is a former member of the Elite 4. All this plus her gorgeous physical appearence makes Flannery a wonderful character with a lot of possible backstory to develop, which explains why I wrote a very big prologue before to set the story in Reborn 😄

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Honestly though, that back story makes it. It rounds her character out very well, explains how she holds family and friends very closely, and explains why she gets as animated as she does. It's better than most of what I've seen Nintendo ever put out. 

 

If I get half the support you've gotten, I'd be working on it for that long as well. 

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  On 7/28/2019 at 1:39 PM, Q-Jei said:

Hehe, interesting! I would love to know what's brought you to think she could be evil. After all, she healed Flannery's Torkoal, and everything is alright now. So, I'm curious about your opinion. What would be the point of creating a malevolent character who does miracles?

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It was more I thought before she was able to save Torkoal. I guess it was because if the wink and how uneasy Flannery felt afterwards that made me think that.

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  On 7/28/2019 at 4:54 PM, Majin J-Awesome_One said:

It was more I thought before she was able to save Torkoal. I guess it was because if the wink and how uneasy Flannery felt afterwards that made me think that.

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Well, I've actually made her a bit more eccentric than she's supposed to be. But in spite of being very talented in her field, she's still quite sensitive about certain things. This can be noticed shortly after Flannery's second victory. Reading between the lines can be good to spot some unspoken details 😉

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Sorry for the late reply as I'm being separated from my laptop but anyway, as usual this is a brilliant chapter.You have surprise me by changing the event in the grand hall like the pokemon being stolen and the interaction between Cain and Flannery. Also is it just me or does the nurse gives off an eerie feeling, like omg I thought she is an evil scientist that is going to turn Torkoal into a cyborg.Can't wait for the next episode Q-Jei thank you so much.

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  On 8/5/2019 at 7:17 AM, Angelkitsune said:

Sorry for the late reply as I'm being separated from my laptop but anyway, as usual this is a brilliant chapter.You have surprise me by changing the event in the grand hall like the pokemon being stolen and the interaction between Cain and Flannery. Also is it just me or does the nurse gives off an eerie feeling, like omg I thought she is an evil scientist that is going to turn Torkoal into a cyborg.Can't wait for the next episode Q-Jei thank you so much.

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Omg! I thought the same thing with the nurse! Not evil scientist but definitely evil.

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  On 8/5/2019 at 1:36 PM, Candy said:

Despite popular belief, not all scientists are evil.

only me 😈

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I work in medicine (Respiratory therapy), and the honest truth is that more medical professionals have darker senses of humor. Fact is, you have to have a darker sense of humor. You will lose your mind pretty quickly if you don't. 

 

so I'm evil as well. 

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  On 8/7/2019 at 12:04 AM, Shadow Rysing said:

I work in medicine (Respiratory therapy), and the honest truth is that more medical professionals have darker senses of humor. Fact is, you have to have a darker sense of humor. You will lose your mind pretty quickly if you don't. 

 

so I'm evil as well. 

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I work in the Pathology department, and my PI has the darkest sense of humor ever (even if he's all smiles) cause he performs autopsies and makes a lot of dead jokes.

I find his jokes funny so I guess yah I guess I share in the dark sense of humor oof

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  On 8/7/2019 at 12:04 AM, Shadow Rysing said:

I work in medicine (Respiratory therapy), and the honest truth is that more medical professionals have darker senses of humor. Fact is, you have to have a darker sense of humor. You will lose your mind pretty quickly if you don't. 

 

so I'm evil as well. 

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  On 8/7/2019 at 1:04 AM, Candy said:

I work in the Pathology department, and my PI has the darkest sense of humor ever (even if he's all smiles) cause he performs autopsies and makes a lot of dead jokes.

I find his jokes funny so I guess yah I guess I share in the dark sense of humor oof

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True story indeed! The mood of people working in this area can be changed and affected as they get used to experiences or operations we wish not to hear about. My cousin's mother told me it several days ago. She works as an anaesthetist. But even if she told me it could be very fascinating sometimes, I always felt uneasy at the sight of blood. So unfortunately, I think I will hardly be familiar with surgical sense of humor anyway 😕

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  On 8/8/2019 at 1:33 PM, Q-Jei said:

 

True story indeed! The mood of people working in this area can be changed and affected as they get used to experiences or operations we wish not to hear about. My cousin's mother told me it several days ago. She works as an anaesthetist. But even if she told me it could be very fascinating sometimes, I always felt uneasy at the sight of blood. So unfortunately, I think I will hardly be familiar with surgical sense of humor anyway 😕

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If civies heard the conversations I've had with co-workers, it would be bad. I'm pretty sure that commitments to mental health hospitals would be flying fast and furious. 

 

If you try to be "normal," with the sense of humor, the strain would be to much. Just the fact that you have to remain somewhat calm after witnessing deaths, you can't hold it in being what the perception of healthcare workers is and not be affected. 

 

I remember them all. And it still affects me when a patient dies on my call. Nothing, even going through it before, can really prepare you for it. 

 

Bit of a turn from a pokemon story. lol

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