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Thank you for the compliment! Indeed, it was quite emotional for me to do this as it was marking the end of Flannery’s past. The battle scenes were more simple to create this time, I was amazed myself during their creation. Also, it would be interesting for me to know if you prefer seeing videos of Flannery facing the Reborn Gym Leaders or rather battles with custom screenshots. I’m open to any advice and suggestions 🙂

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I started to read it calmly and I must say that as a story it is really well done! Congratulations and keep it up! I would have two of Fan Fiction but I never have the time to take them forward, so I will warmly follow yours and...the part that most struck me is the battle of Episode 8, that Swalot xD ...but also all the others are really beautiful! I wait for the next episode 😄

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Great work! As of yet, my favourite episode.

 

  On 5/26/2018 at 10:53 AM, Q-Jei said:

Thank you for the compliment! Indeed, it was quite emotional for me to do this as it was marking the end of Flannery’s past. The battle scenes were more simple to create this time, I was amazed myself during their creation. Also, it would be interesting for me to know if you prefer seeing videos of Flannery facing the Reborn Gym Leaders or rather battles with custom screenshots. I’m open to any advice and suggestions 🙂

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I think that a few battles should be videos while a few are battles with cusrom screenshots. 

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I think so! Thanks again for having paid attention to this! It was the most energy-consuming episode I've ever written, as well as the longest. This time, I've combined information mentionned in the game, the manga, and the anime, because Flannery was quite absent-minded when she was confronting Ash. For the school part and beyond, I've slipped several references to Academy Life, because she was described as a pious individual in it, this mentality fits Flannery a lot in my opinion. Also, I would like to apologize for the length of this episode, but I wanted to proceed accurately. This is me, I always pay a high level of attention for almost everything 😉

 

The sky used in one of the pictures is directly based on the Temporal Tower from Mystery Dungeon, as well as Vulpix sprites. The hug part was my most favorite illustration section to design in this episode. So yeah, it was one chapter out of four concerning the Departure Arc, the festival in Fortree City will be really great, an unforgettable birthday in perspective 😉

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oh wow can't wait for flannery to come to reborn i wonder how will flannery get introduced to the reborn region can't wait for her to meet the characters especially charlotte d=====( ̄▽ ̄*)b

 

Flannery: Whoa... so you're a fire type gym leader too?

Charlotte: Yup.

Flannery: But you're like 16 !?

Charlotte: Yeah, awesome kinda runs in our family i have two sisters that is both a gym leader and an elite four respectively.

Flannery: Cool my grandpa used to be an elite four member too maybe we should talk about it someday...

Charlotte: Totally...after you break us out of this hell hole that people called it an orphanage of course.

Cain: Ladies~ less talking and more children kidnapping here (〃` 3′〃)

Charlotte: Whelp,you heard the princess now get me out of here.

 

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A little longer, no? Haha oh god, a chapter that really struck me, I continue to appreciate more and more her story... *start to cry...*

PS: I see you use a lot of image by Mystery Dungeon...sprite...and with Skarmory on fly, it's the part where you were going to reach Temporal Tower, really nice ❤️

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  On 7/14/2018 at 8:52 AM, Celeby said:

A little longer, no? Haha oh god, a chapter that really struck me, I continue to appreciate more and more her story... *start to cry...*

PS: I see you use a lot of image by Mystery Dungeon...sprite...and with Skarmory on fly, it's the part where you were going to reach Temporal Tower, really nice ❤️

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Thank you for the feedback!

And yes, I am a big fan of the Mystery Dungeon serie, and the graphic resources of this game were more than suitable for some moments of this episode. The Temporal Tower was among my favorite levels. Even though those Porygon were a pain to counter because of their Agility/Discharge combo, I loved replaying this level just because of the music. Concerning the main serie, until the fifth generation, the background of most of the Gym Leaders was, in my opinion, not developed enough to give them the interest they deserved. I realized it when I played Emerald Plus last year, a Rom Hack Version of Pokemon Emerald. The gameplay may have been improved, you still face nothing but trainers in their gyms, add them to your contacts with your PokeNav, and it’s over. So, creating a story run with Flannery as the hero was undoubtedly a good way to add some depth to her and get attached to this character even more. Describing and seeing the major part of her life passing by in such details was a touchy experience.

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Just like as J-Awesome_One said this is a great episode.Never though of Jacques as the Reserve dark type,hmm....will Flannery fight him someday if yes then I am HYPED!!

(☆▽☆) I like Flannery's and Winnona's reaction the best as they eagerly learn about the Reborn region d=====( ̄▽ ̄*)b

 

ppffffhh.....wanna bet that when they reach Lilycove city it will be snowing because of Ame's A-Ninetails again ( •̀ ω •́ )✧

 

can't wait for the next episode Gambate Q-Jei!!!   also @J-Awesome_One aren't you a little salty that you almost got Jacques name right (≧∇≦)ノ

 

also just to satisfy my curious shipping heart,will there be any love interest for Flannery (o′┏▽┓`o) 

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  On 8/25/2018 at 6:39 PM, Angelkitsune said:

Just like as J-Awesome_One said this is a great episode.Never though of Jacques as the Reserve dark type,hmm....will Flannery fight him someday if yes then I am HYPED!!

(☆▽☆) I like Flannery's and Winnona's reaction the best as they eagerly learn about the Reborn region d=====( ̄▽ ̄*)b

 

ppffffhh.....wanna bet that when they reach Lilycove city it will be snowing because of Ame's A-Ninetails again ( •̀ ω •́ )✧

 

can't wait for the next episode Gambate Q-Jei!!!   also @J-Awesome_One aren't you a little salty that you almost got Jacques name right (≧∇≦)ノ

 

also just to satisfy my curious shipping heart,will there be any love interest for Flannery (o′┏▽┓`o) 

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Shush! Do not remind me! Haha. xD Btw, I know they have like a sister relationship but my mind keeps making me think that they secretly have a crush on each other and Idk why it's doing that. Haha.

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  On 8/25/2018 at 6:53 PM, J-Awesome_One said:

Shush! Do not remind me! Haha. xD Btw, I know they have like a sister relationship but my mind keeps making me think that they secretly have a crush on each other and Idk why it's doing that. Haha.

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Yeah I don't mind lesbian relationship but im leaning toward WinnonaXWallace and Flannery with maybe someone in Reborn.Dammit my mind would not stop shipping everyone

<( ‵□′)───C(<─___-)||   <==my friends telling me not to ship anymore characters XD 

 

 

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  On 8/25/2018 at 5:55 PM, J-Awesome_One said:

Probably 1 of the best, if not, THE best Episode that I've read. I got really interested when Jacques started to explain to Winona and Flannery about Reborn and it was just really exciting. Nice job. 🙂

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Thank you, it's always a pleasure for me to read heartwarming comments like this! I can understand it, I've invested a heavy work in the illustrations this time, especially the party ones. The length of the story was almost the same as episode 10. Also, this episode is very big (Because there is many things to say about Reborn too 😉) And yeah, Jacques Besson is one of the OCs I've planned to introduce in the story. He successfully caught the attention of Flannery and Winona, and it's enough for me to be at peace with myself, because explaining them about Reborn was quite tedious the first time I tried. Everything is improvised, but that's what I like when I develop storylines like this. We're already halfway done with the Departure Arc, the next part will be about the council in Petalburg City. But you can still tell me what you thought about the party and Jacques, I'll show his true spriteset later 😉

 

PS: It was just a matter of two letters. I hope you won't be mad me for having mistaken in Jacques's name 🙏

 

  On 8/25/2018 at 6:39 PM, Angelkitsune said:

Just like as J-Awesome_One said this is a great episode.Never though of Jacques as the Reserve dark type,hmm....will Flannery fight him someday if yes then I am HYPED!!

(☆▽☆) I like Flannery's and Winnona's reaction the best as they eagerly learn about the Reborn region d=====( ̄▽ ̄*)b

 

ppffffhh.....wanna bet that when they reach Lilycove city it will be snowing because of Ame's A-Ninetails again ( •̀ ω •́ )✧

 

can't wait for the next episode Gambate Q-Jei!!!   also @J-Awesome_One aren't you a little salty that you almost got Jacques name right (≧∇≦)ノ

 

also just to satisfy my curious shipping heart,will there be any love interest for Flannery (o′┏▽┓`o) 

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Thanks! Yes, as a Reserve Gym Leader, Jacques is quite... um... reserved. I had to bring him to life in Hoenn as he was the trigger to captivate and motivate Flannery to pay interest in Reborn. As the story is fully improvised, I don't even know if Flannery will fight him and even less where and how. Nevertheless, it would undoubtedly be a good battle if it had to happen! And yeah, seems like Lilycove City will still have to deal with hail for the next two days 😄

Concerning Flannery's love interests, let's draw up a list of her potential boyfriends:

 

  • Cal: According to the fact that Victoria is unlikely to forgive him for being reponsible of Kiki's death, his chances of getting along well with Flannery might exist. However, the conditions in which she will see him on their second encounter risk to remind her a lot of Tabitha during Hoenn crisis. Only the future will tell us if she will be in love with him or not. The event with the ruby ring in Ametrine City will probably help though.

 

  • Taka: Personally, I'm a big fan of Taka. But somehow, the fact he's a Meteor Admin will make the contrast between him and Tabitha even more obvious, let alone the fact that he can potentially help her in Rhodocrine Jungle. Tabitha was precisely in this same line of character: being on the dark side without being completely detestable either. For those who have not read the manga, Tabitha gave Flannery a charcoal to empower her Magcargo when they both tried to revive the Mt. Chimney, which leads to make us think that Tabitha is not completely evil. It's tight between Cal and Taka, but Cal's specialization in Fire Type might have an influence on Flannery's will too. The answer concerning Taka as a potential boyfriend for Flannery will be quite easy if I choose the Reshiram Route.

 

  • Jacques: He's the first man of Reborn to interact with Flannery and, for some reason, he seems to be well-informed of Flannery and her current position. Even more, he's aware of her success during Unova's Tournament and managed to find her during a festival dedicated to her. He's ready for help and already told Flannery a lot about Reborn. However, his role and impact during the main storyline need to be more developed and significant to make sense to a potential romance between him and our dear redhead. In both cases, he will definitely be a good friend to her.

 

  • Cain: Let's be serious for a short time, Flannery is so hot that she can probably steam up a locomotive just by getting close to it. This can definitely work with Cain. If he already suggested Charlotte to be his prince, Flannery can easily become his king. However, I can't confirm if this feeling will be reciprocal.

 

  • Fern: Should I really argue on that. Their first encounter will be... relatively explosive, I agree. Flannery can potentially set him on fire... but it's gonna hurt.

 

  • Samson: He's the strongman of Agate Circus, and all the ladies are a sunlight to him. I don't expect something very special to happen between Flannery and Samson for now, but if it must happen, I don't think it will be on Ciel's taste.

 

  • Hardy: Another redhead, a rockstar to be correct, yeah! It would have been a very interesting shipping if he wasn't already in love with Aya. In any case, they will enjoy beating Meteor's butt together.

 

  • DJ Arclight: They will be friend, this is inevitable! The raid in Meteor's hideout will make the bound between them tighter, but beside it, his role is not that huge. However, as Flannery can't stand seeing ill-treated Pokemon, they will share a common opinion about the Pokemon seller from 7th street.

 

That's an interesting point to underline, if you ever have someone else in mind, just tell me. Also, I wonder what you thought of the screenshots this time, it was a matter of four days. These people, these dialogues... I'm especially proud of the jugglers from the fourth pic. This psychic guy with the floating Pokeball was very fun to edit 😄

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Naw. I ain't mad. As soon as I read the name, I was upset at myself that the e and o were switched. xD Yea. The screenshots were nice. Felt like something big was happening. And I see them battling maybe once sometime near the end of the game. Stuff keeps coming up making Flannery unable to battle him. But when she's done with everything and is about to go onto Victory Road, he shows up and is like, "you know, way back when we 1st saw each other, we wanted to battle. I know there were a lot of stuff that you had to do to save Reborn and everything but before you go to Victory Road, why not finally have that battle with me right here right now." And I think she'd fit well for either Taka or Cal.

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You have the right to be proud d=====( ̄▽ ̄*)b I can tell you put a lot of work in it just by looking at the small details like the banners and jugglers,I was wondering if you will give Flannery a new look like Ash Ketchum getting new clothes everytime he went to another region (。・∀・)ノ.

 

Well I think shipping Flannery with Cal,Jacques,Taka and Cain might be possible. I don't know if Flannery will hold grudges like Victoria but I can tell if Cal redeem himself those two fire type specialist will get along well.

 

Jacques....Hmm....I don't know what kind of person he is ,maybe a nerd...?But since he is the first person to introduce Flannery to the Reborn region I bet they can get together but don't know how...like make Jacques tag along with Flannery on her journey,I mean since Luna is active and not er...ded he is basically off duty right (o′┏▽┓`o) 

 

Heck yah Best boy Cain i luv him (´▽`ʃ❤ƪ) I don't know how will react to being flirted with hopefully she doesn't get turn off by Cain's innuendo (○` 3′○) I hope that Flannery can set Cain straight haha get it?oh fak my life

 

TTAAKKKAA.....Best boy no.2 my cute Cinnamon roll why do you have to DIE ヽ(*。>Д<)o゜EP17 and 18 ruined me man*sob*I don't know which route you will go but hopefully Taka is alive in both route of your story...Just...don't know how Flannery will react if Taka died (っ °Д °;)っ

 

FERN DOES NOT DESERVE LOVE THAT SON OF A BIT*H i hate him soo...much 

 

If Flannery gets together with Samson then she has to deal with living in the circus and Terra...I hope they get along pppfffhh as if also Ciel and Samson used to date so that is going to be awkward we also get to see how much Ciel cares foe Samson in EP18 my heart it hurtsssa...

 

NO.Hardy belongs to Aya and Aya only Q-Jei!!!! don't ruin my OTP wahh!!! ヽ(*。>Д<)o゜

 

I guess FlanneryXDJ Archlight is good too but he definitely didn't get much screen time so their interaction is kinda scarce 

 

IDK about you,what do you think? which of these gentlemen get to steal Flannery's heart ;3 

 

 

 

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  On 8/26/2018 at 5:41 AM, Angelkitsune said:

I guess FlanneryXDJ Archlight is good too but he definitely didn't get much screen time so their interaction is kinda scarce 

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Well he can always make DJ Archlight a regular character. I mean that's what I did with Laura in mine. 😛 Hell. I even had her come BEFORE you actually like talk to her at the mansion.

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  On 8/26/2018 at 5:50 AM, J-Awesome_One said:

Well he can always make DJ Archlight a regular character. I mean that's what I did with Laura in mine. 😛 Hell. I even had her come BEFORE you actually like talk to her at the mansion.

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Oh yeah I guess I kinda forgot about that*facepalm* The power of the author can make even minor characters important ╰(*°▽°*)╯

also*squint* 'HE' I...didn't know Q-Jei is a boy I always though he is a girl whoops (*/ω\*)

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  On 8/26/2018 at 6:03 AM, Angelkitsune said:

Oh yeah I guess I kinda forgot about that*facepalm* The power of the author can make even minor characters important ╰(*°▽°*)╯

also*squint* 'HE' I...didn't know Q-Jei is a boy I always though he is a girl whoops (*/ω\*)

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Ohh yea. Uhh… I'm not sure the gender of Q-Jei. My mind just always goes to a person being a male if Idk what they are. Haha.

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  On 8/26/2018 at 6:03 AM, Angelkitsune said:

'HE' I...didn't know Q-Jei is a boy I always though he is a girl whoops (*/ω\*)

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Missed, I’m a boy 😄

I agree concerning the ability of the writers to adapt characters in different situations to better develop their background story and personality. It will be 11 episodes since I did it with Flannery, and it’s not over yet 😉 And don’t worry about FernXFlannery. When I said she will set fire to him, it will only happen in the literal sense of the word. Flannery is way too good for him.

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