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ALL RIGHT!!! Flannery is going to reborn tomorrow ヾ(≧▽≦*)o I wonder what is her first impression of Reborn like.Also Flannery and Winona BROTP d=====( ̄▽ ̄*)b

I bet that halfway through the game Winona finally found a reserve and come visit Flannary for a while ( •̀ ω •́ )✧

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  On 10/27/2018 at 7:15 AM, Angelkitsune said:

ALL RIGHT!!! Flannery is going to reborn tomorrow ヾ(≧▽≦*)o I wonder what is her first impression of Reborn like.Also Flannery and Winona BROTP d=====( ̄▽ ̄*)b

I bet that halfway through the game Winona finally found a reserve and come visit Flannary for a while ( •̀ ω •́ )✧

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No! Wish against that! That's usually when the best friend gets axed! Dx I'm not sure if that's really gonna happen but you know. Lol.

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Thank you all for your feedback! 😄 

Yes, Flannery risks to be a bit disillusioned once arrived in Reborn. Finding how she could keep in touch with Winona as well as getting a general agreement from the other Gym Leaders were probably the most difficult things to detail in this arc, especially if she struggles with separations. We will certainly continue to hear about what becomes of Winona further in the story, and the fact that she could go to Reborn later might be a possibility too. But for the moment, the story will essentially focus on Flannery and what will go on inside of her head once there. The verdict of the council is quite explicit in the end. Torkoal and Vulpix will be the two Pokemon who will accompany her when she'll leave Hoenn~

 

PS: I just noticed that we've reached the cap of 4k views despite the story has not even start in Reborn yet! This is really cheering, I appreciate the interest you've paid for the story until now 🙂

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Yeah, she did! And the arrival will be something really original as well. I'm glad to be done with the Pre-Reborn seasons. Now, serious things will begin! I particularly enjoyed myself when I made Shade's scene. It's like we'll still hear about Winona even in Reborn. In fact, I can possibly have some plans for her too 😉

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I've almost finished reading. It feels like things will be a lot faster now that she is in , or rather on, the way to Reborn. Also, as Hoenn is now outta the way, editing will probably be less tiring.

 

A quick question: which starter will Flannery choose/obtain?

 

If it is Fire, she should probably go for something like Torchic, Chimchar, or Fenniken. She won't probably have Litten for a Fire type with Dark typing, as she will get a Houndour (It's a must!).

 

If it is any other type, I've got no idea as of now. For, she won't be making the mistake of having a full Fire team 🤣 it is not so predictable. Though, it is highly likely for her to think of having different types, other than just Fire.

 

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Alright! Finally the prologue is over now we can get on with the story φ(゜▽゜*)♪ kinda surprised that Shade got an early cameo in there but I bet he enjoys freaking people out ψ(`∇´)ψ also I'm curious how Ame can save two person at the same time...hopefully Jacques will not die that early (っ °Д °;)っ sorry for the late reply ⊙﹏⊙∥

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@Angelkitsune I figured it out. It is probably gonna be like this that Ame saves Flannery, then Jacques saves Audine (Auduin? Audino? I'm not sure, check it in @Q-Jei 's status updates; the latest one, I think) or vice versa.

 

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This is so heartwarming to see all your messages of concern about Jacques's fate, thank you all! And that's justified, something terrible will actually happen during the train trip, and it will heavily affect more than one character of the story. I can't tell you more about this, cause it's precisely the fact of not knowing all the details of this accident which keeps the surprise real. Concerning Flannery's travelling companions, I already slept some indications in the chapter number 13, but it's also planned that she will get a starter in the Grand Hall. A poll has been opened to decide who would be the choosen one a few months ago, you can check this thread if you're interested. Otherwise, this story being based on a monorun, all the members of Flannery's team will have Fire Type. It's not entitled 'The Tale of a Firehead' for nothing 😉 (Which means that I'll have to defeat Amaria with a full fire team later as well, pray for me ಠ益ಠ)

 

  On 1/2/2019 at 4:29 PM, Angelkitsune said:

I'm curious how Ame can save two person at the same time...

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You got a point there. Ame can't throw two people through the window that easily. Obviously, things will happen in an unpredictable way this time. In fact, it's quite entertaining for me to see people imagining various scenarios about this accident at Grandview Station. And you don't have to complex on a late reply, being more or less easy-going myself, that's not a problem at all 🙂

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  On 1/3/2019 at 6:53 PM, Q-Jei said:

This is so heartwarming to see all your messages of concern about Jacques's fate, thank you all! And that's justified, something terrible will actually happen during the train trip, and it will heavily affect more than one character of the story. I can't tell you more about this, cause it's precisely the fact of not knowing all the details of this accident which keeps the surprise real. Concerning Flannery's travelling companions, I already slept some indications in the chapter number 13, but it's also planned that she will get a starter in the Grand Hall. A poll has been opened to decide who would be the choosen one a few months ago, you can check this thread if you're interested. Otherwise, this story being based on a monorun, all the members of Flannery's team will have Fire Type. It's not entitled 'The Tale of a Firehead' for nothing 😉 (Which means that I'll have to defeat Amaria with a full fire team later as well, pray for me ಠ益ಠ)

  On 1/3/2019 at 6:53 PM, Q-Jei said:
On 1/2/2019 at 10:29 PM, Angelkitsune said:

I'm curious how Ame can save two person at the same time...

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You got a point there. Ame can't throw two people through the window that easily. Obviously, things will happen in an unpredictable way this time. In fact, it's quite entertaining for me to see people imagining various scenarios about this accident at Grandview Station. And you don't have to complex on a late reply, being more or less easy-going myself, that's not a problem at all 🙂

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Good Luck against Amaria! Just, don't screw up too bad.

 

Also, if Ame was not able to/can not save two people together, was my guess correct?

  On 1/3/2019 at 5:27 AM, Lost Swordsman said:

@Angelkitsune I figured it out. It is probably gonna be like this that Ame saves Flannery, then Jacques saves Audine (Auduin? Audino? I'm not sure, check it in @Q-Jei 's status updates; the latest one, I think) or vice versa.

 

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Another thing, you had mention in the thread that there is going to be a Grand Hall event or something. Does it mean that Flannery/'s Torkoal will be in the secret room to interrogate the Team Meteor Grunt Bomber/Team Meteor Bomber Grunt who blew up the station using the train?

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  On 1/5/2019 at 4:42 AM, Lost Swordsman said:

Also, if Ame was not able to/can not save two people together, was my guess correct?

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Nice try, but what will happen in the future shall be quite different. The only thing I can reveal about the next chapter is this:

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Regarding the special event in the Grand Hall, there's nothing about Flannery's Torkoal torturing the Meteor Grunt. The interrogation will be done with a different Torkoal, the one of the Grand Hall we all see when we leave the said-place for the first time. Let's just say the train accident may not be the only mishap encountered by Ame and her staff once arrived.

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Love how smoothly you introduced the Reborn Gym leaders and those pics are 10/10!

Would comment of Jacques' fate, but I smell something and prefer to wait until the story unravels.

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Wow I haven't comment on any of these stories for so long but anyway THIS IS A GGGREAATT chapter!!!!!! I love how this chapter has 1/3 of Flannery and Jacques flirting , 1/3 of angst and 1/3 of other scenes, and OH MY GOD the edits....it is very detailed and well done, I can even see the expression on their faces. I also love how you gave some early cameos to the gym leaders. So sad that Flannery can't save everyone on the train though Alice....JACQUESSSSS WWHHYYYY!!!!????!?!?!?! thank you for the Awesome chapter Q-Jei.

 

Ps:did Jacques met Hardy and Fern in the Onyx Trainer School or did he enroll in a different year. Also Luna is confirm 18,the same age as Bennette and Laura...just so you know.

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  On 3/16/2019 at 8:31 PM, Angelkitsune said:

Wow I haven't comment on any of these stories for so long but anyway THIS IS A GGGREAATT chapter!!!!!! I love how this chapter has 1/3 of Flannery and Jacques flirting , 1/3 of angst and 1/3 of other scenes, and OH MY GOD the edits....it is very detailed and well done, I can even see the expression on their faces. I also love how you gave some early cameos to the gym leaders. So sad that Flannery can't save everyone on the train though Alice....JACQUESSSSS WWHHYYYY!!!!????!?!?!?! thank you for the Awesome chapter Q-Jei.

 

Ps:did Jacques met Hardy and Fern in the Onyx Trainer School or did he enroll in a different year. Also Luna is confirm 18,the same age as Bennette and Laura...just so you know.

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  On 3/16/2019 at 8:37 PM, Candy said:

if you said Luna was 15 because I made her 15 in my story and thus misinformed you, then my apologies owo

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Ehh. Not that big of a difference. I mean she kind of does look around 15 anyways. Also, I do not believe that Jacques is dead! I think it's too soon for him to be dead.

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Wohow! So many warmly comments! Thank you all for the feedbacks 😄 I would be glad to exchange more about the main points of this chapter with you.

 

  On 3/16/2019 at 5:03 PM, Candy said:

Love how smoothly you introduced the Reborn Gym leaders and those pics are 10/10!

Would comment of Jacques' fate, but I smell something and prefer to wait until the story unravels.

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Thank you Candysama 😉 

Yeah, I wanted to add more depth to the Gym Leaders before Flannery meet them and gave her a foretaste of what's awaiting her. To be honest, Julia's picture is the one I'm the most proud of. As for maboi Jacques, we know him better as well. But his fate is kind of darkened now. I like to compare his situation to Aladdin's current status. We have no proof he's alive, but we have no proof he's dead either. Everything will be clearer once the next episode will arrive. It's probably too soon to talk about what's left of him for the moment, so you're right! But still, I feel bad for him. His life was about to get better until the accident happened 😥

 

  On 3/16/2019 at 7:09 PM, J-Awesome_One said:

Well... Was not expecting all of that. This is probably my favorite episode so far. Was not expecting the very last picture though. Damn. That's gruesome. Haha.

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Glad you enjoyed it. As Jacques said, Flannery's Pokemon have ended up proving their loyality toward their mistress more than they ever did. And I kinda understand your point of view about the final picture. Sometimes, I wonder if I didn't go too far with gruesomeness with this one. But I don't know why... I regret nothing ^~^ Btw, Vero never looked that hotter.

 

  On 3/16/2019 at 8:31 PM, Angelkitsune said:

Wow I haven't comment on any of these stories for so long but anyway THIS IS A GGGREAATT chapter!!!!!! I love how this chapter has 1/3 of Flannery and Jacques flirting , 1/3 of angst and 1/3 of other scenes, and OH MY GOD the edits....it is very detailed and well done, I can even see the expression on their faces. I also love how you gave some early cameos to the gym leaders. So sad that Flannery can't save everyone on the train though Alice....JACQUESSSSS WWHHYYYY!!!!????!?!?!?! thank you for the Awesome chapter Q-Jei.

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Looks like I achieved my goal 😄 And it's not over yet! Indeed, Jacques had feelings for Flannery, and she also kinda appreciated his company. Sharing their own stories, fears, expectations and supporting each other was a way to kill some time during the train ride (And I'm not talking about sleeping!) I also wished to focus on their states of mind by making it visible enough on the pictures. I thought playing with characters psychology was a way to keep them attractive, and make the reader more attached to them. And I share your sorrow about Alice and the others. Jacques premonition came true in the end 😥

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Good news! Everything is done with the content of the next episode! This one will come out soon, very soon. But before to upload it, I would like to precise something about two points mentionned in the last comments.

 

Point N°1: Luna's Age

I referred to this page when I was quoting the age of Luna.

During my writing sessions, I assumed that she might be around the same age as Charlotte. In her mid teens. Then, the age of Reborn characters has already been discussed and debated several times, so I would like to apologize if this detail has irritated someone. Anyway, I wanted to find a subject of discussion to make Jacques and Flannery killing some time, and in this story, Flannery was introduced to Pokemon battles at a very young age with her grandfather. Therefore, making some subtle comparisons with the age of the other Gym Leaders was something I wanted to try, so she could get impressed by how skilled the new generation is on Reborn lands 😄

 

Point N°2: Jacques' associates in Onyx Trainers' School

This question deserved more attention from my part (Sorry for the late reply @Angelkitsune 🙏)

 

Actually, this was already precise earlier, and there is one thing to know about Jacques' relationship in Onyx Trainers' School: he was a recluse. Also, if you look carefully, you can notice that there was only one bed in his room, which means that he was all alone in the same working space for two years, only animated by his desire of knowledge and experience grinding. All this time, Jacques felt forced to become a sort of better version of himself to flee what he was in his past. In fact, he has always preferred to see himself more as a spectator of his previous life than as the main actor. Additionally, it would appear that Jacques has started his formation right after the end of Hardy and Fern's study period. At this moment, there already were lots of graduates from this school who were then nominated Gym Leader and they all turned into popular figures of the region later. All this explains why in spite of his talent, Jacques has only received the title of Reserve Gym Leader. To conclude, the only person we know who had heard the most about Jacques is clearly Florinia since she was like the main teacher for almost all the students of the school, Jacques included. Hopefully, Flannery can get some extra info about him thanks to her in the future...

 

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well tbf I decided to totally ignore the canon ages and made Kiki an old woman, Luna also around 15, and maybe others who I don't recall at this moment 😛

it's fanfiction, you're already changing a lot of the plot of Ame's story so like, age shouldn't be a huge deal as long as it's not lewding minors uwu

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