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Bienvenidos partner. Could you just give a reaction to King D's, Josh's, and my own character? I suggest reading throughout the forum, because you get a more complete picture of each of our characters.

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Alright ^^

I didn't want to make my post bigger than it already was

(Since I have the tendency of making gigantic posts)

>.>

Brb to read your guy's posts again.

Edit~

Josh: "Can you not be sarcastic douche for ONE day? Honestly, are gonna catch me in a BITCHY mood eventually..." Color is not too fond of Josh because of his sarcastic nature. She is not a fan of sarcastic people, and most of them that she has ran into has either A. Pissed her off even more or B. Pissed her Raichu off even more. However, his somewhat impulsive behavior makes him somewhat tolerable in her eyes, so she can see them having a mutual friendship at least.

Dwayne: (If she was an antihero) Cute annnnnddd delicious~ You remind me of someone. You know that guy that always play with his silly rock Pokemon? Brock was it? It doesn't matter. Too bad you're part of the good guys. But either way handsome, you got my attention, let's see if I can make you dance!~" After running into Dwayne, Color can see herself having an on and off flirtatious roundabout with the trainer. Even though his hero attitude can get quite irritating, and probably even liking him would end in a tragedy, that doesn't mean battling him wouldn't be exciting! Besides, who want to tease him into a flustered, babbling idiot?

Rose: "Can I admit something? You remind me a lot like of my mother. N-No, not saying that is a bad thing! I'm just saying...eh...you are one of the very few people where I can be calm around, y'know? Ah, you probably don't like being around me because I'm all loud and shit, but I'm telling the truth. Don't mention this to anyone else!! Okay?" Color was quick to pick on the fact that Rose doesn't like to be around females much, but that didn't stop Color from meeting her. Because she reminds her a lot of her mother (both a quiet and reserved woman), she is a lot more docile around her than anyone else. She is quite interesting to the Jester, and even though she may not talk much around her, Color honestly wants to get to know her more and hopefully create a friendly bond.

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Dwayne: (If she was an antihero) Cute annnnnddd delicious~ You remind me of someone. You know that guy that always play with his silly rock Pokemon? Brock was it? It doesn't matter. Too bad you're part of the good guys. But either way handsome, you got my attention, let's see if I can make you dance!~" After running into Dwayne, Color can see herself having an on and off flirtatious roundabout with the trainer. Even though his hero attitude can get quite irritating, and probably even liking him would end in a tragedy, that doesn't mean battling him wouldn't be exciting! Besides, who want to tease him into a flustered, babbling idiot?

Rose: "Can I admit something? You remind me a lot like of my mother. N-No, not saying that is a bad thing! I'm just saying...eh...you are one of the very few people where I can be calm around, y'know? Ah, you probably don't like being around me because I'm all loud and shit, but I'm telling the truth. Don't mention this to anyone else!! Okay?" Color was quick to pick on the fact that Rose doesn't like to be around females much, but that didn't stop Color from meeting her. Because she reminds her a lot of her mother (both a quiet and reserved woman), she is a lot more docile around her than anyone else. She is quite interesting to the Jester, and even though she may not talk much around her, Color honestly wants to get to know her more and hopefully create a friendly bond.

ok 2 notes here

1. rose was right every character in this story is her best friend.... lol

2. what she said abouit me worries more specificly the end about turning me int o a blabbering idiot it reminds me of a fear i had but didnt' want to adress because i didnt' wanna be a nuesence... well i hope i'm not a nuecense for giving josh more crap to read but josh.. please don't turn me into a brock (babbling idiot) yes i said i wanted my character to be a flirt but there is a differeance between a flirt and a brock.... do u get what i'm saying? i'm a flirt with common sense...... so yeah..... again sorry ifi 'm being to much of a bother but just trying to make sure reading this doesn't become a nightmare to me x.x sorry and thanks for taking your time to read my complaints

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To answer your first post:

I didn't mean to offend lolz,

I wasn't trying to have my character think that you and Brock acted the same (because Brock is pretty out there when it comes to flirting), but it was merely a tease and her desiring to see your character act the same way as Brock does.

Second:

Well, you don't HAVE to call me that.

Jester or Color works for me.

Jester is merely a secondary name.

It is only because my trainer title is The Evolutionary Jester, and I'm pretty sure no one wants to say that over and over again, so I just shortened it up to Jester.

Again, it's no offense to me. :3

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I'm a fanfic junkie, so whenever you are set with your writing I call dibs on reading it XD

Name: Color (yup this is practically my character for any and all pokemon fanfics/rp)

Age: 19

Gender: Female

Hometown: Three Island (from the Sevii Islands in FireRed/LeafGreen)

Family: Seven older brothers along with her Ma and Pa.

Appearance: She stands only a measly 4'9'', but her white combat boots boosts her up to about 5 feet exactly. She has black spiky and often gelled, should length hair. Her bangs are long enough to hang over her eyes, so most of the time her audience does not know what color her eyes are. However, they are indeed hazel. Overall, she is a bit thin, but she does carry slight curves around her waist. Her signature outfit consists of a fairly Victorian-looking dress with a bit of modern flair. The waist portion consists of corset, while the ends of the dress consists of small white frails and a large red bow in the back of her dress. Her hands consist of black fingerless gloves.

Personality: Because of being a performer stemming from the Sevii Isles, Color is very bold, blunt, and quick-tempered for her age. While most think she is childish for carrying such a personality, she sees it as refreshing. While her hot-hotheadedness can often lead to foul language on her part, Color is quite friendly to be around. She has no problem going through large lengths to cheer both Pokemon and people up. However, with all the attention that she used to get from her previous performances as an acrobatic Color is also VERY flirtatious. She will not hesitate to make a man trail after her. In fact, she will most likely hit on a guy first before he has a chance to even speak about her. Her passionate and fiery attitude does have some flaws. With her being able to get angry so quickly she can get emotional very quickly, diving into useless battles without a bat of an eyelash. Her childish nature also carries a slight submissive nature (which probably explains her attraction to leaders and co-leaders of evil organizations). Someone who is quite intelligent will have no problem manipulating and directing Color's tempers to their own cause.

Hobbies: Battling, Climbing trees, Swimming, Doing acrobatic stunts and performances for others, Flirting, Socializing

Habits: Color, when bored, often battles with her own Pokemon in order to keep up with her athletic abilities. When is doing that she usually runs off to, yup you got it, find the next guy to hook up with.

Team(put what your full team will be here no legendarys please and only one shiny per person):

Quilava (Crest)- Received as her Starter. Often being seen carried in Color's arms. He is very spoiled, and will not battle unless a Pokemon aggravates him, or he is interested in the battle. He does listen to Color's every command...even though he does pout.

Wobbufett (Shield)- Caught in a hidden cave. A very carefree Pokemon that bounds into battle without a worry. He acts like a punching bag for Raila.

Raichu (Raila)- Found abandoned near Lt. Surge's gym. A very violent and hot-headed mouse just like its owner. When her owner becomes angry her electric power has a tendency to double. She is very cocky and loves to battle opponents tougher than her. When she is not participating in Color's performances. she often uses Shield as a punch bag to work on her Attack power.

Venusaur (Tank)- Caught deep within a forest where the evolutionary ceremonies of Bulbasaur and Ivysaur take place. A recently evolved Venusaur that has a sadist nature to its battling. He will not hesitant to watch his opponent suffer before taking it down completely. His favorite move is to bind his victim with his vine and strangle them until either Color or its trainer tells him to stop. However, Tank is a complete sweetheart towards Color and always demands either a hug or even a small cuddling session from his trainer.

Magikarp (Kopo)- Caught on one of the water routes with an old rod. Being one of the few Magikarps that can actually fight, Kopo is quite docile in nature. No one is really sure why Color caught this Magikarp.

Raphael (Smeargle)- Given to Color by one of Whitney's friends. Probably the friendliest out of all of Color's Pokemon. Being the third Pokemon to help out with Color's performances, Raphael loves to meet new people and Pokemon alike. He often likes to stick his nose where it doesn't belong which often requires either Color or one of his other Poke friends to help him out. Even though his curious and gullible nature often leads him into trouble, Raphael is loyal to his trainer nonetheless. He is often paired with Kopo to increase her own battle peformance, but is very willing to help his other friends out too. Raphael is also used often to get Color at of dire situations ie. being surrounded by goons or wild Pokemon

Honestly, you can treat her however you want.

She could be an antihero, part of the evil team you're using (through manipulation of her emotions of course, or she can just be like a supporting characters that frequently pops up. She's yours to command and control~

Are you going to do move combo's for your Pokemon? We have some examples in the former pages.

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I just thought of a thing that's with combos, double battle combos, for when/if there's a double battle, maybe with two of our own pokemon or with one from two different people.

Like these example

Steaming Rocks: Cradily shoots both opponents pokemon with a rock slide as houndour burns them with flamethrower.

Cold Heat: Flamethrower by houndour covered in a blizzard by seadra

or, using one of color's pokemon, for example (i hope you don't mind)

Shocking Rocks: Cradily uses rock slide as raichu adds some electricity in them as they fall

I just thought of this and thought it was worth putting up.

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I was thinking more of Person's idea.

It makes more sense to me.

I can understand a single Pokemon having the ability to combine its moves in a creative fashion, but t I've only seen that with like contests, not the actually battling.

I'm sure all the Pokemon have that potential, but its not common for the trainer to be aware of it.

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I was thinking more of Person's idea.

It makes more sense to me.

I can understand a single Pokemon having the ability to combine its moves in a creative fashion, but t I've only seen that with like contests, not the actually battling.

I'm sure all the Pokemon have that potential, but its not common for the trainer to be aware of it.

actually move combinations have been used in battling before ash uses combination moves in battle on occasion but your right they are mostly found in contests witch is hwy i gave my character them to begin with my character is a past sinoh champion there are pokemon contest in sinoh that plus the fact that i have a unique personality and i'm supposed to bea bigshot past champion are why my character thinks up these move combinations oh and who's person? lol

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welcome color you name deferentially matches you character loud in a good way i think that your character will been fun to write( I smell a magikarp battle) especially with king d's character heheheh.

and thank you guys for asking question that i would normally ask it saves me from having to wait so long just for my computer will load the pages correctly so i can post things.

so about the only thing i would need would be what your teams final move sets will be or most common moves used for them.(makes the looking things up slightly less over welling to my brain),

i wounder how many people would get mad if i killed there character in the story.

and i really should have a stopping point for when i stop accepting characters if i keep getting them at the rate i have been it my cause a brain over load or something hmmm i will think on that.

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Here's what I want my teams final moveset to be, also my mons not fully evolved will evolve at some point hopefully

Cradily- Rock Slide, Giga Drain, Recover, Return

Kingdra- Blizzard, Surf, Waterfall, Dragonbreath

Wobbuffet- Counter, Mirror Coat, Safeguard, Charm

Bellossom- Sleep Powder, Giga Drain, Attract, Sunny Day

Houndoom- Flamethrower, Dark Pulse, Solarbeam, Shadow Ball

Egg-> arceuslol Onix-> Steelix- Autotomize, Dig, Iron Tail, Rock Blast

Could I also have a hm slave in box but sometimes i use it, if we hms to get to places like in the games

Kingler- Cut, Strength, Rock Smash, Crabhammer

Also for the killing characters thing, I would hope the character dies for a good reason instead of something like X fell down a hole and died lol but i swear if you kill my character i will complain nonstop until shes back from the dead.

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has i said in a really early post hm's are really not going to be in the story because of logic why does a pokemon need a machine to teach it how to cut things or break rocks and the like so its more like the anime in that since.

and the killing a character would be for a good reason though falling down a hole and dieing is funny as hell. I mainly even though of it because of something that color said that if there was something between her's and King D's characters it would probably end tragic. So its just my brain going to Shakespeare and tragic and Shakespeare plus tragic means people die.

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Bisharp: Sucker Punch, Night Slash, Metal Burst, Dark Pulse.

Honchkrow: Brave Bird, Sucker Punch, Night Slash, Dark Pulse.

Tyranitar: Stone Edge, Earthquake, Dark Pulse, Fire Blast

Houndoom: Crunch, Fire Blast, Toxic, Dark Pulse

Sneasel: Double Team, Night Slash, Icy Wind, Ice Shard

Gengar: Thunder, Shadow Ball, Psychic, Dark Pulse.

Wow 5 out of 6 of my Pokes have Dark Pulse 0-0.

Maybe....I could die? Just don't let me die in a funny way.

Aaand another opinion, make my former sister with a random name or w/e, could add to the plot for me being the potential dead person

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Well, when I meant by tragedy I meant that because of Color's promiscuous nature she probably would not stay with Dwayne for long. However, you could use them in a Shakespearean type a way. Probably not as extreme as Romeo and Juliet, but probably being heavily injured is cool with me. Anyways on to the movesets~ These are going to be weird so forgive me in advance XD I'll explain.

Crest (Quilava)- Flamethrower, Swift, Roar, Toxic

Raila (Raichu) - Wish, Protect, Volt Tackle, Reversal

Shield (Wobbufett) Counter, Mirror Coat, Mimic, and Destiny Bond (About the Mimic.There was a Wobbufett back when G/S/C were released and they actually gave out a Wobbufett with Mimic. I still have this Wobbu to this day with this same moveset so I thought it was appropriate xP

Tank (Venusaur)- Swords Dance, Vine Whip, Toxic, Hidden Power Fire

Kopo (Magikarp)- Flail, Bounce, Reversal, Hydro Pump (Another event set. Gamefreak had also released both a Hydro Pump Karp a few months back and a Reversal Karp back when Gold, Silver, and Crystal were released at the time. Yea, I wanted to have a Magikarp with a slight fighting spirit so I had bred those two event pokes, which came out to be a Karp with both Reversal and Hydro Pump XD This fishy is amazing <3)

Raphael (Smeargle): Substitute, Baton Pass, Spore, Bulk Up

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Final Move Sets (You can just forget about combos for me. They really do nothing to help me) I tend to go for move diversity

Blastoise- Flash Cannon, Dragon Tail, Focus Blast, Hydro Cannon

Pidgeot- Twister, Hurricane, U-Turn, Toxic

Alakazam- Psychic, Shadow Ball, Focus Blast, Charge Beam

Arcanine- Extremespeed, Aerial Ace, Fire Blast, Thunder Fang

Gengar- Shadow Ball, Dark Pulse, Thunderbolt, Poison Jab

Persian- Power Gem, Fake Out, Night Slash, Dig

Pokémon in Rotation's Move Sets

Primeape- Cross Chop, Earthquake, Overheat, Acrobatics

Electabuzz- Thunder Punch, Fire Punch, Ice Punch, and Dynamic Punch

Vileplume- Razor Leaf, Sludge Bomb, Drain Punch, Body Slam

Marowak- Bone Club, Ice Beam, Flamethrower, Rock Slide

Omastar- Bite, Ancientpower, Blizzard, Hydro Pump

Former Pokémon's Move Sets (traded away, released, etc)

Butterfree- Psybeam, Bug Buzz, Electroweb, Air Cutter

Just with my character's health, I'm pretty sure it'll be inevitable I get injured pretty badly at some point in time. Death isn't really my favorite idea, but I trust your judgment Josh, so if I die... C'est la vie.

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Sorry must have forgotten the hm thing, but instead of Kingler Kiyoko will use Togekiss to fly to and fly back from hoenn.

Moveset

Togekiss- Fly, Softboiled, Heal Bell, Fire Blast

And the falling down a hole or something similar to that, maybe characters can assume that X character fell and died but later it's relieved that the character is still alive but is in bad condition or some one/pokemon saved said character.

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If we're doing movesets now then might as well

Umbreon- Foul Play

Protect

Toxic

Confuse Ray

Eelektross-Thunderbolt

Flamethrower

Drain Punch

Thunder Wave (possible change to aqua tail if I wanna change interrogation combo as only thunderbolt and flamethrower)

Starmie- Surf

Thunderbolt

Ice Beam

Psychic

Dragonite-Dragon Dance

Fire Punch

Extremespeed

Outrage

Snorlax- Body Slam

Earthquake

Rest

Curse

Ninetales (drought)-Fire Blast

Solar Beam

Nasty Plot

Hypnosis

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If we're doing movesets now then might as well

Umbreon- Foul Play

Protect

Toxic

Confuse Ray

Eelektross-Thunderbolt

Flamethrower

Drain Punch

Thunder Wave (possible change to aqua tail if I wanna change interrogation combo as only thunderbolt and flamethrower)

Starmie- Surf

Thunderbolt

Ice Beam

Psychic

Dragonite-Dragon Dance

Fire Punch

Extremespeed

Outrage

Snorlax- Body Slam

Earthquake

Rest

Curse

Ninetales (drought)-Fire Blast

Solar Beam

Nasty Plot

Hypnosis

dude.... this is a story... not the meta game >.>

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King, Lunar has the full right to have whatever movesets he wants.

Just because its a character going into a fic doesn't mean the movesets should be straight out brute force either.

Just saying.

Not meaning to be rude.

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