Gabriel1 Posted July 4, 2019 Share Posted July 4, 2019 Alright, around a week ago, I have posted here about how I wanted to make a Reborn fic, and I have decided to push it a bit further. Up until now, I have completed 6 chapters and I'm on the way to complete the seventh, although I will only publish the chapters weekly or bi-weekly. So, here it is, my very first fic: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/13328342/1/Pokémon-Reborn-the-novelisation Just like before, since this is my first publicly published story, I would love it if you could give me some feedback about how my writing has made your day, or how it sucks, or how I could make it better. If a member of the staff sees this, I would very much appreciate your opinion on my handling of the wonderful world and characters that you have created. If you end up reading this post, then I wish you a good day. Edit: If you want to get updates regarding the advancement of the story, then you can follow this thread, I'll post updates when I post chapters. 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gabriel1 Posted July 6, 2019 Author Share Posted July 6, 2019 Update: 8 chapters are now public! They mainly focus aroud Vero, but the other MCs are going to have their turn in the timelight too! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gabriel1 Posted July 8, 2019 Author Share Posted July 8, 2019 Quick update Pokémon Reborn: the novelisation, chapter 9 has aired. Some focus off of Vero for the time being. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiny_Orion Posted July 9, 2019 Share Posted July 9, 2019 He dude this is just a little nitpick on the title but Novelization has a Z not an S. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gabriel1 Posted July 9, 2019 Author Share Posted July 9, 2019 47 minutes ago, Shiny_umbreonDestiny said: He dude this is just a little nitpick on the title but Novelization has a Z not an S. I have just checked, both with 's' and 'z' are acceptable, but the z is more often used. I will change it, thanks for bringing it to my attention! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shiny_Orion Posted July 9, 2019 Share Posted July 9, 2019 I just wanted to get that out of my chest. I didn't know that both are acceptable. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gabriel1 Posted July 9, 2019 Author Share Posted July 9, 2019 Chapter 10 is now out! Alice and Ari: The Jasper Ward Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gabriel1 Posted July 10, 2019 Author Share Posted July 10, 2019 Update: Chapter 11 is out! Vero: First trial, where the young trainer has to fight his first gym battle. Up next, the introduction of Decibel. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gabriel1 Posted July 10, 2019 Author Share Posted July 10, 2019 Alright, I didn't think I would make it this quickly, but the 12th chapter is out. Decibel: The cavalry is here! Seriously, I think Decibel has been my favorite character to write as of now. What do you think? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gabriel1 Posted July 13, 2019 Author Share Posted July 13, 2019 Alright, this one took some more time, but chapter 13 is out. From now on, I will slow down a little bit, so I do not stress myself out for litterrally nothing. Anyway, to those who will see this, have a good read! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cadmium48 Posted July 13, 2019 Share Posted July 13, 2019 I really enjoy this fic! Decibel is the best. How did you decide on what genders to make Ari and Decibel, given that they're the non-binary options? 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gabriel1 Posted July 13, 2019 Author Share Posted July 13, 2019 38 minutes ago, Cadmium48 said: I really enjoy this fic! Decibel is the best. How did you decide on what genders to make Ari and Decibel, given that they're the non-binary options? That, my friend, is an excellent question! For Decibel, I will keep referring to them with non-gendered pronouns. Part of their character is the mystery they have around them, and keeping their gender a secret will add to that. As for Ari, I made something a bit different. I do not intend on directly stating it, but I have let some hints in the story that she represents a different branch of the LGBTQ+ than Decibel. I felt that it would be better to make the two different in this regard. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gabriel1 Posted July 16, 2019 Author Share Posted July 16, 2019 Update, Chapter 14 is out! Vero and Lucia: The slums (part 2) So, I originally intended to post it yesterday, but I've somehow become sick in the middle of the summer. Because of this, I am also unsure that the second half of the chapter actually has the same quality as the first. If you remark a drop, please let me know. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gabriel1 Posted July 19, 2019 Author Share Posted July 19, 2019 Update: Chapter 15 is out! Shit hits the fan at the Jasper Ward. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gabriel1 Posted July 22, 2019 Author Share Posted July 22, 2019 Update: Chapter 16 is out! Vero and Lucia: The slums (part 3) I know I've said it before, but there may be more time between updates in the future, but never more than a week. And also, like before, don't hesitate to give feedback! Constructive criticism and general appreciation are both good to recieve and help me in honing my writing skills. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gabriel1 Posted July 26, 2019 Author Share Posted July 26, 2019 Update: Chapter 17 is now out! Alice and Decibel: Striking Back Stuff continues to go down at Jasper, now that the trainers are trying to find what is causing these plants to attack everyone who played the game would know, but whatever. I have tried to include some further characterisation for both main characters here, I hope it feels natural. Once again, feedback is extremely scarce, so any you can give would be welcome. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gabriel1 Posted July 31, 2019 Author Share Posted July 31, 2019 Update: Chapter 18 is out! Lucia: The Coral Ward If you're reading this, or the new chapters while you're at it, and you have any kind of constructive feedback to give, then please tell me. It's been weeks without someone telling me anything and I am beginning to worry that my quality of writing is dropping. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gabriel1 Posted August 1, 2019 Author Share Posted August 1, 2019 Update: Chapter 1 has been rewritten! Honestly, I thought that the first chapter had some awkward dialogue and description, so I replaced it. Hope it is better. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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